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Title: Chapter 15

Very nice chapter. The next chapter is going to be fun with everything that is going on. I hope your grandmother surgery goes well. How awful an eleven yr old commiting suicide is really scary. That child's poor family is really suffering. God Bless them.

Author's Response: Thank you, and the surgery went well. As for the family of the 11 year boy; well just keep praying for them. Thank you so much for reading and enjoying my story, please continue because your feedback is important to me. Merry Christmas to you and your family. Love Nakia.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21/12/10 05:31 pm

Title: Chapter 15

I just wanted to stop in and let you know how much I'm enjoying reading your BRANDMC fic.  I swear it's a hottie tottie.  And I'm drooling waiting for the reunion sex!  Thanks for your creative flavor.  It's a jewel darlin!

Author's Response: Aww, i'm truly speechless. However, thank you this means so much coming from you, since i have truly enjoyed your stories. It is an honor when other writers take the time to R&R. Thank you so much. Much respect to you. Have a Merry Christmas. Love Nakia.

Reviewer: SparkApCider Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/12/10 07:58 am

Title: Chapter 15

Glad Maks is up for the challenge as Brandy is so stubborn. But she really has some nerve after she's been giving him the run around and flirting with strangers as she admitted on the George show. She really needs to own up to her crap too. If she wants Maks she needs to be serious in order for them to move forward.

Sorry to hear about your GM but hope she recovers ok. Wow, suicide at 11yrs??? I can't even imagine that. That's  frightening and really sad! How can a family recover from something like that??



Author's Response:

I truly enjoy your feedback, always so insightful. Yeah our girl Brandy is a trip, however you will see a transformation within during this escapade in Jamaica. Yeah Mon! 

Thank you for your concern for my grandmother, the surgery went well. Please just continue to pray for the family of the 11 year old. They are not handling (which is expected) this to well. 

Please continue to R&R. Merry Christmas to you. Love Nakia.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/12/10 07:29 am

Title: Chapter 1

Ok I just discovered this story and I'm so glad that I did. I've been waiting for someone to write a story for these two. I really wish it were real life, but I'm going to start reading it today. I haven't read a single word yet, but THANKS!! You love Eve Vaughn and so do I, so I know you have good taste.

Author's Response:

I hope you do like it once you have read the story.

I do love Eve V. I've read all her stories. Thank you so much. Enjoy!!

Reviewer: CapitalPeach Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/12/10 06:02 pm

Title: Chapter 14: Can't Be Just Friends.

I absolutely LOVED this latest update...good for Maks...and yet poor Brandy...but homegirl needed a dose of reality to hit her square in the face to finally wake her up...and boy did she ever get it...I know Maks was kinda harsh with the breakup over the phone...but really, how much longer was she expecting him to keep waiting indefinitely while she decides what she wanted...she knows Maks is in love with her...he had told her and shown her in numerous ways how much he does...yet, she's still dragging her feet and out doing interviews as if he means nothing to her...now she's in a hell of her own making...misery is a poor substitute for true love...and that's what she had with Maks...but she let her overly cautious heart overrule her courage and now she's all alone...can't believe she thought they could remain friends after she's been trifling with that man's heart like that...I know she has hangups...but if she doesn't figure out a way to get over them or work through them...then she'll never be happy...my advice...woman up...and be willing to come with guns blazing to fight for your man...

Can I say how much I love Kelly in this story...she is a true friend...and Ray J came as a big surprise...but he loves his big sis...and he wants to see her happy even if she can't see it herself...loved the 'shock treatment' plan...I say it has a good chance of working...

Looking forward to more!!!



Author's Response: Thank you so much for being a faithful reader and reviewer. Poor Brandy, but like you said homegirl needed a swift kick, in order to see what's right in front of her. You can't but to love Kelly, we all need a friend like her. I love Ray J and I think he gets so much flack, I just wanted to soften him up a bit. Again thank you for your support. Nakia.

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18/12/10 02:52 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Well the plan worked! But I would hate if someone did that to me, even if I deserved it. I would be mad as hell. What would really be funny is if Brandy found out some kind of way and knew that Maks was in on it. I don't know, Kelly could be talking to Ray J and Maks and Brandy could over here Kelly describing her melt down to them and how she almost felt bad for doing it but it was for her own good. That would be hilarious, not for them but if Brandy all of a sudden moved on just like Maks and started to act normal as ever and if someone was to hit on her, she does not have to give in to it but she could flirt just a little. That would serve them right for trying to make her get on the straight and narrow.

Like I said, what they did, did help Brandy to stop being so wishy washy but that's not the annswer to solving a challenge or fear a person has. Yes, in thus instance it may work but Brandy is not going to have people their to intervine for her all the time. It is something she has to do and before she talked to Kelly it seemed as though she had made up her mind and that she wanted to go all the way with Maks. But his insecure *ss called Ray J and he called Kelly and cooked up a plan that was not needed. All Brandy did was talk to Kelly and that's all she needed. The plan, I beleive will work but it might work too much. Maks went off, I understand he was upset and Brandy was moving too slow but he has to look at it from her perspective.

Brandy had been thru a lot and even though Maks is sincere in his feelings for her, she wanted to be sure and she still has a career and a child to raise. People can moan and groan about why a person does this or that but until the person running their mouth walks a mile in the other person's shoes --they need to shut it. Brandy had finally come to the conclusion with the help of venting to Kelly, that Maks is the one and they go and implement the plan. I really do hope it blows up in their face. not in a mean way but in the way that says you cannot play with people's lives and then the next day say, "I was just playing. I only did that to make you realize that you really can't live without me and that you want to be with me fully." WHAT! Especially when Brandy was ready to be with Maks. She was about to tell him on the phone.

Anyway, sorry for talking so long. This story is really good and I can't wait for more. I want Maks and Brandy to be together more than the next person, I just hate when people try to help a relationship along the way. Great writing!

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/12/10 10:56 pm

Title: Chapter 14: Can't Be Just Friends.

I think there plan is going to work. I am so excited to see whats going to happen in Jamaica!

Reviewer: Kareia Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/12/10 07:57 pm

Title: Chapter 14: Can't Be Just Friends.

I must admit that I didn't like the plan at first....and I thought that RayJ convinced Kelly not to do it...to just somehow cook up another plan to get them together.  After reading towards the end of the chaper, I realized that it just might work but poor Brandy. Crying her little eyes out. I liked reading Brandy/Syrai's interactions too.   And FINALLY...we got to the root of her issues/her ambivalence towards giving her all with this relationship.  Good work on that part.  I am a little disappointed that this will be over within the next 3 chapters. I still feel as if the story just really started.

Reviewer: R. Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 16/12/10 07:18 am

Title: Chapter 14: Can't Be Just Friends.

Loved it! Something needed to shake Brandy up.....She was dangly too much with Maks' feelings. He didn't go too far as he had to make the pretend breakup realistic.  She needed a reality check as his feelings were involved. No one is guaranteed a happily ever after but when love comes, for the most part it may be worth the risk as there's only one life to live. And it has nothing to do with looks, its all about what's going on with the heart.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/12/10 07:13 am

Title: Chapter 1

I have only caught a glimpse of  DWTS via Youtube via your story. I have officially boycotted the show sinc Layla/Maks were robbed several seasons ago. I am liking this story and the characters. I agree that beauty is in the eye of the beholder. The chemistry blended with personalities makes for a potential super couple. Once Brandy realizes that in order to experience real love with Max, she must be able  to trust in herself and him. Keep up the good work!!!

Reviewer: Love Drama Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/12/10 06:57 am

Title: Chapter 14: Can't Be Just Friends.

Please, I don't want to see them break up. How about Ray J & Kelly set up plan to get Brandy & Maks back together. But in a romantic way or either way.

Reviewer: Diva25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/12/10 06:36 am

Title: Chapter 13 Can You Say Brand NU

Maks is crying?! I can't believe it...he seems like such a tough guy.

Author's Response:

Those are the ones whom are more sensitive. I have one, he has a rough outer apperance; but will drop a tear in a minute. I love that about him. He is more affectionate than I am. Thanks for R&R.

Reviewer: R. Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14/12/10 03:50 am

Title: Chapter 13 Can You Say Brand NU

I don't feel for Brandy, I personally have never thoguht that she was attractive.  Her eyes are too far apart or something.  But Brandy does work with what God gave her with that being said how long does she expect Maks to wait for her?  She derserves whatever explosion that Maks is going to have.  I am loving this story.

Author's Response: I never want to attack a person's outer apperance, beacuse Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. This story is fanfiction and Though I don't always agree with the pics for most of the stories written on the chamber, i would never personally say that, however I am so glad you are enjoying this story. I believe that once a person falls deeply in love with someone they are willing to wait, perhaps even a life time. Therefore, with this story being a work of my mind I know that Maks is not looking at the superficial things about Brandy, but he wants her heart, mind, body and soul. A prime example of love being about the inner is Beyonce and Jay Z, Alicia Keys and Swizz Beats. Would I personally choose either of those men, no, but it works for those two young ladies. Be blessed and continue to R&R. I look forward to hearing from you always, Nakia.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13/12/10 05:02 am

Title: Chapter 13 Can You Say Brand NU

Wow, Maks is hot under the collar! Hope he cools down before speaking to her. Maybe he needs to distance himself from her for a while and get himself together. Is she really with the stress???!!!

Author's Response: I believe she is to him, sometimes there is one person who will make you forget all the rules and go outside your comfort zone. Like i expressed to another reader, looks are not always the key to a man or woman falling in love with someone, sometimes its just chemistry. Thank you so much for reading my story, it brings me great joy when you guys R&R. Please continue to give me your feedback.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/12/10 03:48 am

Title: Chapter 13 Can You Say Brand NU

damn this was a excellent teaser whoo i want more, more moreeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

Author's Response: I aim to please. the next chapter will have some surprises!! Please continue to R&R. Thanks, Nakia.

Author's Response: I aim to please. the next chapter will have some surprises!! Please continue to R&R. Thanks, Nakia.

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/12/10 03:26 am

Title: Chapter 12 - My Buddy??

Brandy, Brandy, Brandy...what are you doing here, babe...trying to push Maks back into the "friend" zone...who are you kidding here...I can understand being reserved...but to not even bother contacting the man in TWO WEEKS...now, she has me thinking that maybe she's not that serious about him even though she keeps telling Maks she loves him...but how...as "friend" or as the man she's madly in love with...okay...so I know they needed a breather...but I didn't expect her to completely blow him off like that...

Joan was a nice surprise...I'm glad Maks has positive people in his corner and wants him to be happy...hmmm, maybe it will take Brandy seeing him in a few paparazzi photos out and about to wake her up...but knowing Brandy...she'll probably take that as a hint that Maks wasn't really being serious about her...

Can't wait for the catalyst to get this ball in motion again...looking forward to the next update...love this story!!! 

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11/12/10 07:54 am

Title: Chapter 12 - My Buddy??

Brandy is really frustrating me.  I understand she doesn't want to move fast in their relationship but come on.  Why did she wait two weeks to make contact with Maks?  Hopefully she can show more respect for their friendship/relationship by putting more effort into it.

I'm feeling like Maks right about now.  Hopefully I can take Joan advice and have a little bit more patience towards Brandy.

S



Author's Response:

 I agree with you, but remember Brandy has been through alot, and Maks doesn't have the best reputation. I'm surprised know one has yet to ask me does Brandy know about Joan. Well only time will tell. Thank you for your feedback. Please continue to R&R.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/12/10 09:47 pm

Title: Chapter 12 - My Buddy??

You are so right. I wasn't expecting that Joan would be so caring. I'm glad Brandy told Maks how she feels instead of avoiding him. Maks still cares for her and now I hope he heeds Joans advice. Very well done, Nakia!

Author's Response:

Thank you for R&R. I am so happy that you were pleased with this chapter. Joan came as a surprise even when I wanted to go one way, well.....

Anywho, thank you again! Take care, Nakia.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/12/10 06:37 pm

Title: Chapter 12 - My Buddy??

Please, let brandy & maks be together. they belong together, I could tell.

Author's Response: Let's hope that Brandy can discover just how powerful their love could be. Only time will tell, if love prevails. Thank you for taking the time to R&R. Thank you, Nakia.

Reviewer: Diva25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/12/10 08:03 am

Title: Chapter 12 - My Buddy??

I was wondering if you were going to add Joni Kilmurry to the mix, lol. 

I think that Maks/Brandy should talk more on the phone...too bad it took two weeks for them to reconnect.  I think he should visit her in L. A. and instead of just intense sex why not real dates/excursions (though the papparazi is watching)?  More quality time spent together...outside of the bedroom.  Though I love reading their love scenes.  I think or at least hope that Brandy will come to the realization very soon that she could potentially lose him...so she needs to get herself together...you know with her all of her issues.  He did come on too strong and I can definitely understand her fear.  He is pulling back a little and I can see he is struggling.  I love when a man loves a woman but Brandy is just too high strung and for some reason can't go into this full throttle...hopes she figures it out and overcomes it soon.  I do get the feeling that he might not wait a long time for her to come around.  Perhaps it might take him moving on (not necessarily with another woman) for her to see how important he is to her...or maybe it might take him getting...(well not sure what angle you are going for)...

I've been waiting for this update all day...can't wait to see where this story ultimately goes....



Author's Response:

 Yeah i had to add her, but I wanted to change the spelling of her first and last names and i didn't want to add her real pic.  Yeah Brandy is a little hig strung, but she doesn't want to get hurt. Just wait until the next couple of chapters, it's about to get good. Thank you so much for R&R. Now onto chp. 13. Take care.

Reviewer: R. Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/12/10 06:59 am

Title: Chapter 12 - My Buddy??

Love the update and hope Joan was sincere. Still not feeling Brandy too much for now. She's like a child and can't seem to make up her mind about what she wants. She needs to put Maks out of his misery if she's not sincere. Trust is a two way street....she can't have her cake and eat it too. Its like she's dangling him on a string.

Author's Response: i guess we will have to wait to see if Ms. Joan was sincere. I know Brandy is a bit much, but she is coming from a place of emotional wreckage. I'm trying to be patient with girlfriend, but she gets on my nerves to (lol)! However, i don't believe she is intentionally trying to hurt Maks. thanks for R&R. Be blessed!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/12/10 06:15 am

Title: Chapter 12 - My Buddy??

That was not the reaction that I had expected Joan to have, I glad that she truly cares about Maks.  Have said how much I love me some Maks?  Loving this story!!!

Author's Response: I wanted to express that not all beautiful women are bitchy and stuck on themselves. Joan wants Maks to be happy, even if it means him being with someone else. Yeah you've said how much you love you some him. Thank you so much for all your support and feedback, i look forward to seeing a review from you. Please continue to R&R.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 10/12/10 05:55 am

Title: Chapter 11: You See Right Through Me

I think they made the right decision for now...this relationship is moving much too fast and there are still too many issues that will cause problems for them...they both need to take a step back and reflect and decide just what it is they want from this relationship...though I have a feeling they are on different pages right now...Maks wants permanence and Brandy...well, she doesn't quite know what she wants...this was almost a mature conversation between them...I'm impressed...

I hope the separation helps them find clarity and they can have a do-over...get to really know each other without physical...looking forward to more...thanks again for the update...

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 11:46 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Brandy does seem a little immature. But Maks is moving a little to fast...Now he is sexy but not sexy enough to break a 6 year self imposed exile from sex! I like these two together but we need to slow down the pace of the relationship.

Author's Response:

I think Maks is used to more aggresive women. in alot a ways Brandy has been sheltered and she is more reserved. Sometimes it takes the right man to come along and make you forget somethings, (lol).  I wanted to show just how relationships can tank quickly when sex becomes the reason two people get together.

Reviewer: Apple Anonymous starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 06:03 pm

Title: Chapter 11: You See Right Through Me

Wow, Maks doesn't play. I agree with Brandy slow down so the  girl can think. Plus not using protection was stupid. Their relationship is much too new. I think time away will do them both some good. Maks is being too negative right now. He shouldn't give up. Love this story and keep the chapters coming. I'm anxious to read more!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/12/10 05:31 pm

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