Okay-- first up, thanks for clearing up a few points for me.

Second, WTH, boy I did not see that one coming!  Deloris is a vindictive, murdering, crazy ass bitch, and Jonas is a selfish, conniving, bigamist!  Screw that polygamy shit!  It's polygamy when you let me know BEFORE you marry me, bigamy, if I don't find out until after!  

Third. Abe, Abe, Abe.  Karma is a bitch.  You had an affair, which messed up crazy ass Deloris EVEN more, and she spread that to your child.  I don't know if there can ever be peace with Maylin and Al.  Just be glad that you and Abe have some sort of a realtionship.

Great story!  Dont' know how it will play, but I kind of hope that Kara finds somebody else.  No longer team Jonas.  It isn't even about the wives.  It's about his character, his selfishness.  His being too much like his spoiled, jealous Mama! Who is almost, but not quite, as bad as Deloris.

i am loving the fact that she is 4'11 ... yay for the short people =)

WTH???!! Hmm, I guess the saying ...marry in haste repent at leisure has some truth in this case!!! Her mom has lost her damn mind!!! She set up her daughter to be hurt , not even telling her the truth to make her own decision. Jonas is a darn liar too. He really has some nerve!! He  married her under false pretenses and just expects her to accept the situation without protest. I hope when she finds out what her mom has done, she gives her a reality check. What mom does that to her own child?? Deloris is a hateful b*tch and I think she killed her brother!!! 

Who is the she, sounds like trouble!

Abel is right it wasn't all her fault, but she did have an affair with a married man. I can see her being upset with her.

What the devil??? Okay, but really I know this kind of thing happens more often than some people might believe. It's just below the radar so to speak. I still hope Kara fights Jonas. She is finding relief by using his body, but she is making it that much easier for him. Loved how fast you updated. Two in one day! Thanks! Cannot wait for more and what deranged plan Jonas has in store.

OMG! I don't know what I was expecting his secret to be, but it wasn't that! Wow, you really threw me for a loop. That was a good one. He has a lot of nerve, what a hoe. I have the attitude, to each is own for everything, but when you involve people with no idea, you are being deceitful. Which Jonas apparently could care less about. He saw Kara, wanted her, and got her.

Kara is not innocent in this either. Their lack of relationship developed overnight and they went and got married a day later it seemed. Now that he has staked his claim, he has told her in so many words that he will not let her go. This dude needs to get a grip. The only thing I would be thinking is 'this fool is crazy and we'll see.' In a twisted way, I think Jonas does love Kara but not enough. It is going to interesting how you procede with this story. Great update!

Love the story but a bit confused.  Who are the two people talking in the elsewhere paragraph?  You'll probably explain soon and I'll just have to wait.

umm does Al resent Kara just for being born...cuz it seems that way. As for respecting maylin. kinda hard to respect someone who is semi responsible for your family being torn apart. but if she's going to be in maylin's house she should at least act civil. 

Wow, what an update!!! Mama Stacey seems to be a closet racist even to the point of denying her own grandchild!!!! Now Kara and Jonas are being impulsive and I hope they don't live to regret it.

That kiss was smoking, I can't wait for the sexing to commence.  Who told Kara that Jonas was seeing some body?  I can't wait for the next chaper!!

Can't wait to read more :)

Interesting start, please continue.