Also, I think both Aster and Hanna know that Boon watches them fucking on the patio.
I felt so sorry for Boon when Astor came to the gallery and took Hanna's attention immediately; Boon became non-existent to Hanna!Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: 21/01/12 12:35 am
I want to add this comment to my previous review: I loved the description of creating a wood sculpture synonymous to how you mold your hearts desire into the type of lady you want her to be and that she also loves only you.Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/01/12 11:40 pm
I loved how his watching the couple was told, I joined in voyeuring with him and it was intriguing. Also, it was highly erotic the voyeur's reaction to his watching! So i wonder all sorts of questions about why he peeps, does he have a problem with the ladies and what is the problem? I'm not condemning is voyeurism, just curious about him!
I am just dying to know who each of these three characters are!Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/01/12 02:00 pm
ended too soon - look more than forward to the continuation! there's more to this story. a mystery that needs to be solved, thanks for sharing - hope you update soon!
Well then, its time to start it back up! The new part is waiting for you. Thank you!Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/04/11 12:45 pm
Great cast pics! And that Aster is...mmhmm. Anyhoo I really can't wait for the next installment to this series cause there's still so many more questions I have but won't ask cause I know they wil be answered soon.
YAY!!! Boon's no longer a voyeur. I was cheering for him.
Thanks! Well the second part has arrived. Hope to get to those questions soon. Lastly, Boon may need your cheers.
:)Reviewer: Music Signed [Report This]
Date: 16/04/11 06:58 am
Loved the ending. I'm still afraid he's going to wish he was only still watching from that window. This is beautifully written. Thanks.
Thank you! We will see, we will see. :)
(2nd part has arrived)Reviewer: peach martini Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/04/11 06:46 pm
great update! okay, maybe I was wrong about Aster. It seems that he took his little heart to heart with Boon seriously, and he really does care about her. Is Baal Hannah's raping step-mama? Can't wait for part II.
Maybe you are and maybe you aren't....hmmmm. No Baal is not the step-mom.
Thanks!Reviewer: ladybird08 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/04/11 05:05 pm
Boon, Boon, Boon, smh. I know you wanted her badly. But it's almost like you were sleeping with Aster considering they just "cooled it". All's I could picture when they were doing it was a fly being snared in a spider's web. I guess it's too late for Boon to RUN, NOW!!!
Good way to end this part. Poor Boon.
Oh! I like your description of what is happening. Thank you!
(2nd part is here)
:)Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/04/11 10:52 am
so aster just gave up that quick? interesting. i'm not sure i believe that to be totally true lol. very good, can't wait for your next installment.
You hold on to that thought. :)Reviewer: allnblack Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 15/04/11 03:37 am
Beautiful, confusing, intriguing and it all makes perfect sense(if that makes any sense). Can't wait to read more about these guys.
LOVED your review! Thank you! :)
The second part has arrived...Reviewer: thicknsweet88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/04/11 08:52 pm
just discovered this story, love it. and i really like aster, i was not prepared for that! can't wait to see how this story plays out.
Glad you like the story. Yea for Aster, I think he has 3 fans now. :)Reviewer: allnblack Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/04/11 04:01 pm