Don't know what to think of her. Is she playing games with Boon?? Does she only see him as a friend??? Aster is abit domineering but looks like Hanna likes that. Is he her BF or are they friends with benefit??? Boon needs to move on and not become entangled with her if his feelings are gonna get hurt.
Author's Response: Good questions. What is Hanna doing? Does she even know herself? Maybe Boons a glutton for punishment.
[Report This]Date: 03/04/11 01:49 am
Hmmm, Hanna is where many of us have been...playing the fool for someone we think care about us. My opinion? Aster stayed the night because he saw Hanna wrapped around Boon...who we all know is fine as f*** (but doesn't know it.) and he's trying to stake a claim. The fact that this dude comes and goes when he wants to let's us know--He doesn't care about Hanna. He only comes to her for one thing.
I like the literal and figurative expression of Boon's need to "get off"....LOL
Author's Response:
LOL!!
You are very perceptive DD. I wish to observe how your things morphs.
Thank you for reading.
Reviewer: DirtyDiva Signed [Report This]Date: 03/04/11 12:33 am
I think she knew he was watching her that night.
Author's Response: HHmmmmm......
Date: 03/04/11 12:00 am
Can we have some pictures?
Author's Response: I'm working on it.
Date: 02/04/11 08:29 pm
I'm not sure how to feel about Hanna right now. I don't want to say she's wishy washy but...I don't know. Thought that was rude how she just up and left Boon once Aster appeared. He was her guest. I felt sad for poor Boon myself. I'm wondering what kind of control Aster has over Hanna as well cause that was just...hmm.
This Baal woman seems to know about this "thing" between Aster and Hanna. Wonder what she's about and why Hanna wanted to get away from her so fast.
Another great update!
Author's Response:
Thank you Music.
Yeah, Hanna is confusing the heck out of me...and she's MY character. Ha! There is a special connection between Hanna and Aster. Wonder what it iiiis? *singing*
Baal, yes Baal. She gets more air time too.
Reviewer: Music Signed [Report This]Date: 02/04/11 07:49 pm
I think Hanna is a bit passive with the Wolf and selfish with Boon. Who leaves an invited guest without ever returning to check on them or join them in the conversation.
Author's Response: I totally agree with you. It was rude no matter how you look at it. Reviewer: Dee Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 02/04/11 07:30 pm
I Likey!!!!
I like teh pace of the story,is it possible that Aster and Hannah are performing for the outside world becaue they are voyeurs themselves?
Author's Response: Thank you. Nice theory, you may have something there. Reviewer: 70_OrchidsnHoney Signed
[Report This]Date: 02/04/11 06:36 pm
Damn that was good. i like boon why did aster show. baal sounds like a goddess but evil.
Author's Response: I think you have Baal all figured out. Thank you for reading.
[Report This]Date: 02/04/11 05:18 pm
I am so in love with this story...your writing skills are amazing...Can't wait for another update.
Author's Response: Thank you. I will try not to let you down.
[Report This]Date: 31/03/11 06:03 am
Wow!!! How intense and that's just the first chapter....I am hooked!!!
Author's Response: Thank you. <3
[Report This]Date: 31/03/11 05:05 am
Your story has drawn me in and my curiosity is peaked. I like that it’s from Boon’s POV, and glad to see you will keep it that way through-out the story (normally I hate 1st person narrative but this works for me). When reading your tale I feel like a voyeur, not only into Hanna’s world but Boon’s as well. You have a great story going hope to read more soon.
Author's Response:
*laughs wickedly*
Good, I am happy you like it. If you feel like a voyeur, than I am doing my job right. Thank you.
Reviewer: myea Signed [Report This]Date: 30/03/11 08:07 pm
First off: I love your writing style.
Next:
Dang, I understand not too much liking what your child chooses to do with their life but did Hanna's mom really have to burn all the things she worked so hard for? Gewdness. [goes to hug my mama]
I think Boon is going to go to her show. Seems like it would mean a lot to her.
Happy they kissed [raises eyebrows up & down] but I cant help but wonder if whatshisface...'The Wolf' as Boon calls him, will be at her showing. Mmhmm.
Author's Response:
To you're 'First off,' thank you.
To you're 'next,' I love my mom too. She is an amazing woman.
Lastly, one step forward two steps back. Aster does make an appearance.
Reviewer: Music Signed [Report This]Date: 30/03/11 04:45 am
"Please come if you can, but don't make me any promises just in case you can't keep them."
This was sad. How many people have disappointed Hanna in her life. And that mother of hers. gah. Jealous, yep that does happen but she went overboard. Poor Hanna.
As to who's seducing whom... interesting, I can see how Boon was using his hair to great effect. But Hanna went BOLD. So, right now, I say Hanna - 1, Boon - 0 in the seduction department. Unless, she already knows that he's been watching her and gave him a little show just before she came over, I'd give her extra points just for that.
Hope he attends the showing. I hope it goes well for Hanna considering what she went through to pursue her dreams.
Another great update, Chica.
Author's Response:
I think you are on to something there. Definitely, about this time it should feel like there may be a struggle going on. Soon another one will be added as well.
Thank you for keeping up with the story.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: 30/03/11 04:22 am
makes me want to be an artist
Author's Response: Lol...it's a great stress reliever.
Date: 30/03/11 03:35 am
I really like the story. Just have to say I hope you don't take this the wrong way, but it's "angel" not "angle" if you are talking about the creatures in heaven with wings and halos. The spelling distracted me from the otherwise great story telling.
Author's Response: Thank you for the letting me know about this. I made the corrections. I am also glad you like the story despite my flubups. Reviewer: Guest Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/03/11 01:28 am
Nice update!
Author's Response: Thank you. <3
Date: 29/03/11 11:51 pm
Why do I find myself liking a pervert? He is so gentle. Hanna...hmmmm. Something is going on there I still say. When is the other guy coming back?
I'm enjoying this. Good work puertaobierta!
Author's Response: Glad you like it. Hey, maybe you're learning something hidden about yourself. ji ji ji! Thank you. Reviewer: Niclapy Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 29/03/11 08:03 pm
Hey!!!! You did it! Good for you. I'm glad you decided to post here. Hello from South America. Where are you? Portugal?
So, back to the story. Boon is pretty sexy. I'm loving him and his fantasy about her bosom was very nice. So what's up with Hanna? What's her deal?
Got to go to the next chapter...
Author's Response:
Yes, I did, finally. Thanks for the heads-up. You should come back you know. Enviar mis saludos a todos xf. Yep still here.
Hanna is complicated. I plan to reveal more about her in a bit. I'm not giving anything away. Thanks for saying hi. We got to skype soon!
Reviewer: Niclapy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 29/03/11 07:51 pm
Awesome update writing skills, love the characters - can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you very kindly. <3
Date: 28/03/11 11:47 pm
So they meet. Boon's reaction to Hanna was comedy. He sound really good looking if I must say so myself. And I wonder, since she saw him in his window I wonder what else she has seen.
Can't wait for the next update, seeing as how she wants to draw him now. [rubs hands together in anticipation]
Author's Response:
Yes, come join the Boon-is-hotness fan club. I think there are only three members. LOL you make me laugh (see chapter notes of third update).
Thank you!
Reviewer: Music Signed [Report This]Date: 28/03/11 09:09 am
I like where this is headed. I hope the whole story is only from Boon's pov. I like that.
Author's Response:
Wow! Your user name sounds yummy.
Thank you! Yes, it will remain Boon's POV.
Reviewer: Peach Martini Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/03/11 08:07 pm
Ooooooooooooh this is juicy! Chica Okay I'm hooked!lol
Author's Response: Oh good! Hope you continue to enjoy it. Thanks! Is that a banana or a pencil??? Reviewer: NiaZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 27/03/11 03:51 pm
Love this chapter. So many cute moments in it. His reaction when he meets her is cute. He is so surprised to see her there. I like his fantasy he is having while he is at her place.
Author's Response: Thank you! One thing Boon is not lacking, is fantasies. LOL
[Report This]Date: 27/03/11 01:07 am
Wow, tehy've finally met. Can't wait to see what happens from here.
Author's Response: We will see, we will see. Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 27/03/11 12:11 am
So, our little voyeur is Boon and the object of his obsession is Hanna. And the wolf is perhaps, Aster. Wonder if Boon has ever considered that just as he can see her, perhaps she can see him? And if so, what, oh what, has she seen him doing? hee
Boon sounds pretty fine to me. Wonder what Hanna thinks of him.
And now he's agreed to let her draw him. That can be an intimate proposition. How will Boon be able to handle being so close to Hanna. Can't wait.
btw, will this story continue to be from Boon's perspective? I like knowing what he's thinking.
Author's Response:
Boon is a pretty cool character. Hopefully you guys will be able to understand him better by reading the next chapter. I my mind Boon is hot, but you know hotness in the eye of the beholder. And Aster.....
What does Hanna think of him. Hopefully that will be revealed more in the next chapter as well.
And yes, this whole short will be from Boon's perspective. The POV will probably change from one short/one-shot to the other though. Still thinking on that.
Hasta luego.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: 26/03/11 11:43 pm