I really wish he would have stayed with Ororo. You could tell how much they cared for one another but maybe proffesor X is right.Reviewer: Kiah Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/04/11 05:21 am
Will you be adding part two to this same story file or will be creating a new one for it?
I have to say, I don't know what I was expecting but it definitely wasn't for Logan to think hse's being abused and blow everything out of proportion even though it seems like Victor set it up like that on purpose.
I do wonder if their goodbye would've been calmer if that whole fight hadn't happened or it he would've just disappeared again since goodbye doesn't seem to be his strong suit.
Looking forward to book II.
I haven't quite decided on that yet. I suppose, I should start a new book.
Reviewer: Jammi Signed [Report This]
Date: 13/04/11 06:22 am
Wow! Intense chapter - more please!
Will do. Look out for Book II.Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/04/11 11:00 pm
TY for the update and the end of this one is it? I look forward to reading what has happened to Victor and who actually has him.
I felt it was a good stopping point. It resolved the major conflict of this first part- which was about forgiveness. Now, on to the next-- which will be about sacrifice.
Reviewer: Qsmommy05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/04/11 03:55 am
Oh my fruicking gosh this chapter was intense damn logan the freaking ahole uh wheres jean when you need her to keep his ass occupied how dare he jump to conclusion that victor would beat and force himself on ororo damn he didnt even giver her a chance just went off half cocked like always uh and damn i got a little teary eyed when victor got caught by some sick bastards and tortured and turned back into sabertooth ohh i absolutly love this story and can't wait for book 2 just absolutly flawless writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Thank you, dear! lol. You're reviews always bring a smile to my face.
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/04/11 09:52 pm
I've really enjoyed this story. Looking forward to book II. I found that I did not like Logan very much in the movies and your portrayal of him is spot on. He is a good guy but not very likeable and Victor is a bad guy but much more likable.
I agree. And sometimes, the bad guy is just so much more interesting.
Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 11/04/11 08:09 pm
My first impression was of gentleness. It was throughout the chapter in the way that he handled her. A very sensual chapter but one with much tenderness. Who knew that Vic could be that way.
Loved this chapter. well done, Chica.
Thank you! I really wanted Victor to be capable of something other than viciousness. And I wanted this to be something he shares ONLY with Ororo.Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/03/11 02:02 pm
I don't know, I feel like the lack of protection may come back and bite them in the ass, although I don't think Victor would mind a pregnant Ororo all that much, lol.
Great chapter, it didn't happen like I thought it would but that's a good thing because it still works really well. Annnd it was sexy as all get but still sweet. Great job.
Thanks hun. I am still playing around with scenarios from your first observation. Haven't quite decided if I will or if I won't.Reviewer: Jammi Signed [Report This]
Date: 29/03/11 01:01 am
That was beautiful. This is a painfully slow character development but it works very well. Good Job.Reviewer: Simone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29/03/11 12:44 am
Damn!, that was hot and tender, I love Victor's softer side...awesome writing skills - loved it, loved it! Update soon pretty please!Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/03/11 10:34 pm
I really like this story and this pairing. I think you are doing a fantastic story telling with this one and I'm enjoying this. Looking forward to your next update.Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 28/03/11 07:52 pm
This is great, very interesting and excviting.
Author's Response: Thank you, glad you like it.
Date: 20/03/11 03:52 am
I hope that Orora can convince Victor to stay.
Author's Response: I do too. But a man's gotta do, what a man's gotta do.
Date: 18/03/11 12:00 am
Fabulous writing. Awesomeness most definitely. Great job on the mirage.
I want, no, I NEED more...soon! :)
Author's Response: It's coming! I promise.
Date: 17/03/11 11:52 pm
Great update! Wonder who took his memory, and what did he see..? I love they way you've written the character of Victor, the loneliness and being an outsider, kind of brooding..- can't wait for more!
I'm combining Victor Creed/ Sabertooth incarnations in this story. I really liked the Liev Schrieber version in Origins. I liked it because it shows that he DOES have feelings other than hate and anger. But I also like the Comic character (when he's not on a killing spree) because he has a very dry sense of humor, but he's also highly intelligent and again he is capable of emotions like love (Birdy, Mystique aka Lennie) so I am trying to create a well-rounded character here.
Reviewer: aprilfool Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17/03/11 11:25 pm
I didn't think that I would like Victor. I am surprised that I do. Thanks
Author's Response: Thanks. He's not a complete ackass. And I saw that you reviewed every chapter! Wow, thank you for taking the time out and I'm glad you are enjoying this. Just a warning. This is only the first part to a two-part story.
Date: 17/03/11 08:02 pm