Oh oh, Val seems to be the man up for the challenge with Kelly! He's taking no prisoners.

Hot damnnnnnnnn!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!maks hmmmmmmmm gooddddd

hawt!

I love your writing for Maks.  He's hot, spicy, and rips the seal off her reserved proper packaging.  Val is going to make Kelly into a mush mound.  You can tell.  Jamar seems like quite the guy.  But Kelly needs Val's strength to keep her balanced.

I'm loving it.  I can't wait to read what you have next.

damn damn brandy and maks give 112 we can do it anywhere a whole new meaning want  kelly and val to get their groove on will he be as freaky as hisn brother and show kelly what a youngin can do

this update had me LMAO. I can never see Maks and Brandy in the same light again (now they are some freaks lol) I do wish they could be a real life couple

Author's Response: Well a few close sources say it's only a matter of time. They say that Erin is so pissed off at Maks and Brandy and their closeness. I follow all three and it's been over a month since Maks and Erin have tweeted. However, Maks and Brandy are always tweeting one another. Maks is in Paris at the moment, he just finished doing the Ukranian Bachelor, and sources say there was no love match. I do know he blogged on his forum that because of Brandy and her encouragement, he decided to do the show. He is very protective of her, and he blocked several of Erin followers, because they were very cruel to Brandy. I truly do not know personally, but I do know when a man becomes protective with a woman, it's beacuse he feels deeply for her. Only time will tell, and until then I am going to write as if there was a hot, passionate love story btw them. I love those two!!!!

HOT!! Great Chapter, I can't wait for more! :)

Very nice chapter. About time Maks and Brandy got it on! The sexin was hot, hot, hot! So what if Val is younger. Don't rule him out, Kelly! Jamar sounds fine as hell. What's a girl to do? Can't wait to find out!

Loved that Brandy and Maks are back on track. Can't wait until Val sees Kelly.

Author's Response: Yes Ms. Kelly is about to find love, but where she least expect it. Thank you for R&R.

Loved it!! Glad they're back on track for romance. Now let's see what'll happen when they return to the real world. Hope Kelly gives Val a chance. Let the love flow!!!:)

Sounds like Maks is about to handle his business...YOWZA, LOL!!!

I believe Brandy had already come to the decision that she was going after her man on her own...she's finally growing the heck up...'bout time!!!  And homegirl's horny too...and I mean we are talking about Maks here, MEOW...

Kelly and Val...now Maks...Kels is a grown arse woman...and girlfriend sure isn't hurting for male attention...but good looking out for baby bro...and he better come correct...calls Ms. Kelly don't play with no boys...

Can't wait for the next round of hawtness...hurry up with that typing...a sista has needs, ya know, LOL!!!

Merry Christmas!!!!

I see a new story coming on!

Kelly & Val

Now that would be hot!

I will say a prayer for your grandmother.. I experienced the same thing with my grandmother a few years ago.. She fell and broke her hip while shampooing her rug.. She pulled through it and your grandmother will too..  I'm so sorry to hear about your son's classmate..As you said can't imagine anything so horrible that would make an 11 year old take is life.. He will be in my prayers as well..

As for the story.. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.. Kelly needs love too.. Go it Val..

Oh, Nakia...you know you and your family are in my prayers...Godspeed to health for your grandmother...and your son's friend...though tragic...is not unheard of...I'm an educator and we were inserviced on suicide at the beginning of the school year...and sad to say...they are getting younger and younger...I'll pray for his soul and his family also...but the mind is such a delicate thing and sometimes...it just can't see past today to see a brighter future for tomorrow...

To the story...yep, Maks has his work cut out...Brandy is pissed and rightfully so...though she should always question what she reads and sees in those mags...she's a celebrity herself afterall...and should know that sensation sells papers...but she's so emotional right now that her brain is trying to grasp anything it can to make some sense of why Maks broke her heart so callously...and this is the easiest answer for her...but make no mistake...she loves that man with everything in her...why else would she fly into a jealous rage after seeing those pictures of him and Joan...I love how both Kelly and Ray J flew to her defense if Maks was truly trifling with their girl's heart...but Maksim loves him some Brandy and I have faith in him to make it right for her...looking forward to what happens in Jamaica...update soon, please!!!