Reviews For Flimsy brown bag
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Title: Chapter 1

So cute!!! Its amazing how you gave your characters life in such a short story.  

 Reviewer: MissTruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/10/14 03:46 am
Title: Chapter 1

Thanks for a cute story.  I liked 34D and Butterlfly Bailey.  Her friend picking up the ornament and leaving was funny.

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17/07/12 02:59 pm
Title: Chapter 1

cute!

 Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/03/11 07:29 pm
Title: Chapter 1

lol that was cute.... leave it to the readers to make their own ending ;)

 Reviewer: JJ0425 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/02/11 01:58 pm
Title: Chapter 1

Short and cute. Loved it!!!

 Reviewer: AJ Taylor Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13/02/11 05:28 am
Title: Chapter 1

That was really sweet!!

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Date: 12/02/11 01:56 pm
Title: Chapter 1

what a nice one-shot! short but sweet - thank you!

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Date: 12/02/11 11:12 am
Title: Chapter 1

Thanks for a cute story.  Looking forward to reading more. 

 Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/02/11 02:25 am
Title: Chapter 1

Me likey! More please.

 Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/02/11 01:32 am
Title: Chapter 1

OH MY GOOSHH, YOU CAN'T STOP THEEREEE!! MAKE IT A FULL BLOWN STORY PWEEAASEE HAHA, and he likes chocolate too ;) you can't deny the man his story haha. This was lovely :)

 Reviewer: Alphabet_Girl Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/02/11 01:11 am
Title: Chapter 1

What does Bailey look like? Jonah is fine. Ah, I want more.

 Reviewer: Anna Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/02/11 12:33 am
Title: Chapter 1

This is a super cute story. I just wish it were longer.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm working on a longer story that tells about their lives and their backgrounds.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/02/11 12:31 am
Title: Chapter 1

That was really sweet. Thanks!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Valhalla Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/02/11 12:30 am
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