I keep reading this over and over.. I love this story.. I want more!!!!
Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 25/08/10 06:20 am
I like it..We get to see the Evangline isn't perfect.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, glad you liked it. Reviewer: Chocolate Girl Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 18/04/09 08:43 pm
I love it!! Very true to life and also this story also shows us why me love Tangeline so much. Evangeline isn't perfect, but Todd loves her anyway. I have a feeling that if this story had continued, Todd and Evangeline would have work things out.
Author's Response:
I was on the verge of beating up my boss and then I saw your review and my heart went soft.
I'm glad you liked it, thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Megumi Signed [Report This]Date: 25/08/08 07:50 am
Sorry! sound like my life. I just hope they can have an happy ending
Author's Response: Thanks for reading, I hope things work out well for you.
Date: 20/08/08 06:37 pm
This is a good story! I liked that Todd was willing to forgive Van for anything... even cheating on him *side eyes St Blair of the She-Wolves*
One thing though: there are points in your story where you use the word 'Am" instead of using "I am" or "I'm". It's really taking away from the flow of the story. Also, you might want to look into getting a beta reader to catch your spelling and punctuation mistakes.
Other than that, it's a nice story and a heckuva lot better than the tripe that's passing for SLs these days on OL. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Hey, thanks for the constructive criticism. I'm Just one of those people who doesn't have a lot of patience, hopefully I can improve on that. Reviewer: BelovedTangeline Signed
[Report This]Date: 19/08/08 05:27 am
I like it, it's a very interesting take on Todd and Van's relationship.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it, thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 19/08/08 03:12 am
That was good, intense and unexpected. It's nice to see that even though Van mess up big time,her man is not willing to give up on her.
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: 19/08/08 02:40 am
All I can say is WOW... I can't believe that she would be the one to go outside of their relationship. Awesome first chapter.
Author's Response: I can't believe it either but it's interesting to see her step out of her picture perfect character for once.
Date: 19/08/08 01:51 am
Loved it and I want Evangeline to answer his question, so I hope you continue with this one.
Author's Response:
If Iwas watching this on tv, this is the time when I would yell and shout " please say yes" but since it's not on tv, each reader might just have to answer the question for her in their own way.
Thanks for reading and leaving a review, it is well appreciated.
Reviewer: kmfranklin211 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/08/08 01:44 am
Great job Dyehanna. You know Tangie is my couple and I love them warts and all. This was so intense and I liked how you tarnished Evangeline's halo a bit (I never liked how they Mary Sued towards the end of her run on the show) and in such a fitting way because she's cheated in the past. It made me think there might be more to it--like she's intentionally sabotaging every relationship she's in. Love how Todd wouldn't let her run away this time and gave her that ultimate question.
Well done. I hope to see more like it.
Author's Response:
Yay, it's Mamba, Thanks a lot, am glad you liked reading it as much as I loved writing it. I think there will always be more than what meets the eye with T&E relationship.
Your writings keep me up at night, am glad I could return the favor.
Thanks for the stars.
Reviewer: BlackMamba Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/08/08 12:43 am
Very good start so far... I just hope that it wasn't John or Cris that she slept with.
I hope you contiue.
Author's Response:
Hi, lady Liberty, unfortunately that's where the story ends, trust me if she had slept with Chris or John, Todd would be locked up by now for man slaughter.
Am glad you liked it, thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Lady Liberty Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/08/08 08:52 pm
Okay, it's me again.
I wanted to say that I'm so happy that you looked at this couple, and the Evangline character in such an orginal way. You made her human, a person that can make mistakes, hurt the people she loves. And the idea of her cheating is completely realistic to me, because she did have a history of doing so on the show (R.J. and Christian) so this drabble completely makes sense.
And if you choose to continue, that's great, but I think this is beautiful the way it is. You've done really great work with this, and you should be very proud. Thank you so much for sharing this with the rest of us.
Author's Response:
Well, it's me again.
Am so glad you got the concept of the whole story, I was on you tube, watching Unfaithful which is Rihanna's music video and before I knew it, I saw Evangeline and Todd's relationship in a different light.
Personally I perfer the good Evangeline but she's like any other person who can make mistakes and be remorseful about it.
I was so excited and I enjoyed every minute I spent on writing this. Thanks for the review and the stars too.
Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed
[Report This]Date: 18/08/08 05:20 pm
I really liked this, especially because you approached their relationship from such an interesting angle. And the Todd inner dialouge was really nice, I think you captured how hurt he was perfectly, and yet he still wants her.
This was really great, well done!
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you, thank you. Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 18/08/08 05:16 pm
Dye I'm still left hanging. Is that the point? I think at least I need a next chapter. Pleassee...
Author's Response:
Am hanging by a cliff too and as much as I would like to write an update, I believe this is the way it was suppose to end, with us wondering, hoping, wishing and waiting for them to get through this rough patch.
Thanks for reading, I appreciate your review.
Reviewer: chocolate470 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/08/08 04:53 pm
I love this story and I hate it at the same time
What she did was pretty bad and unexpected but it's kind of cool to see E step out of her two goodie shoes character for a change.
But you left me hanging on a cliff in the end. Was it a yes or no? Will they still be together? Girrrrl you are just mean and evil but i still dig your work.
Author's Response:
Girl, I know how you feel and i feel exactly the same way.
Am not sure if it's a yes or no, the story kind of wrote itself. The end was left blank so each person can draw their individual conclusion to the story.
Thanks for reading and the stars too.
Reviewer: kayla 22 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/08/08 02:35 pm
You really captured Todd, I think...how he would be calm, could be because he had already handled it. And I applaud your courage at exploring cracks in the tangeline dream -- that's what we write for.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review, am glad you liked it.
Date: 18/08/08 02:28 pm
OK I AM A HUGE FAN OF TANGELINE. BUT AS I WAS READING MY GIRL VANGE PISSED ME OFF, THE NAME THAT KEPT POPPING IN MY HEAD WAS BLAIR, I WAS READING HER AS BLAIR I MEAN TO GO OUT AND HAVE SEX WITH ANOTHER PERSON BECAUSE TODD WASNT GIVING HER ENOUGH ATTENTION BOY I DID NOT LIKE THAT AT ALL....BUT ANY WHO I LOVE YOUR WRITINGS AND YOU ARE A GREAT TANGELINE WRITER, BUT PLEASE DONT TORTURE ME WITH VANGE BETRAYING MY MAN TODD BY HAVING SEX WITH SOMEONE ELSE, PLEASE, PLEASE...... FOREVER A FAN I JUST HAVE TO GIVE YOU THE STARS EVEN THOUGH I DID NOT LIKE THE STORY BUT YOU ARE JUST A WONDERFUL WRITER........
Author's Response:
Hi Hershey_kisses, I know you miss the good old Evangeline and I promise to bring her out some time in the future.
Thanks for the stars and review.
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 18/08/08 11:01 am