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Title: The Greatest Good

I enjoyed this story so much that I read it twice.  You have a wonderful way with words and your prose really draws readers into the story.  What a lovely read this was.

 

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Author's Response:

What kinds words! Thank you very much. This was one of my favorite stories to write.

 Reviewer: OliviaDuBelle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/07/11 07:42 pm
Title: Attribute of the Strong

Loved the update! Glad their family seem to be mending.

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Date: 04/02/11 02:33 am
Title: Attribute of the Strong

deep i like

 Reviewer: brownie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/02/11 11:18 pm
Title: Attribute of the Strong

Lovely story, now it time for me to read the chapters again.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

 Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/02/11 07:17 pm
Title: Far From Being One

Awh, that Eshu character is a tough cookie. I thought he would turn Nyota back into an adult but he turned Spock into a child too! Wow!! Glad Sanek accepted him. Looks like the family is mending! Yay!!!

Author's Response: LOL! Yeah, that was what Spock was expecting, as well. But Eshu is a Trickster and is wont to do the unexpected. Poor Spock should have realized that.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/02/11 03:43 am
Title: Far From Being One

so do they grow up together

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Date: 03/02/11 01:06 am
Title: Far From Being One

So they were meant to learn a lesson and now Spock id a little boy too.  Thanks

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/02/11 07:45 pm
Title: Until the Hour of Separation

Oh man, the anquish that they both are feeling as well as their child.  Will she ever be an adult again?  Is there some lesson that they are supposed to learn?  Thanks

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Date: 02/02/11 06:40 pm
Title: Necessary Ills

Thanks for a great update.

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Date: 02/02/11 06:37 pm
Title: Doom Me Not

Wow so she was turned into a child.  How sad.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/02/11 06:27 pm
Title: Shaken His Ankles Free

So she had an accident that made her a child again?

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/02/11 06:19 pm
Title: All Else Confusion

Thanks for the update.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/02/11 06:15 pm
Title: The Greatest Good

Great start.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/02/11 06:13 pm
Title: Far From Being One

Shock and suprise, You kick ass. I am waiting for the last chapter.

 Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/02/11 04:50 pm
Title: Until the Hour of Separation

Hmmm, let's see what he has to say now! Hope Nyota can keep it together.

Author's Response: You've hit the nail on the head. Because it's going to be her strength, or lack thereof, which will carrythem through -- or allows them to continue falling apart --  from this point on.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02/02/11 02:08 am
Title: Until the Hour of Separation

oh he is catching it..

 Reviewer: brownie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/02/11 01:37 am
Title: Until the Hour of Separation

Loveley story, but I need more.

 Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/02/11 07:08 pm
Title: Necessary Ills

Loved the update. Now he gets a taste of what she felt like being cut off from him emotionally/mentally. Hope he can handle better than she did.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/02/11 05:51 am
Title: Necessary Ills

Excellent and I hope they get back together.

 Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01/02/11 02:00 am
Title: Necessary Ills

they need a cure please

 Reviewer: brownie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 31/01/11 10:19 pm
Title: Doom Me Not

Well that update answered some questions for me, TY. Now, will she become an adult again?? Its a shame that this happened to her because the deity took offense to Spock's words.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/01/11 04:45 am
Title: Doom Me Not

Wonderful I need more, Please update soon. I am enjoying this story so much.

 Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/01/11 02:36 am
Title: Shaken His Ankles Free

What happened to Uhura??? How come she's as a child?? More please.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/01/11 08:10 am
Title: Shaken His Ankles Free

I love where you are going with this story. Please update soon

 Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/01/11 09:15 pm
Title: Shaken His Ankles Free

I adore all your work and this is probably one of my favorites even though it is very difficult to read at times because of the extremely emotional content. Difficult in a good way, a way that makes Kleenex happy. So glad you are posting here. Don't forget about the Animates!

Author's Response:

Thank you!

 

And don't worry... there is still one more chapter for Living Among People. It's undergone several revisions, but still isn't quite right. The moment I get there, I will post. Promise.

Reviewer: Onimosity Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/01/11 07:08 pm
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