Tristan is a refreshingly well-rounded guy. I'm digging him already and Kenya...wow! The girl and her story blows me away. She deserves this opportunity of independence and education and all the good things in life. I admire her strength and perserverence.
Tristan and Kenya are soul mates destined to be together. I'm excited to see their story unfold.
Much thought and development went into this chapter; I throroughly enjoyed it.Great update!
Author's Response:
I really appreciate the praise. I like Tristan's character but I especially love Kenya and I'm glad you do too! I've put up a few more updates. Check them out if you have time! Thanks again for the review!
Liz
Reviewer: JV4ME Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 22/01/11 09:05 am
Great start ... interesting story line lets see where you take it...
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review! I've put up a few more chapters! Hope you enjoy them. Have a great week!
Liz
Reviewer: Read2Enjoy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/01/11 08:48 am
Please continue this story. I am enjoying it immensely!
Reviewer: Lady Siren Signed [Report This]Date: 22/01/11 07:39 am
great chapter :D
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for taking the time to review! Check out the other chapters if you have time! Have a great weekend!
Liz
Reviewer: mfoto22 Signed [Report This]Date: 22/01/11 07:09 am
good start - look forward to more! thanks for the update!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: 21/01/11 01:13 pm
Good start.
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to review! Have a great weekend!
Liz
Reviewer: R. Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/01/11 04:43 am
wow kenya been thu alot but love how strong she coming too making sure she don't play a victm but a strong woman who knows what she wanted in life. I hated high school too everyone had the click and just wanted to smack those girls who thought they were better then everyone. thanks for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 21/01/11 03:41 am
nice pic of the cast.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 21/01/11 03:37 am
I like this story, please update soon.
Author's Response:
Thanks for a great review and ratings Bain! Check out the updates if you have time! Have a great weekend!
Liz
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/01/11 03:23 am
Wow, I can't wait to read more. Kenya has guts and i appreciatethat.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/01/11 02:47 am
I like it. Please continue writing. Your story has an easy flow that enables me to follow each of its intricacies.
Reviewer: Lady Siren Signed [Report This]Date: 21/01/11 01:18 am
I'm liking this story can't wait to read more :D
Reviewer: mfoto22 Signed [Report This]Date: 21/01/11 01:14 am
I love the start. I wonder why she wanted to be emancipated and what the first day of school would be like! Update soon!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to review! I've updated a few chapters so check them out if you have time! Your question about Kenya's emancipation gets answered! Have a great weekend!
Liz
Reviewer: idiotendenial Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/01/11 12:59 am