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Title: Chapter 20

Just wanted to point out the inconsistency in the story toward the beginning of this chapter during Davia's narrative she states that her sister is planning on having her engagement party a week before Davia's Birthday. However, that is not possible because you have already established in the plot and timeline of the story that Davia's birthday is specifically on Dec 24th, Christmas Eve, which is why she recieved double presents at Christmas. Just thought I would point that out.

Reviewer: Jennifer Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31/03/11 05:16 am

Title: Chapter 20

Natasha and Spencer already have a history together! Gerat chapter

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/11/09 05:04 am

Title: Chapter 20

wow that what you call a small world her spence ex is her cousin. i hope she tell him everything and kick his dad ass for what he did. love the story girl.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/09/09 04:29 am

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