stopping after each chapter is breaking the flow of the story for me.  Otherwise well written and good detail

interesting!

LOVE IT!!!! I can't wait for more :)

Author's Response: Thank you, i aim to please.

I enjoyed reading this chapter...the ladies' talk...Brandy and Maks' conversation.  <---Love that the most.  Yes, there was tension...I don't think Serena and Kelly will fallout but I think whatever happens at the dinner/club will make her fall right into Val's arms.  I am still liking naughty Val.

Could Serena still be having some lingering feelings for Jamar...is that why she had that far away look...something is definitely up in that arena...and I really think she should have told Kelly about her past relationship with Jamar...I certainly would have if Kelly was my girl...something is about to pop off at tonight event that's for sure...

Val is incorrigible...but I loved seeing Kelly squirm...she's hiding from her real feelings for Val...trying so valiantly to convince herself that he's not getting under her skin...but she knows that's not the truth...she's been shook...and it's Val that is doing the shaking...

I love the grown up relationship that Brandy and Maks are having now...the honesty is refreshing...they are such as hot, sexy couple...and the beauty of it all...it's all tinged with so much love and mutual respect for each other...love it!!!

Can't wait for the next update!!!

I loved the chapter. I'm writing a story, too. It's based on the Double Platinum: Starring Brandy and I decided to add Makism Chmerkovskiy as her love interest. I could use ideas you, if you help. I've writers block, too.

Author's Response:

sure no problem, tell me where are you trying to go, where are you going to end up at? My email address is nakia_ray@yahoo.com. we can communicate that way. 

Yes, I love those two freaks!  Hot update.  I was blown away when they had sex in the club (I couldn't believe it) but I love the balcony scene and him slapping her a**.

Um, I think Serena will have a lot to say when she finds out about Kelly's new friend...it's hard to say what her reaction might be though...

you were right too short :-)

Brandy and Maks are just so sexy together.  I am loving this story.  I just imagine that it's me instead of Brandy when the loving gets good.

Kelly sure is giving a lot of lip service...but one touch from Val and she's like a puddle in his hands...why does she insist on calling him a "boy" when he is anything but...arrogant as heck...but definitely not a boy...this is getting gooood...can't wait to see what happens next...

And Brandy is right...Maks better handle Erin before a sista has to take off her earrings and grab the Vaseline!!!

I love Val in this chapter.  I am a little confused...at the club Kelly said that her and Val kissed and she felt fireworks.  Did I miss something?  I thought they almost kissed in the hotel room..

Author's Response:

You are absoutely correct. I should have went back to check, especially since I was half asleep when I wrote chapter 18 (lol). Good looking out, because I sure did forget that they almost kissed.

Thank you, very being a Reader and a Reviewer.

I greatly appreciate you. Thank you again, Nakia.

Kelly...Kelly!  Val could have stole the p*ssy with two suitcases while Jamar watched in awe!  SMH!  She is without a doubt into him.  But Kelly lives inside her head.  And I agree with pmgayles that she's muscled up over his presence because she feels they threw him on her.  It's all good.  Val is a complex guy.  And I find him, f-a-s-c-i-n-a-t-i-n-g!