ok, I have never been really crazy about the whole vampire, werewolf thing, but man does this story sound sexy. I guess if a vamp could be sexy Santos is the epitome of it. Keep up the good work, and never stop writing no matter what your reviewers say...you are on to something here! Just the pre-sex alone will warrant you a 9, hell I can't wait for the actualy act!
thank you so very much for that i all but gave up on this story because people seem to go out of there way to knock your hard work but would never lift a finger to help you make it better i all but begged for a beta writer or editor to hit me up not only with this fic but my new one "Mine" also. still no word anyway i thank you and i'll do my best to get the next chapter of movienight up and running for all to read ..working on the next chapter of Mine right now kinda stumped but i'm sure i'll work it out soon have a great night thank you for taking the time to read and review ...cyn~Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/10/11 01:54 am
the stpry seems to be good but the format gives me a slight headache so I really cant't get passed that.
thank you for that ..so do tell what format would you think is better, i really want to write something that does not give ppl a headache... plz any input is better then none and people just skimming over and not telling me what they feel is wrong with my writing like i said i would love a beta writer someone to bounce ideas off of would be welcomed in with open arms ..i'm here ears and eyes wide open lets chat talk about how to make it a better read ..thank you cyn~Reviewer: ChristinaElizabeth Signed [Report This]
Date: 24/08/11 08:12 pm
oh so rare a native vampire and a sista wowReviewer: brownie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 31/03/11 11:28 pm
Smug Bastard ....huh? o.O ! OOooo My cyn cyn, you are soooo going to get it! ~ Releases My fangs, I lick the tips of them, ~growling~ as I think.... How much I am going to enjoy sinking them sooo fucking deep into that "Perfect Hot Carmel Ass" of yours! MMmm Lickkkkkk Love you babe, your Dark Lover... SinZReviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 31/03/11 06:48 pm