I'm smiling so wide right now, lol, adored this, adored them. I mean, he makes a reference to the fact that he would've raped her and it didn't phase me or bother me [all that much].
I love the set up and the way we see it from both of their POVs. Brilliant as usual. Is it a companion piece to In His Skin?
You know, I think it could be, though the timing of some scenes is a bit off. I did write this as a semi-companion, something a little more in-depth on their relationship... so yes...I think it can go as a companion.
I am so glad you liked it. Thank you.
Reviewer: Jammi Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/03/11 05:33 am
That was great. Love the 2 different perspectives and how each believed they were orchestrating the meetings.
I wrote Victor's part first. And I was going to leave it there, but I decided to take the same situation and flip it. How would a woman respond? How would a *real* woman respond to Victor Creed? And I went from there.
Thank you for taking the time to read and review.Reviewer: Dee Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/03/11 09:01 pm
Sigh!!!! I don't know if I can even express how well done that was.
It was beautiful and sexy and sensual and just awesome.
Author's Response: Thank you. I tend to like writing sex, but I like playing on the emotions that go along with it-- not just the physical act itself. So I am really happy you found it to be sensual. That was the balance I was hoping to strike on this one. Thank you so much. Reviewer: acorn Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 03/03/11 05:26 am
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I appreciate it.
Date: 03/03/11 03:11 am
Author's Response: THank you!
Date: 03/03/11 02:59 am
This was delicious. I felt like I was there. Well done!
Author's Response: Believe it or not, I actually dreamed this. That's how it started.When I woke up, I started writing it. It was so very nice in my dream, too. Thank you for enjoying my insanity!
Date: 03/03/11 02:43 am