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Title: Chapter 16 & Epilogue

Absolutely in love with this story. Your writing in the male perspective was awesome! Can't wait to read your other stories.

Reviewer: shadow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/06/14 07:35 am

Title: Chapter 1

Beautiful story, I fell in love with Sebastian :)

Reviewer: xiaomei21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28/03/14 08:10 pm

Title: Chapter 16 & Epilogue

Nice! is all i can say!

Reviewer: Sernity Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 20/02/13 12:20 am

Title: Chapter 16 & Epilogue

Good ending to a good story. His mom got all the grandbabies she want and that S is happy with his wife. Good job on the story and thank  for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/05/11 02:33 am

Title: Chapter 15

It good they talk out everything and understand they are diffrent people and to know that they still love each other. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/05/11 02:27 am

Title: Chapter 14

Good thing he came when he did because I had a feeling that he would killed dude if he didn't back off on his wife lol. They better get everything settle before they lose everything. Thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/05/11 02:20 am

Title: Chapter 13

Wow you got to love the bond he has with his son and him being a great  father.  I love his mom nick name shopzilla lol. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/05/11 02:12 am

Title: Chapter 12

Wow talk about being on cloud nine right now.  That crazy chick is out of their lives and they can be happy truely happy. I love how mom threated to help tummy get rid of his body if he didnt' ease up lol. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/05/11 02:01 am

Title: Chapter 11

She having a baby YEAH!!!  I love that they happily married and they about  to bring a baby in the world nice. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/05/11 01:50 am

Title: Chapter 10

Everything was beautiful her dress the wedding and him suprise her with earings necklace and braclet and the her fav singer or yeah he is very sexy doing that. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/05/11 01:37 am

Title: Chapter 9

Wow it the big day and it was so cute how he got upset when he found out she was having dancers at her party lol. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/05/11 01:27 am

Title: Chapter 8

I'm loving how she kick that crazy bitch ass and she got rid of her.  Kaiya warn her told her if she didn't stop she was going to get hurt big time and she did lol. Thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/05/11 01:20 am

Title: Chapter 7

Wow I hope that bitch Bianca get what coming to her for attacking Kaiya. I wonder what Seb got plan for that crazy chick? Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/05/11 01:09 am

Title: Chapter 6

Yeah that Bianca girl need help big time he dont' want you girl and is in love with  Kaiya and going to marry her. I bet his mom is going to be throwing the bigest bash  that Miami every see. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/05/11 12:49 am

Title: Chapter 5

Aww that so sweet he ask her in front of her kids and those two boys are two crazy lol. Love the ring he got her nothing more sexy then a man know how to pick out a ring. I don't like his dad he a ass hole. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/05/11 12:36 am

Title: Chapter 4

Glad they got back together and I can't wait to see how he going to ask her to marry him agian. That chick is crazy followed him home and then trying to put kayia in her place girl please. Thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/05/11 12:11 am

Title: Chapter 3

Oh crap Kayia  better watch out because It look like that sexy ex of yours plan to  win you back bigtime. Why is his dad suck a asshole to his son?  I wonder what does he have plan for her at the beach house? Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22/05/11 12:01 am

Title: Chapter 2

Aww how sweet  was that him telling her that he loves her and care for her. I like they build a friendship first before they went to the next level. I always be friend first  then lovers second.  Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/05/11 11:51 pm

Title: Chapter 1

Wow so it was love at first site for Jordan I like that. What did he do for her to not be with him anymore? His mom and dad is crazy not proud because he not some big shot doctor. Heck most mom and dad cant' get there kids to think about the futrue lol. I like it so far and thanks for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21/05/11 11:45 pm

Title: Chapter 1

That should be 5 stars don't know what happened there

Reviewer: Jules Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17/10/10 03:56 pm

Title: Chapter 16 & Epilogue

I absolutely loved this story, I'm glad Bas and Kai took all that was thrown at them in their stride.  Kai taking off her shoes and her earrings to beat down Bianca was a real laugh. 

Reviewer: Jules Anonymous starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 17/10/10 03:53 pm

Title: Chapter 16 & Epilogue

loved it man

Reviewer: Vonniiiboo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/10/09 04:06 pm

Title: Chapter 16 & Epilogue

This was a great story. Definitely a HEA romance.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27/04/09 05:29 am

Title: Chapter 10

This is a beautiful story. 

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/04/09 03:24 am

Title: Chapter 1

Hope J doesn't have to kick Basti's behind over Kaiya.

Reviewer: Jujubee50 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/04/09 11:06 pm

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