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Title: Chapter 1

ahhh, the possibilities.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09/05/10 09:10 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Very well done, and acknowledgement without being preachy Alex stayed the course and made the right decision but temptation was there right under the surface. Enjoyed.

Reviewer: johnandvan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05/04/09 12:56 am

Title: Chapter 1

Okay, once gain you've blown me away.  I think this might be my favorite of the fics you posted.  

It's want. It's desire.

But it isn't love.

And that's just not enough.

Best lines of the fic hands down.  Thanks so much for posting these here.  They're awesome.

Reviewer: BlackMamba Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24/08/08 05:56 am

Title: Chapter 1

Oh, I loved this.

I liked that you gave a clear overview of the progression of their relationship, how feeling began to evolve over time, without her noticing until it was slightly too late. And her having that out, just in time to prevent her from making a mistake, that was a great ending.

I really loved this..

It's want. It's desire.

But it isn't love.

And that's just not enough.

Pretty much sums up the story I think.

Thanks for posting, reading this made my day!

 

Reviewer: TokenBlackGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/08/08 07:16 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Oh, I love this!!!!!!!!!! CSI Miami is the one of the franchise that I 'have' watched before ;) Thanks for this!

Reviewer: madame z Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/08/08 06:01 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Color me shocked.

You went there with Ryan and Alexx, but I have to admit I liked it.  Great job. 

Reviewer: pru Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22/08/08 04:47 pm

Title: Chapter 1

How bittersweet. I love the "Stay" and "Don't follow", they convey so much in so little words. I love the ending. It was poetic and just right.

Reviewer: luckybrans Signed [Report This]
Date: 22/08/08 04:43 pm

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