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Title: Until the Hour of Separation

Oh man, the anquish that they both are feeling as well as their child.  Will she ever be an adult again?  Is there some lesson that they are supposed to learn?  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/02/11 06:40 pm

Title: Until the Hour of Separation

Hmmm, let's see what he has to say now! Hope Nyota can keep it together.

Author's Response: You've hit the nail on the head. Because it's going to be her strength, or lack thereof, which will carrythem through -- or allows them to continue falling apart --  from this point on.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/02/11 02:08 am

Title: Until the Hour of Separation

oh he is catching it..

Reviewer: brownie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/02/11 01:37 am

Title: Until the Hour of Separation

Loveley story, but I need more.

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/02/11 07:08 pm

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