Has Mona had the whole operation, is he/she penisless? Great chapter!!! I think that I am starting to Jonas again, that heifer Maryann needs to be slapped. I am so glad that Sam has found her true love she deserves it. Maryann deserves alone and destitute just like Deloris. I can't believe that Abe fell for the bananna in the tale pipe. Did Maylinn see who stabbed her? I so love this story!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/03/11 02:31 am
DELoris is DELirious - wow...did not see that coming! thanks for the update!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: 20/03/11 09:12 pm
First I'm liking the cast that you have used for the story. I haven't made it through all the chapters but I will honestly say I'm not a fan of how fast it is going. I would love to see some pacing and back ground information coming into play before the two actually meet. So far so delicious. It is a tad bit hard To read so spacing is needed! Thanks.
Reviewer: LunarAngel Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/03/11 08:21 pm
Deloris is one nasty B****. Loved the update, do it again soon.
Reviewer: Gale Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 20/03/11 01:50 am
Deloris is out of her mind, but she knows exactly what she is doing. The woman is sociopath, but how was she able to raise Kara so well? Would she kill Kara if she thought that she was losing her? I think that she would. Great update!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/03/11 11:18 pm
OMG-Deloris is CRAZY! Great update - cant wait to read more.
Reviewer: katie Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/03/11 08:37 pm
I love that Abe and her brothers kick Jonas' ass, that was beautiful. I don't understand why Kara is still married to this fool, there is not need for an annulment as those types of marriages are illegal. I want Jonas to get rid of his others wives and if he really loves Kara he will do just that. Deloris is crazy!!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 19/03/11 06:25 am
Interesting update with the men fighting. Kara got what she wanted but the other ladies now feel neglected. I feel there's gonna be some tension in Jonas' home. Hmmm, is Deloris planning on killing someone, namely Maylin???? Deloris is CRAZY!!!! Its gonna be interesting to see how this story turns out.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed
[Report This]Date: 19/03/11 05:26 am
i guess i can give Jonas kudos for being honest and telling Kara that he was behind everything but still...i admire Kara for even going near the guy! she should've added a restriction order or something, lol! i guess things are going to be interesting from here now - thanks for the update!
Reviewer: Cassius.Noir Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/03/11 12:59 pm
Absolutely fantabulous update!!! I can't wait to see how Daddy reacts when he finally sees Jonah!
Reviewer: bama_belle Signed [Report This]Date: 18/03/11 08:05 am
Hmmm, I don't know if I'm feeling Jonas. He's just not a nice man. He's turning out just as bad as his mom being underhanded and manipulative and using his money to do the most ridiculous things! WTH is wrong with him??? At times he seems like an airhead!!!
Well, I hope she gets what she wants from him but sharing her supposed man with not one but two other women is abit unusual not to mention NOT LEGAL. I guess I'm not feeling all the polygamist relationship as someone always seems to get the sh*tty end of the stick.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 18/03/11 04:18 am
Jonas is going to have his ass kicked by daddy,her stepmother and her brothers. I wouldnt be surprised if he and her crazy assed mom had cooked up this sick plan.
Reviewer: jai_03 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/03/11 02:44 am
Deloris is nuttier than a fruit cake. How is she able to hide her insanity from everyone? The only person that I like in this story is Abel, Kara needs to wake up and smell the coffee.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/03/11 01:50 am
I am liking that fool Jonas less and less. He doesn't love Kara he only wants to possess her. The poor needs to get smart in hurry. Could you please give her mother a massive heart attack or something. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: pmgayles Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/03/11 01:40 am
That's what I'm talking about!!!!! If Jonas' junkie butt is going to play Captain Cave man, it should be under Kara's terms and her terms are good. Even though I am not fond of Jonas, I appreciate that he did not lie to Kara about making her jobless and homeless. Love the quick updates!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 18/03/11 12:16 am
what a sneeaky bastard...! i really though in the end Jonas would be a guy to count but no, he is a damn snake! pleeease don't let Kara end up with him! i hope she finds a better man with comman damn sense because clearly Jonas is a nutcase! thanks for the update! i want more but know you have school so i'll wait "patiently" lol!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: 17/03/11 05:25 pm
Jonas has to suffer. I swear make his a*s suffer. Not only is he in the process of sabotaging Kara's life, he wants to control it as well. That sh*t is tired. He has two other wifes and wants Kara to come ready and willing. Ugh, uh, I don't think so. Know is walks in like her knight and shining armor. He thinks he has Kara right where he wants her. I hope Kara doesn't budge. I guess when you were fired and becoming evicted, plu pregnant, that will make you do things you would not normally do or give into. Well, I know that is what Jonas is hoping for. What am I saying, he knows he has Kara now. The bastard. I can't stand when people try to control other people's lives by any means necessary. Jonas is outdoing himself. I hope is explodes in his face!!!!!!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/03/11 05:19 pm
Ok Jonas has really gone too far! I know he wants Kara but if she finds out this will all backfire. He is too obsessed with her and that isn't healthy. This story certainly has a lot of twists and turns. Very exciting!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: 17/03/11 04:59 pm
Not liking Sam and Maryanne and their sneaky ways. From the get go they've been causing trouble for Kara. They're trouble makers!! Can't wait to see what Jonas does next!! I don't think she'll ever get rid of him now. Glad Kara and Maylin decided to give each other a chance. Oh nooo, Deloris has that evil look again. I would be scared, very scared!!!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 16/03/11 07:57 am
Girl, keep it coming. This story just gets better and better!!
Reviewer: sandr Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/03/11 06:49 am
This story just keeps getting more and more interesting. I'm not sure how I feel about the multiple wives angle but I will keep reading.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: 15/03/11 06:38 pm
not surprised over Deloris's reaction at all. i hope Kara gets the chance and tells her that no matter what she is her mother but she can do without the stress and hostility the family has, especially now that she's having a baby - and Jonas baby at that, lol! she won't getting ride off him anytime soon, lol! look forward to the next update, thank you!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: 15/03/11 01:10 pm
LOL, this story is crazzzy but good! i was ready to side with Kara and her mother because i understand Kara's feelings but now...wow! but still Abe could have fought harder if he wanted a relationship with Kara. Jonas is a dog, he should've been honest right from the start and given Kara a choice but she was crazy too for marrying a guy she has known for two weeks...!
wow, i'm off to read the next chapter - this is very entertaining, thank you!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: 15/03/11 12:59 pm
Great start can't wait to read more :D
Reviewer: mfoto22 Signed [Report This]Date: 15/03/11 09:56 am
the story is a litltle crazy and the formating needs serious work.
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 11/03/11 05:38 pm