Sexy cast!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! :)
Reviewer: Leogina Signed [Report This]Date: 09/04/11 03:28 am
Yes, very interesting. . . maybe Aster's not the one who keeps the relationship at a booty call level.
Author's Response:
Maybe not! I can't tell though. Thanks!
Reviewer: DiamondLady28 Signed
[Report This]Date: 08/04/11 08:19 pm
don't know how i missed this story - it's interesting as hell and i can't wait to see how things play out! thanks for bringing something intriguing and different!
Author's Response:
I know how, it doesn't have a banner. *sighs* But I'm glad you found it! You are most welcome and I thank you.
Reviewer: Cassius_Noir Signed [Report This]Date: 08/04/11 04:03 pm
I just KNEW Aster was aware of Boon watching them have sex...
Author's Response:
Too smart, too smart! :)
Reviewer: c. o. Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/04/11 06:34 am
[blinks]
The heck just happened? That was plain ol wierd. Kinda figured Aster knew Boon was watching him and Hanna doing the nasty. What is the deal with Aster cause that threw me for a loop really. Boon did have a point at what he told Aster though. Seemed like Aster realized something too. I don't know....
Great update and yes things are getting extremely interesting.
Author's Response:
I know, right? Who is Aster? We will get more of him in Part II.
Thank you!
Reviewer: Music Signed [Report This]Date: 07/04/11 07:55 am
I knew Aster knew that Boon was watching. But the big question is, did Hanna know?
Boon might be a perv but he seems the most "normal" of all these freaks. I still say run, Boon, run. These folks are not be messed with. Boon has no real clue who these people are.
Author's Response:
You are too smart for words. I'll just answer your question, no Hanna didn't know. Yes, is is the most normal so far. And I think you give very good advice.
:)
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: 07/04/11 05:35 am
Thanks for the comment, Peach Martini's are my signature drink.
If anyone deserved to get laid it was Boon! His been a pervert for months and no he plays shy brother, please!
Now Aster's the voyeur, but I did like him just a scoche this chapter. Maybe Hanna should keep him and Boone can stalk a more stable chick?
Hanna's a walking pervert attraction and kinda messed up in the head too.
I want to see the two person stool, sound kinky. ;}
Hit us again!
Author's Response:
You have a signature drink? You are so cool! I want a signature drink...
As to getting laid. Its all about the build up. EEk, you used 'scoche' love that word! Poor Hanna, everyone is turning their back on her. As to the two person stool, see chapter notes for Opaque Conquest (next chapter).
Thanks!
Reviewer: peach martini Signed [Report This]Date: 07/04/11 01:58 am
I must say that was totally weird!!! WTH does Aster want and why is he all up in Boon's stew if he's so confident??!!! Both he and Hanna seem a bit off. Wonder what's the catch???!!!
Author's Response:
Yes it was, yes they may be. Catch coming up.
:)
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 06/04/11 11:06 pm
This chapter was good. Where are you taking us I Cant wait to go.
Author's Response:
We are going round and round the Mauberry bush (well, some kind of bush like that). :)
Author's Response:
We are going round and round the Mauberry bush (well, some kind of bush like that). :)
Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed [Report This]Date: 06/04/11 06:12 pm
No fair!! It's too late. You can't make me start to reconsider Aster at this late date. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Yes, I know, it is unfair isn't it? *laughs wickedly*
Reviewer: ladybird08 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/04/11 05:58 pm
MORE PLWEASE!! I prefer Boon though, nice-prevert guys should get the girl first and last *wink*
Ps. Can we get some pics, GREAT JOB :-)
Author's Response: Thank you. I am currently working on cast photos, yes. Reviewer: sweetlooking218 Signed
[Report This]Date: 06/04/11 04:03 am
Hmm, something seems off about Hanna??? She seems unstable??? Wonder what hold does Baal and Aster have over her??? Still think Boon needs to be careful before he gets hurt. Its like Boon is being sucked in and he's not thinking clearly.
Author's Response: Off? Unstable? I like your summation of Boon there.
[Report This]Date: 06/04/11 01:44 am
Did she pay Baal with nookie? Hanna has some serious issues, including Baal and Aster. I hope Boon doesn't continue to let her abuse his affections for her. She's going to hurt him and I'm going to have to break those artistic hands or burn some stuff like her mama.
Author's Response:
My favorite martini.
LMAO! Many readers are asking the same type of question, though not as direct..ehem. Your reaction is kind of scary though.
:)
Reviewer: peach martini Signed [Report This]Date: 05/04/11 11:48 pm
I swear I don't understand Hanna! And WTF is up with Baal? Just what kind of "payment" did she demand?!? Good job!
Author's Response: Thank you. Hanna is complex yes. Baal is evil yes. As to the 'payment'... *shrugs shoulders*
[Report This]Date: 05/04/11 04:27 pm
O_O
What is the deal with Ms. Hanna? Got a feeling it has alot to do with Baal. (then again im not sure.) I'm happy Boon can see something isn't right with Hanna but won't press her on it. He just needs to tread lightly. These mysterious characters got me giving them the eye.
I guess we're due for more Aster. [eyes him all suspicious like] He's not my favorite but I do want to know more about the mystery that is him and Baal for that matter.
Another great update! I'm even more intrigued now.
Author's Response:
Nice face.
Yes I saw your rendition of the eye, but I still laughed when you said that. So you are wary of Aster? Good. As to Baal, she is evil.
Reviewer: Music Signed [Report This]Date: 05/04/11 07:34 am
I want more!
Author's Response: You got it!
[Report This]Date: 05/04/11 05:59 am
Ok Baal and Aster cant stand them. What's Hanna deal. She treats Boon like crap but then she needs him but he a trooper and there for her. You have my interest. Looking for the next uupdate.
Author's Response: Yes, its messed up right? *sigh* Glad you like it and thank you. Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed
[Report This]Date: 05/04/11 05:53 am
There is something seriously wrong with Hanna and I don't think Boon realizes what the hell he's getting himself into. What was Baal and Hanna doing? This is the first time that Hanna has creeped me out.
Run, Boon, Run.
Author's Response: LOL! Yes, something does smell fishy huh? Baal is evil. Boon is a lover not a quitter...even if he should be. Reviewer: BellaChica Signed
[Report This]Date: 05/04/11 05:22 am
I think we are do for a bit more Aster, don't you?
~
HECK no! lol I don't know what the deal is between Hanna and Aster but it doesn't seem as if he [Aster] makes her happy. But if Boon gets involved with her, she'll only hurt him in the long run. Hanna appears to be stuck-on-stupid with Aster; it's as if Aster is her addiction she just can't kick.
Hurry and update, I gotta see what happens next! :)
Author's Response:
I just have to say, I didn't need to break out the spectacles to read this one! lol
So let me guess, you don't like Aster? Well, sorry, but he's up next. You'll have to grin and bear it.
:)
Reviewer: JV4ME Signed [Report This]Date: 05/04/11 05:01 am
AWWWW NAWWWW!! SHE'S CRAZY!! Step away from the body Boon...step away from her lips....lol
Author's Response: I am afraid there are some issues there yes. LOL!
Date: 05/04/11 04:58 am
What did I do???? LOL Let me go back and read what I said...
Author's Response: You didn't do anything. Just made a request. I got another one just like it though.
Date: 05/04/11 04:30 am
I think Hanna is a Lucky Beeyotch!and darn I know I'm supposed to be rooting for Boon but Aster is a HOTTIE!
Author's Response:
I absolutely LOVE THIS AVI!! That's what its called right?
Go ahead and root for him. He needs some people on his side.
Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]Date: 04/04/11 07:53 am
Thoughts....HOT. That's all I got right now.
Author's Response: Thank you. LOL
[Report This]Date: 04/04/11 07:26 am
I like this story more and more. I like Hanna but I think she is under Aster's control. She is so wrapped up in him that she doesn't see all her potential. Hanna needs to be with someone who is truly into her and not into himself. Aster is not the one. I'm wondering how Boon gets her to see as a boyfriend/lover.
Author's Response:
Thank you. Good point about Hanna, she doesn't see her potential. You think Aster does? Do you think Boon deserves her though? Maybe there is someone better for him.
Food for thought.
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: 03/04/11 07:30 pm
The Wolf seems to have a bit of the exhibitionist in him. Still not sure about him. He does seem arrogant. How did Hanna get mixed up with him. Is Hanna just a booty call? At some point Boon will find out more about The Wolf and I can't wait. Boon seems focused on The Wolf because he is doing what Boon wants to do with Hanna. And yeah, he needs to get off this rollercoaster.
Wonder what's the dealio is with Baal.
Author's Response:
Hola Chica!
You are not the first one to make that observation about Aster. You guys maybe on to something. Boon is a mixture of jealousy and concern. I think he's a nice guy who happens to be fixated on something that is none of his business. But that is the result of watching. No?
Baal, you'll get another dose of her.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: 03/04/11 06:15 am