I enjoyed this story so much that I read it twice. You have a wonderful way with words and your prose really draws readers into the story. What a lovely read this was.
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Author's Response:
What kinds words! Thank you very much. This was one of my favorite stories to write.
Reviewer: OliviaDuBelle Signed
[Report This]Date: 30/07/11 07:42 pm
Great start.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 02/02/11 06:13 pm
This is a wonderful story and I am pleased you are sharing it here. As a reader who has admired your work long before I ever knew you personally, I can honestly say that the story you are crafting is one of your most powerful and poignant.
Reviewer: AquaSoulSis aka LadyFangs Signed [Report This]Date: 28/01/11 03:26 pm
spock a dad, what is the disease
Author's Response: It's not a disease, so much as it was an... event.
Date: 28/01/11 05:50 am
I love the start but what did the child do??? Who is being punished here???
Author's Response: All will be revealed as the chapters unfold.
[Report This]Date: 28/01/11 02:57 am
I like this story, please continuce.
Author's Response: Thank you. I've actually finished writing the story, so no worries about me continuing. There are still another seven chapters to come. I'm stilllearning to post to The Chamber, though.
[Report This]Date: 28/01/11 02:37 am