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Title: Chapter 15

Bonnie is so stupid!!!  Her stupidity jut gets worse in each version that you right.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/03/11 08:56 pm

Title: Chapter 14

Oh oh, the plot thickens. I can see the drama!!!! 

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/03/11 05:06 am

Title: Chapter 1

I'm starting to dislike Bonnie. She needs to make up her mind. Why on earth is she thinking about giving Damon a child?! He is too unstable. I understand Tyler's hurt but Chloe is a too young to understand and he needs to be patient. I'm getting confused on where you are going with this story.

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27/03/11 09:07 pm

Title: Chapter 14

Why is Bonnie so stupid?  WHy didn't she tell Tyler the whole story?  Damon is fine but he makes me ill.  Why hasn't she told Oliver about the real Damon?  I don't get Bonnie and she really makes my teeth itch!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/03/11 05:49 pm

Title: Chapter 1

This story is just too much. I started with Family Matters and kept reading even after it became a little predictable and Young and the Restless like. I agree with someone else who said you've lost the core of what makes these characters who they are. I understand putting your spin on things but you also have to remain true to the people that have been introduced to pop culture. Plus, there's just way too much going on. It's a Vampire Diaries story or a free for all. Crossover got it, but this drifted from a crossover a long time ago.

At the end of the day. You started this thing with a wonderful idea, that simply needed to be developed and built upon. You just tried to do too much and in the process lost this reader.

Reviewer: ReadandReview Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/03/11 04:37 pm

Title: Chapter 13

This story is such a roller coaster of emotions. The clones, Tyler against Damon, Tess and her dirty deeds and various other characters is just crazy but fun. I never know where you are taking this story next. Nice chapter!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/03/11 04:37 pm

Title: Chapter 13

Too many clones!! Who's really real??? Tyler and Bonnie have reunited. Hmm, I gues we'll have to see what happens from here. Poor Damon!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16/03/11 05:12 am

Title: Chapter 1

Bonnie is hating on the wrong man, Tyler isn't the one who lied about having a child.  Bonnie makes me ill!!!  Oliver was not as stupid in the comic or in Smallville.  He is has too much money to be fooled by Damen.  I feel like you are watering down my beloved comic book characters.  Why didn't Bonnie tell Ollie about who Damen really is?  THe Green Arrow is a smart strong character please bring that strenght into your version of him.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/03/11 02:38 am

Title: Chapter 1

Wow a great start to what I am sure will be a fun crossover fic.  I like Bonnie with Sam and am glad you continued after the last fic.  I can't wait to catch up on this one. 

Reviewer: EdenWrites Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/02/11 09:56 am

Title: Chapter 12

Wow, what an interesting update. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/02/11 01:49 am

Title: Chapter 12

You are sneaky, that was a Bonnie clone. I was hoping that Bonnie's witch DNA stopped her being turned into a vampire.  Great update, but I want Bonnie, Tyler and Chloe together.  Please!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 27/02/11 12:23 am

Title: Chapter 11

Damon is truly evil and sick.  Bonnie is so stupid and she doesn't use her powers when it save her life.  I thought she was suppose to be a powerful witch.  Now  she's going to be vampire and all because she is too trusting.

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/02/11 12:43 am

Title: Chapter 11

Woah! Damon is seriously sick. He wanted Bonnie so badly he is willing to make her a vampire! I feel sorry for Tyler when he finds out. This story is so crazy but I really like it. More please!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14/02/11 12:21 am

Title: Chapter 11

Oh oh, Damon is in trouble as Chloe's mind try to sort through things. Hope Bonnie isn't a crazy vamp and still loves Chloe.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/02/11 09:14 pm

Title: Chapter 11

Hmmmm....what is Damon doing now?  And is Bonnie really going to be a vampire now?

Nyeesha

Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/02/11 06:55 pm

Title: Chapter 10

Loved the update. Chloe is so cute! Hmm, can't wait to see where Tyler and Bonnie go from here seeing that she's over Sam.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/02/11 01:34 am

Title: Chapter 10

That was awesome, so is Bonnie finally waking up?  I love Tyler and I am so glad that are trying it as a couple again.  I so love  this story!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/02/11 11:04 pm

Title: Chapter 9

Let the games begin! Tyler is coming for you Damon. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/01/11 05:22 am

Title: Chapter 8

Chloe sure loves her some Damon. Hope he and Bonnie can work out what's best for Chloe.  Hmm Tyler....somehow  I don't think he's ready to be a dad.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/01/11 05:59 am

Title: Chapter 7

Uh oh, the **it is getting ready to hit the fan. I'll  be interested in how Damon is going to react. Do they really think they can get the baby back without a fight? Excellent chapter!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24/01/11 08:11 pm

Title: Chapter 7

Loved the update. Was full of drama!! Hope Bonnie and Tyler thread carefully as Chloe see Damon as her dad and loves him. Lex needs to be dealt with and his cloning capabilities need to be stopped.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/01/11 07:13 am

Title: Chapter 7

That was good, but they have to know that is not going to let them take Chloe away.  Carol Lockwood makes my teeth itch, she needs to feel some pain.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 23/01/11 11:42 pm

Title: Chapter 6

With each new chapter Bonnie gets more and more stupid!!!

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Date: 21/01/11 02:41 am

Title: Chapter 5

Wow, things are really heating up. I have a feeling Bonnie and Tyler are going to find out all the secrets. Both need to know about Damon having their child. You are doing a great job with this story. More please and soon!

Reviewer: jjazz59 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/01/11 07:57 pm

Title: Chapter 5

Loved seeing Tyler sweat! Hope Sam and Bonnie can make it work!

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/01/11 08:31 am

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