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Title: Chapter 35 Down on Bended Knee

I thoroughly enjoyed your story.  You are a very good and imaginative writer.  Please write some more.  You captured exactly the way I felt about Maks and Brandy.  Boy, they sure had us going.  I really think they would make a dynamic duo.

Reviewer: Maria Baker Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/02/13 07:29 pm

Title: Chapter 35 Down on Bended Knee

I want biracial kids too lol 

I'm sooo loving this story. I will be sad when it ends. 

Reviewer: LadiiCharr Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/07/12 10:17 pm

Title: Chapter 34 Brandy Baby!

It would be cruel to read this interesting take on Brandy and Maksim and not tell

 you that I really enjoyed it.  I hate it ended without us knowing what sex the baby was and if they got married.

Reviewer: vemo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22/07/12 08:20 am

Title: Chapter 35 Down on Bended Knee

Please tell me you haven't abandonded this fic.

Reviewer: Christina V Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/02/12 06:13 pm

Title: Chapter 1

OMGGGG,I JUS RAN ACROSS THIS LAST NIGHT,IVE BEEN A FAN OF BRANDY AND MAKS.SINCE THE BEGGINING  I USE TO WATCH THEM TALK & THINK IS ANY BODY ELSE PICKING UP WHAT IM PICKING UP + IVE NEVER SEEN BRANDY ACT LIKE  THIS EVER !!!SO ANYWAY I NEEDED MY FIX.AND I HAVNT CHECK ON THEM IN A WHILE,SO LIKE 1200 AM I WAS LOOKING AT THERE OLD STUFF REMINICING,AND I CAME ACROSS THIS BLOG .CHAPTER 9 POPPED UP IVE NEVER SEEN NOTHING LIKE THIS  BEFORE  AND I WAS LIKE WHAT IS THIS I WAS READING IT,AND I WAS LIKE OH HELL NAW !!! IT GOT TO BE MORE .TO MY SURPRISE IT WAS 30 SOMTHING CHAPTERS NEEDLESS TO SAY I DIDNT GO TO BED TILL 600 AM WOKE BACK UP@9 BECAUSE I WAS TO THIRSTY AND  HAD TO SEE WHAT WAS NEXT.I LOVED IT GOOD JOB. ARE U GONNA KEEP IT UP? IT WILL  BE INTERESTING TO HERE ALL THE  HATERS  (THE PRESS)  RESPONSE ABT THERE RELATIONSHIP THE BABY,THE PROPOSAL ,THERE GONNA TRY TO RUIN IT FOR SURE U ALREADY  KNO THEY IS GUURRRLLL...LOL.... KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

Reviewer: MZ.DEUCES Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/12/11 10:00 pm

Title: Chapter 35 Down on Bended Knee

Love it! 

Reviewer: honeybear Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/11/11 09:16 pm

Title: Chapter 35 Down on Bended Knee

i keep loving this fic! update as soon as life allows you to.

Reviewer: christina Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/11/11 02:44 am

Title: Chapter 35 Down on Bended Knee

loved it so well worth the wait please end the story with the birth of the baby

Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/11/11 11:03 pm

Title: Chapter 35 Down on Bended Knee

Oh my! you really did a great job with the last chapter and this one. The sexin' was super hot and it was so cute the way Maxim ask Sy'rai for Brandy's hand in marriage. I so glad Max's family is thrilled for him. Brandy's familys on board too. Well done!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/11/11 06:52 pm

Title: Chapter 35 Down on Bended Knee

That was really cute and too damn short! It's too early to have me crying at work embarrassing myself.

Reviewer: danni Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/11/11 03:47 pm

Title: Chapter 35 Down on Bended Knee

Oh how I want this to be real.  I love this story, so please continue to keep our dream alive and keep writing.  I know things in life come frist, so I'm waiting.

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/11/11 12:10 pm

Title: Chapter 35 Down on Bended Knee

Awe so cute!! Just the way I would've imagined the proposal!! :D Don't wait too long to update again!!

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/11/11 08:13 am

Title: Chapter 35 Down on Bended Knee

LOVED IT. I HAVE BEEN ON PINS AND NEEDLES WAITING FOR THIS NEXT CHAPTER AND IT WAS WELL WORTH THE WAIT. BUT PLEASE DON'T ME ME WAIT THIS LONG FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER. PRETTY PLEASE

Reviewer: Rajuan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/11/11 08:03 am

Title: Chapter 35 Down on Bended Knee

Ahhhhh! That was so sweet I was in tears as well when he asked her and she had tears and he had tears and we all had tears.  :D

Thank you for the update.

More please....

Happy writing.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/11/11 07:48 am

Title: Chapter 34 Brandy Baby!

I just found this today, I thought I was the only one who saw something between them. I hope there will be more someday.

Reviewer: christina v Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/11/11 11:15 pm

Title: Chapter 34 Brandy Baby!

Come back! LOL!!!! I recently found this story, and it is simply beautiful. Don't let the journey end; their's more to be told.



Author's Response: It's coming I promise. Just want to make sure I do right by this story and the characters.

Reviewer: LK Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 25/10/11 07:49 pm

Title: Chapter 34 Brandy Baby!

Keep writing! I love your story!

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/10/11 07:03 am

Title: Chapter 34 Brandy Baby!

I think they might be together forreal. Time will tell. Can't wait for more of your story!

Reviewer: R Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/10/11 11:09 pm

Title: Chapter 32 Oops I Did it Aagin!

Continue continue continue please. Love this story and don't lose hope about Brandy and Maks. Keep it going!!! Great job!

Reviewer: r Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/10/11 10:56 pm

Title: Chapter 34 Brandy Baby!

Nakia

Missing you now.  You spoiled us with all those updates last week.  Can we have one this weekend PLEASE?????



Author's Response: I Will try to post Sunday evening. It's my son's homecoming weekend. So much to do and so little time. Two more chapters and then it will be complete. Thank you to being a faithful reader; you followed me from over at tst and i truly appreciate you and your reviews.

Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/09/11 04:55 pm

Title: Chapter 34 Brandy Baby!

Aaawww man, you're gonna leave us hanging like that.  I want to know what the "gift" for Sy'rai was?  Was it a ring for her finger like the one he got for Brandy?  I really enjoy your story and thanks for writing it, but I need more please!!!

Reviewer: Hookupmama Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 19/09/11 08:59 pm

Title: Chapter 34 Brandy Baby!

Nakia

I am oer joyed about all the updates this week.  TY for taking the time to make your fans happy.  TY also for letting Brandy reach Maks safely and that she told him without having any issues.

Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/09/11 08:55 pm

Title: Chapter 34 Brandy Baby!

Awesome! 1st off I am so happy that Brandy was not foolish and over analyse everything and not tell Maks.  It would have cut him so deep if he found out thru some other means.  I like the was she told him rather showed him instead and with him knowing her body knew right off.

He was dreaming about fish and his baby boy and his mama was dreaming about fish and Brandy eating fish awesome just awesome I say.

I am glad that Maks got part of his wish and desire now we have to get the rest of it and they will be a complete and happy fam.

Erin is going to shyte a brick when she finds out lol loving it!

I am so enjoying this story more please glad the muse is pumping it out

Thank you

Happy writing

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/09/11 09:21 pm

Title: Chapter 34 Brandy Baby!

OMG..........I'm literally crying  right now, I'm so loving the fact they both are happy about the baby!! Yes they might not be together right now but what we all witness while they was on DWTS was so real and there was a connection either one them can denied.Call me crazy but I'm still hopeful they will end up together.The love those two was able restored in so many of our live was magically. I'm will always be grateful for that. Through your story you show us love have no colors, and what that kind of love we can overcome anything. You are really painting a beautiful picture of Brandy and Maks,so thank you for this amazing story and I can't wait for the next chaper,what I know will be HOT!!! lol

Reviewer: meko1975 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/09/11 07:13 pm

Title: Chapter 34 Brandy Baby!

That was a so SWEET, I can just feel the love between Brandy and Maks... aand it seems it was meant to be that they become parents.

Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/09/11 07:10 pm

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