OMG!!! I am so loving this story but it needs to seriously undergo some major editing. All of the grammar and spelling errors are so distracting it takes 2 to 3 times longer to read than it should. Please get an editor before you post anymore new chapter and fix the chapters that have already been posted first. But the plot is great and I can't wait to find out what happens next!!!
Reviewer: BossLady Signed
[Report This]Date: 10/05/12 10:25 pm
Look forward to the update whenever you are able.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 15/09/11 04:43 am
I know whats its liek to have a broken laptop.... I hope that its fixed soon, but we'll be here when you update.
Reviewer: ladyliberty Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/09/11 09:11 pm
Dressa, I'm not sure if you are aware of this but when others click on the the hyperlink to your name to try to view all of your stories, the stories are not the there. The only thing that appears is your bio info. In order to view you stories you have to click on the story titles themselves. Just thought you should know if you don't know already.
Reviewer: BossLady Signed [Report This]Date: 14/09/11 01:38 am
oh such a tease... clicked as fast as mouse could go... lol... looking forward to a real like realy update soon pretty please...
Reviewer: Mary P Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/09/11 12:43 am
Sadly, a lot of your pics don't upload...any chance of uploading. It' a great chapter with their intros.
Reviewer: vaberella Signed [Report This]Date: 12/08/11 09:51 pm
What do Kara and Maylin Watson look like? Can you send me a link at vaberella@yahoo.com. I'm a bit curious.
Reviewer: vaberella Signed [Report This]Date: 12/08/11 09:49 pm
Well,haven't read this is a while, but I am glad Delores is getting hers. Why doesn't Kara believe what her mother has done.
Twins! Nice.
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/07/11 04:33 am
Poor Kara!! She really needs to stop being in denial and realise that her mom is evil. Deloris admitted to the crimes and she nor Gage should escape punishment. Hope Leslie doesn't get hurt by Gabe as he obviously doesn't care for her. She needs to move on and try to be happy. Glad Jonas is there for her.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 31/07/11 02:27 am
Kara is in denial, Gage and your moma admit that they were having sex, Darwood also said that he saw Deloris after she had murdered MaryAnn. Kara your momma is a crazy murdering ho, accept and then move on.
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 31/07/11 02:23 am
That was DRAMATIC... Kara knows that her mother did all the things that Stacey and Leslie said she did, but HEAD has to catch up to her HEART, Deloris has been there for her though everything aan IMO she doesn't want to lose her.
Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/07/11 01:30 am
Kara is such a bitch. She is in denial. I don't care that she is pregnant and that her hormones are high. Her mother practically confessed that she did all those thing, but Kara still refused to believe it. Someone please slap that bitch so she can wake up. She is always judgmental and selfish. Bitch!!!
Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/07/11 12:50 am
Loved it!! Go get em Stacey!! Can't wait for the showdown to get started.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 23/07/11 04:33 am
OH YES, Karma is coming for Deloris, and I can't wait, I hope that Leslie doesn't chicken out and let Stacey down.
Oh and Stacey is right, Gage doesn't love Leslie at all, she is being a DOORMAT for him, she needs to take Stacey's advice.
Please hurry with more.
Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/07/11 02:06 am
Cant wait for the show down
Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed [Report This]Date: 22/07/11 10:09 pm
The shit is about to hit and it won't be pretty. Deloris is crazy and Gage is even crazier. I know that the baby she is carrying is her cousin's. I love this story!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 22/07/11 08:37 pm
Deloris is a skank...wow...does she have no scruples.
can't wait to see her go down
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/07/11 01:04 pm
Wow, Cortez is a good actor. Wonder who is paying him off to take the fall? Deloris is a mess!!!
Wonder if she really preggers??? And if she is could the baby be Gage's? Why is Abe not questioning why she thinks he made her preggers?? Does he recall sleeping with her? I feel the drama is about to begin. Poor Maylin.
[Report This]Date: 19/07/11 06:13 am
Damn Deloris is crazy...how Kara for the most part came out so normal, I don't know...
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: 19/07/11 05:51 am
Boy, oh boy, getting good
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: 19/07/11 03:49 am
This story is leaving me with Lock Jaw... I think that Cortez is lying, ans for Deloris, she is not pregnant, she is just so DEVIOUS, I can't wait for her to get what coming to her.
Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/07/11 09:00 pm
Deloris is crazy, and I hope that he doesn't believe that baby is his. Because she is doing her cousin who happens to be married!! When is Deloris going down? She needs to pay for her treachery. Great chapter!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 18/07/11 08:30 pm
I LOVE THIS STORY!! Please keep it up! The drama is like a soap opera. Love it! And that wench Laureana isn't fooling anyone, she doesn't want Shannon and marcus to fall in love again. And if I was Leslie, I'd kick Gage and Deloris's butt. Great job.
Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed [Report This]Date: 14/07/11 12:23 am
Oh oh, there's gonna be a showdown and Deloris and Gage wont know what hit them. Glad the ladies had Shannon's back.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 14/07/11 12:13 am
I was to lazy to log-in. I like the story from what I have read but there are some hole in the story that are bothering me like things just keep happening with little details confusing me of what is happening exactually. And you need to remember to use commas to help the sentence structure so that some of the dialects isn't so arkwark. And the paragraphs are broken up sort of funny so that might be just the format. I do like the idea of the story and it reminds me of a story i read a while back. Keep writing.
Reviewer: ChristinaElizabeth Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13/07/11 11:08 pm