I am loving these alpha males up in here.  Jamar has laid claim on his stuff once again

I wonder if her is strong enough to keep her this time around.

Val and Kelley were hot to death and he will be staking claim on that verbally I suspect like his brother with brandy and Jamar with Serena

Very, very well written. ALL of these love stories are beautiful, but I get what you're saying about the much-needed positive portrayal. Please update soon.

It's been a long time since I've reviewed...not because I've lost interest...I've been greedily consuming every update as you put them up...just haven't had much time to review...but didn't want you to think that you had lost my interest...quite the contrary...I love this story!!!

Well, well, well, it seems that Jamaica's living up to its name as being the 'Isle of Love'...Maks and Brandy...Kelly and Val...now Serena and Jamar...hmmm, wonder what Serena's response would have been to him had she not been so worn out and fell asleep...I really like them together...but it was still rank what Serena did to her girl, Kelly...she should have been upfront with her...but at least she's shown remorse...she just let her heart get in the way of her common sense and courtesy...

Not only can I not wait for when Brandy and Maks return to the States...wonder also what the future holds for these fledgling couples of Kelly and Val...Serena and Jamar...

Keep of the great work...thanks for sharing!!!