I would like to bite it please ;0) GRRRR!!! NOw update. These people are about to pull a very clean and pure girl into there raunchy life. I don't know if MJ is ready for that, SMILE BUT WE ARE!!!!!! KILLING IT LADIES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Cimmy1
Your appreciate is appreciated, lady! We are working over here to bring you an interesting story.
As for MJ, she'd better get ready, that's all we can say.
Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 14/04/11 07:38 am
Woah buddy. MJ is so not ready for this. Maybe instead of the trio corrupting her, MJ will be a positive influence on them (I doubt it, too, lol). I'm looking forward to finding out exactly what is the nature of Kieren/Ronnie/Ian's relationship (although some aspects of it seem obvious, lol). And I'm also curious to read how MJ will react to it all.
Great update! Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response:
Kieren, Ronnie, and Ian are very close. I to wonder how MJ will react. She's not saying much right now.
Love
Reviewer: emme Signed [Report This]Date: 14/04/11 06:41 am
Wait??? What's going on here??? Are they sharing women??? Hmmm, different but is Ian trying to engage MJ into a 3/foursome??? I don't know if its gonna work but I guess one can never tell.
Author's Response:
Hi Baha!
Thanks for your review and thanks for reading. We shall see what Ian has up his sleeve for MJ.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed
[Report This]Date: 14/04/11 04:40 am
Interesting. I don't know if I like Ronnie. Not sure if shy and humble MJ is ready for this. More please and thank you.
Author's Response:
Ronnie isn't a paper doll, so stick round, there are more layers to come.
Love
Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 14/04/11 02:22 am
I would love to know how they are going to ease a nice, conservative girl from Nebraska into a Foursome. This is a great story. Love it!
Author's Response:
Crisco!*Wink*
Love
Reviewer: Shereads48 Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 14/04/11 01:58 am
I like it, looking forward to the next update...
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: 14/04/11 01:32 am
This story is about to take off. I love every single one of your characters!!! Your doing a great job ladies please keep it coming; I really want to know how MJ will take the VCK relationship.
Author's Response:
MissCO:
We can feel the excitement building too!!
Reviewer: MissCO Signed [Report This]Date: 13/04/11 09:51 pm
If I would to describe this story in one word I would say Zippy or Sly. But it just bounces right along, very crafted. I am intrigued.
Author's Response:
I like zippy, it reminds me of that Disney song.
Love
Reviewer: Onimosity Signed [Report This]Date: 13/04/11 08:35 pm
there is a good plot behind the story but honestly its a little hard to read and figure out who is who and what is going on especially in the last chapter. overall an A for effort but perhaps a bit of cleaning up around the edges?
Author's Response:
Hi Anonymous:
Cliff's Notes version coming Fall 2012.
Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/04/11 05:46 pm
LADIES! LADIES!
In the word of Fabulous
Ain't goin stress you But I ma letchu know GIRLS
You be killing em ♥ Be killing em
You be killing em ♥ Be killing em
I will be living vicariously through them!! I want to be just as adventurous as you two Ladies ;0)!!! Now update and LAY IT DOWN!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Squeeee!!!
So glad you are loving it cimmy!, we are too!!
Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/04/11 05:38 am
Woot! to celadon!
Seriously though, this chapter had a great setup for what's to come. MJ is not ready, but methinks she's about to get a crash course. I hope once her master class is over, she's ready to try new things…like two brothers and the girl they both seem to have sex with.
Thanks for sharing!
Reviewer: emme Signed [Report This]Date: 05/04/11 05:59 am
Hi FOXY N LOVE, ? are there two people writing this story. Just asking because you said "tell us what You think" Like the story so far! Update!
Author's Response:
Yes, sis, there are two of us writing the story!! So glad you're enjoying our little ride!! We're having a good time writing it.
Foxy
Reviewer: cimmy1 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/04/11 03:39 am
i like it! more please.
Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/04/11 01:42 am
I love your story so far. It is going to sexy and fun. I'm looking forward to reading more!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: 01/04/11 01:07 am
Foxy nice job. You have my interest and I m looking for the next update.
Author's Response:
Hey sis, thanks so much for your review. So glad we were able to catch your interest with our little story!!
Foxy
Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed [Report This]Date: 31/03/11 10:15 pm
And it just keeps on flowing. Mr. Max is something else, but sure he's really nice underneath it all. Glad you updated so soon, keep it up!!
Reviewer: Domino Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/03/11 02:48 pm
Great start! This reminds me of those Jackie Collins stories - I already like the characters!
Reviewer: Domino Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/03/11 02:47 pm
ummmm...what is ronnie up to?
captivated by what i've read so far. what does ronnie have to do with max; was she a bond's girl?
Author's Response:
Ronnie is always up to something.
Love
Reviewer: 100%fan Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/03/11 10:54 am
yaaay, been waiting for this update! thank you so much! now Ian has found MJ - poor girl, she has no idea of what's heading her way lol!
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: 31/03/11 10:31 am
I love the different characters you are introducing or at least the way you are writing them. MJ doesn't realize how beautiful she is but it seems like she's surrounded by women with enough self confidence to share.
Author's Response:
Hopefully her experience as a Bond girl will help MJ really blossom. Thanks for the comment and for reading!
Foxy
Reviewer: Liason4220 Signed [Report This]Date: 31/03/11 09:02 am
Loved the update !! Ian has finally made contact with MJ. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 31/03/11 07:01 am
I love it! More please. It is going to be interested to see Cillian and MJ interact and quite fun actually. MJ seems so sweet and innocent, although I have a feeling that she is not too naive. Cillian on the other hand seems experienced and a tad calculating. I cannot wait for more.
Author's Response:
Cillian loves to calculate the risks.
Love
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 31/03/11 06:19 am