Just tuned into this story and I love it . please update soon
Reviewer: brownie Signed [Report This]Date: 17/06/11 12:45 am
I am glad that Jonas was freed, but I really want her crazy momma to pay for the things that she did wrong. Deloris is pure evil and should pay the ultimate price with her life. Thanks for the update, I really missed this story!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 16/06/11 07:54 pm
Thank You for letting us know. But you have to take care of your life :).
Reviewer: Cimmy1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/04/11 04:25 am
Do what you have to do, we'll be waiting.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 13/04/11 02:08 am
I pray that everything works out for you!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 12/04/11 07:30 pm
LOL Deloris thinks she is so smart. WHAT a psycho!
He didn't think to record the conversation???
This story sure took an interesting turn; can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: 100percentfan Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 04/04/11 01:18 pm
OH S$##@!!!! This is story is the BOMB!! I was sooo not expecting this level of pure family mobster drama, LOL!!! Great update, I just wish it was more Jonas and Kara though..
Great job, I can't wait for the next chapter :-)
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: 04/04/11 05:51 am
Now is Deloris has pulled Darwood into her craziness, what else will happen? I want that crazy heifer to die, she can't keep on getting away with murder. I don't want Jonas to go jail for a crime that he didn't commit. Who is Deloris going to frame now? I love this story!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 04/04/11 05:16 am
I never thought I would be rooting for Stacie but Go Stacie Go! Make that crazy heffer pay.
Jonas and Kara can't catch a break.
Reviewer: Liason4220 Signed [Report This]Date: 04/04/11 03:31 am
Oh hell noooo!!!! Deloris set up Darwood!!! He walked right into her trap. Hope the truth comes out and they put her away for good. Hmm, wonder what Stacey is gonna do??? Hope she doesn't get herself killed in the process. Wonder what's up with the cop who is hassling Jonas??? Feel sorry that Jonas though. Hope Darwood can get him free.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 04/04/11 02:55 am
OMG!!! This chapter was bananas!! I can't wait for more.. Poor Kara, thank goodness Jonas was there to protect.. I WANT MORE!! Lol, great job :-)
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: 27/03/11 08:53 pm
The polygamy aspect of this story almost made me stop reading it. I'm glad I stuck with it; I probably wouldn't have if Jonas had remained in the group marriage. Crazy ass Deloris is another reason to keep reading. I hate her actions but she's an interesting character, one I can't wait to see get what she deserves. The cavalier way she told the story of the little boy dying while she was babysitting him was the first clue that she is a psycho and has been for years. I feel sorry for Kara and even Abe if she is pregnant. Love this story.
Reviewer: Liason4220 Signed [Report This]Date: 27/03/11 07:04 pm
Don't how I missed that after the first reading, but it was Deloris crazy ass that shot Maryann. Who did call to track that jealous hussy down? Deloris needs to be in jail or dead!! Love this story now. I hope that Jonas not to go in the room when he finds Marann's body. Just wonderful!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/03/11 05:23 pm
This has got to be one of the craziest, wierdiest stories I've ever read, but I really dig it. This is definitely something outside of the box. Love it. Please update soon.
Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed [Report This]Date: 26/03/11 04:18 pm
Wow, wonder who killed Maryanne??? Deloris is my top contender. Don't trust her as far as she can be thrown. Can't wait until this mystery is solved!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 26/03/11 08:17 am
Who was that that Maryann let into her room? That Deloris heifer is crazy and I am waiting for her to pay the ultimate price. I don't see Jonas bringing a gun to his converation with Maryann so it has to be whoever Deloris called. But she knew the person whom she let in ? That was good, you got me thinking. Great update.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/03/11 08:06 am
Wow, feel sort of sad for Mona but she sort of had that coming. I feel worse for Al as he seemed abit confused but hopefully he can work it out. Deloris is such a schemer but her reign of terror needs to be put to a STOP!! Poor Maylin, wonder if Abe will tell her about Deloris. He shouldn't have trusted her. Glad Shannon did the right thing and hope she and Marcus can make it work.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 25/03/11 05:19 am
What is Shannon up to? I don't trust that hobag, she is up to no good. Deloris trying to get pregnant by Abe, how old is she again? What other evil will Deloris do? This story is amazing.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 25/03/11 03:34 am
gotta say the summary doesnt do justice to this story
I read it in one setting and was cracking up and crying with the characters.
mom D is crazy she should be locked up in the coocoo house-please dont punish Abe by allowing her crazy ass to become preggers.
maryann needs a life. she needs a new hobby since she lost her partner in crime. Ay least sam was smart.
I actually didnt see Kara cohabiting with multiple wives so I am glad she and Jonas are working things out.
Mona....dont know how I feel about that yet, but I feel bad for Al. Now Kara will be in a predicament between secretary and bro ... Cant wait to read about that
Shan and Marcus I hope they can work it out. Her momma is def a H.A.M.-HOT ASS MESS. I hope her husband leaves her penniless and she has to work as a maid for a black family.
great story...update sooooooon :D
[Report This]Date: 25/03/11 01:57 am
OH, The Drama!!! LOL!! Please post soon, I hope Kara gets through all this okay. I'm lovin how Jonas is getting closer to Kara with their first baby on the way. Great job!! :)
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: 22/03/11 06:24 pm
Interesting family! LOL!! I wish Kara would be a little more loving to Jonas, he is trying. Though I don't like how he destroyed her hard work but he is making it up to her ten fold. I hope Kara can find it in her heart to let Jonas in a little.. Great story, I wish the chapters were longer, I can't wait for more :)
Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed [Report This]Date: 22/03/11 06:15 pm
Loved the update. Jonas needs to do something with Maryanne as she's desperate and she may try to hurt Kara. As for Deloris....there's just no words for her. Hmmm, as her punishment she should become preggers but that would only put another child in her evil paws. She too much!!
I can see the drama surrounding Mona.....she needs to come clean to Al. I can see that info messing with his head. He's definitely gonna be stunned and hurt. I don't know if Mona is gonna be good for him except for the sex. They already starting off on the wrong foot.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 22/03/11 07:12 am
What did Mona expect after Al is Kara's brother and that is where her loyalty should lie. Deloris is crazy as hell, and I thought that Abe knew that so why is he falling for the banana in the tale pipe? When Jonas's father going to divorce Stacey? That heifer makes my teeth itch, Maryann is a sniveling idiot what did Jonas see in her. Great Chapter.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 22/03/11 06:16 am
Omg! This story has more drama than a Spanish telenovela. I'm still waiting for Kara to dump Jonas. It just doesn't make sense for her to be cool with him after all the lies and manipulation. She needs to take the baby and move far, far away from the insanity that surrounds her.
Reviewer: peachmartini Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/03/11 10:12 pm
Wow, Maryanne is having a breakdown and Sam has found a man. Good for her!! Now Maryanne looks like she's gonna be a problem. Hmm, I think Deloris is behind that attack on Maylinn and I hope she is exposed!! She's pure evil! Mona, Mona, Mona..... I can see the sh*t hitting the fan when Alastair finds out the truth. She should have been honest and allowed him to make the choice.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 21/03/11 06:12 am