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Title: Chapter 26 I Apologize

I love your story very much! Please update soon!!

Reviewer: Juliet Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/04/11 04:26 am

Title: Chapter 26 I Apologize

Thanks so much for this story i love the way its unfolding between our main characters,i love the fact that we have finally gotten to the dating show part and cant wait to see how it turns out..thanks again,i love your work..pretty,pretty please can we have another installment soon like today..

Reviewer: stacyj Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23/03/11 05:06 am

Title: Chapter 26 I Apologize

Please update soon! Thanks in advance!

Reviewer: Kay Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/03/11 08:07 am

Title: Chapter 26 I Apologize

Nakia, TY much for this update.  I do hope that you update Friday or even tomorrow.  I love love love this story and all the pairings. 

Reviewer: qsmommy05 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17/03/11 01:37 am

Title: Chapter 26 I Apologize

are you sure Brandy and Maks were seen after this season rehearsals or was it after their own rehearsals?

Author's Response: TMZ reported it on last Friday. I don't think they would bring up a past sighting. The report was not saying they were romantically linked, just that the good friends were together after Maks's rehearsals with now DWTS partner Kristie Alley.

Reviewer: Marissa Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/03/11 09:57 pm

Title: Chapter 26 I Apologize

Girl, this chapter is hot! Nothing like some steamy sex to get over being angry. Very good read!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/03/11 07:28 am

Title: Chapter 26 I Apologize

Aw, he came back to apologize..too bad the chapter ended there.  I love Val and Kelly...Val fell in love quickly.  Short but okay chapter.

Also where did your hear/read that they've been spotted together after his dance rehearsals?  I haven't heard that at all.



Author's Response:

I don't know if you have ever written a story before? However, there are times when you want to build up the story and not give everything all at once. This is not a book, where as you can read continously until you find out the ending.

Val has always had a crush on Kelly, and sometimes the affairs of the heart differ for each person. Love is something that happens to you, and you can't help it when it does happen.

I do realize that everyone will not like my version of my story, therefore I will remain true to myself and my vision of creativity.

Sorry if you felt it was just okay and that you only gave me three 3 stars for the chapter, but in life we can't always get what we want.

I saw it on TMZ that they were spotted together, and that they also attended a charity event together. Also on both of there twitter accounts they have pics of two seperate times where they were together. One when they hung out with Cheryl Burke (who was not in the pic with them) and another time when they posed together, because they had on different clothing.

I will never post anything that I did not see personally for myself or heard for myself. I simpilly reported the info, because so many of us saw a strong chemistry btw the two and we are hopeful that there could be something deeper for the both of them.

I Sorry to disappoint you, but I do hope you will continue to R&R.

 

 

Reviewer: R. Anonymous starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/03/11 06:31 am

Title: Chapter 26 I Apologize

Wow...Kelly and Val are scorching...hmmm, those Chermkovskiy men...makes me want one...yum, yum...lol...Val has already dropped the L-bomb...I hope Kel gives herself a chance to return the feeling...

Loved how Kelly handled Serena...glad she differientiated between not liking her ACTIONS...though she still has much love in her heart for her girl...but Serena needed to be checked and just grow the heck up...sometimes...one's actions have consequences and there are no easy fixes with a simple "I'm sorry"...I hope Serena honors Kelly's request of giving her space because if she doesn't...she stands a good chance of losing that friendship and rightly so...she needs to back off for now...absolving one's guilt at the expense of your friend's feelings is never a good idea...

I'm still nervous about Brandy and Maks...seems they are at an impasse...Maks has made the first overture to repair the damage...I hope Ms. Brandy doesn't fly off the handle and actually talks to him this time and see if they can resolve this situation maturely...like adults...

Good news of the RL front...though I prefer to stay out the lives of celebs...but they were smoking on DWTS so I hope they see where this 'thing' takes them...

Love this story Nakia...can't wait for the next update...

 

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/03/11 05:14 am

Title: Chapter 26 I Apologize

loved the way kelly handled serena ass like a woman ; damn val and kelly are fruicking hott together!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/03/11 03:09 pm

Title: Chapter 26 I Apologize

I am so in love with your story ! I just wish that the chapters could be alittle longer.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/03/11 03:04 pm

Title: Chapter 26 I Apologize

Absolutely loved this chapter.  Glad Serena is given some time to grow up.  Thank you for sharing with us about Maks and Bran seeing each other after hours.  I've always believed that these two will find a way to be happy together.  But, in the meantime you given me hope

Reviewer: sam Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/03/11 09:38 am

Title: Chapter 26 I Apologize

Wow, Kelly and Val still going hard at it!! Glad she had a conversation with Serena. Hmmm, now let's see if Maks and Brandy can get it together.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/03/11 08:42 am

Title: Chapter 26 I Apologize

Great update. Could you post a picture of Val?

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/03/11 07:41 am

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