It was short but sweet. Loved it!!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed
[Report This]Date: 19/07/11 04:46 am
Welcome Back, its good to see this story again.
I'm glad that Brandy told Erin off, she needed it.
Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 19/07/11 02:06 am
nice! i was missing this story. Nice to see you back.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: 19/07/11 01:17 am
OmG I love this story. I am glad you got your muse back....can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: LadiiCharr Signed [Report This]Date: 05/07/11 10:00 pm
Love the story please update soon :-)
BUMP BUMP BUMO
Reviewer: LadiiCharr Signed [Report This]Date: 25/06/11 05:32 am
Finally, they're back together. Please let there be another wedding in the making and a happy ending for Kelly and Va, Serana & Jamar, Brandy & Maks. I hope Sy’rai gets a stepfather who loves her like a dad. Maks will loves Sy’rai like a daughter.
Reviewer: Diva25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/06/11 06:43 am
Hot damn...now that was HAWT!!! Fiyah I tell ya, LOL...I hope they can weather the storm of this separation...because I need more of this...happy writing!!!
Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]Date: 29/05/11 06:11 pm
Hoping for an update! I was watching Maksim's bachelor show on youtube (Someone was nice enough to translate for us). He is so different than he is on DWTS! I was shocked to see how shy he was! As I watched it, I thought of Brandy!
Reviewer: NikkiHearsAWho Signed [Report This]Date: 28/05/11 08:09 am
MORE!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Danni Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/05/11 02:49 pm
Everyday since I first read your story I been checking to see if you post anything, and just my luck you did.I love where you are going with this story,Brandy and Maks have so much chemisty it just seem right that they can't seem to get enough of each other. But I would love to see if those two have more in common than just sex, dont get me wrong I love the sex scenes but their conncetion go deep then that.I dont want you to think I'm complaining because I'm not, like I said before I love your story,I would just like see that conncetion we all witness while they was on dwts.
Thank you so much writing this beautiful story I really do enjoy reading it. :)
Reviewer: Tamiko Simmons Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 20/05/11 04:48 am
I appreciate all the freakiness. It's good to have you back.
Reviewer: Montoya Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/05/11 04:22 am
Yes,having Bran get pregnant from this night, then having Maks leave for the loner show would make for some interesting situations that would probably be fun to write! Keep up the great work!
This was HAWT! I'm gonna need a shower now! HA!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing.
Reviewer: Addison Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/05/11 09:08 pm
I'm also looking forward to you exploring the emotional connection these two have, and how Brandy will handle Maks doing the Bachelor show. There are a lot of clips of the show on youtube.
It's interesting, because I was reading Maks's blog for T.V. Guide and he mentioned his cha cha with Kirstie.He then talked about calling Brandy to talk to her. As soon as he mentioned homegirls name, the nasty comments popped up. These female fans of his really have an issue with this!
Author's Response:
I know I read the T.V. Guide blog as well, and I heard a lot of regret and bitterness within Maks still; regarding last season with Brandy and her being cheated. That blog showed how deep his connection is with Bran, because he felt the need to call her and vent his frustration. Thanks for the tip for the clips, I will do that so I can sit and analyze what I see.
Reviewer: NikkiHearsAWho Signed [Report This]Date: 19/05/11 08:31 pm
The sex is great but a new angle would really build the tension and anticipation. A concentration on the emotional connection now that Maks is preparing to leave. They've had an awful lot of sex, even though Bran is on the pill, consequences can arise. Imagine how she would feel caught up in an unplanned situation and her man is off screwing around with a house full of desparate women throwing it at him. Stress, doubt, and devastation makes for hot and steamy on his return.
Author's Response:
I hear what you are saying, however I believe that the two of them have had enough of an emotional spiral. Sometimes I believe that we have to take some things just the way they are without always becoming so emtionally bankrupt. And Brandy has spiraled enough!
Thank you so much for your review, it really means alot to me.
Reviewer: NessaB Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/05/11 04:05 pm
Wow, that was hawt!! More please.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 19/05/11 06:47 am
i think brandy and marks just made a baby keep it coming the chapter was hot damn damn
Reviewer: jadadominique Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/05/11 05:47 am
OMG that was HOT... I think that I need a SHOWER
Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/05/11 05:43 am
Damn! I'm greedy! I want more! I love this story so much. Thank you so much for your creative gift, and for keeping this story alive!
Reviewer: NikkiHearsAWho Signed [Report This]Date: 19/05/11 12:51 am
Well you certainly made up for your absent by writing a really hot, sexy chapter! I'm hoping I don't have to wait too long for the next chapter.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: 18/05/11 04:42 pm
OMG that was HAWT! Thanks for the update!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/05/11 10:00 am
Damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn whoo absolutly loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 18/05/11 06:52 am
Finally I was able to read your story on Brandy and Maks. First I would like to said you out did yourself the story line was nice I only have one question why are Brandy and Maks fighting alot? You see in my mind I see them beening so close nothing can separate them,like in the beginning I can understand all the fighting because there was so much of sexually tension going on between them,but once they in up in bed together the fighting would stop to an degree.And I hate seeing Brandy so work up all the times she really need to take chill pill and relax herself.But your story really have me wanting more. Thank you for taking time out of your busy schedule to write this story for all us Brandy and Maks fans we really appreciate it. :)
Reviewer: Tamiko Simmons Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/05/11 06:42 am
I think you should update with Brandy and Maks to save time LOL I only read because these two are in it, I don't really care about the other characters LOL sorry! I love your writing though and I check back everyday to see if u have updated!
Reviewer: Addison Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/05/11 02:07 am
Awww, What a cute chapterl Love all around!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed
[Report This]Date: 23/04/11 04:36 am
I'll be glad when Kelly and Serena can resolve their problems. Nice chapter, although it was short.
Reviewer: Montoya Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/04/11 05:03 am