Wow, I do not know what to say. Please update soon.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: 03/04/11 12:30 am
Wow! If those 2 chapters are any indication of the rest of the story, I might have to break out the Kleenex when I see that you've posted, in the future. Great writing - I felt like I was sitting in that closet with Lorca. Can't wait to read more!!
Reviewer: DiamondLady28 Signed [Report This]Date: 03/04/11 12:00 am
this story is heartwrenching, but really well done so far. woman, you can tug on some heartstrings.
Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]Date: 02/04/11 11:59 pm
I knew it was coming but you had me crying all over the place.
Reviewer: Liason4220 Signed [Report This]Date: 02/04/11 10:31 pm
Wow... that is all that really needs to be said. This was a very emotional chapter. I kept wanting Liam to come back myself.
Very good writing Morrison!! Very good in deed!
Date: 02/04/11 09:45 pm
This is beyond good. The ending was heartbreaking. I would've loved to see the journey that they would take in married life, but it was not to be. There's a bitter sweetness to how their life together ended. But at least he was truly happy with Lorca. It will be interesting to see how she copes with the lost of Liam. I fell in love with him after reading this chapter.
Well done, Chica, f'in well done. *misty-eyed right now*
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: 02/04/11 06:56 pm
jesus. that broke my heart. but was so well done.
Reviewer: intellectual titmouse Signed [Report This]Date: 02/04/11 05:55 pm
Wow, what an ending to a chapter. Thanks looking forward to reading more. Great start.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 02/04/11 04:35 pm
Wow... you must update soon! This was one heck of a beginning!!
Reviewer: mustang_writer Signed [Report This]Date: 02/04/11 03:58 pm
Woe, that a beautiful start. Can't wait see here this is heading.
Thanks
Reviewer: Meg Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/04/11 07:54 am
Fantastic start
Reviewer: Liason4220 Signed [Report This]Date: 02/04/11 06:41 am
Good beginning, waiting for a update.
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/04/11 06:26 am
Oh, please come soon. That was absolutely beautiful. Loved it. Can't wait to see what happens next. Please continue.
Author's Response: Aww thanks I just came to me at work and I snuck to write it out and post it. Forgive me for my errors, I actually a gifted speller but was given the shaft in the typing department. Well be correcting soon
Date: 02/04/11 05:15 am
Awwwww.. This is sad.. It made me misty eyed..
Reviewer: ReneeK Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/04/11 05:04 am
Me likey!!! More please. :)
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 02/04/11 04:37 am
very well written! i enjoyed that though i know its gonna get sad soon. more please!
Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 02/04/11 03:56 am
That is soooo sweet, but sooo sad ='(
Reviewer: cheetahgrl07 Signed [Report This]Date: 02/04/11 03:37 am