WOW! So Hanna is a little bi-sexual but, I strongly believe her major leaning is toward men and that's good!
Baal is a dirty disgusting lesbian and I wasn't surprised at her agressiveness to dominate Hanna. I'm so glad Hanna let her know she would beat the skin off her funky ass if she didn't leave her alone. But, I'm sure Baal has no intentions of giving up.
Unfortunately, dangerous violent consequences could result because Baal has the character of the sewer.
I think Boon will be the real help to Hanna if Baal ever returns; Aster is too self-absorped and never really around.
Seems Hanna may have a slight mental problem, that hatred she screamed at Baal included association with her mother in that she used the word mama, one time.
I'm starting to feel worry for Hanna!
Thank you Puertaobierta for the great Updates and looking forward to more installments!Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/02/12 02:08 pm
I'm glad Boon and Hanna are together, he's finally won a place in her heart, along with others of course, especially Aster. But, somethings better than nothing, LOL;
Their lovemaking was really HOT!
I love the flow of this story (both Parts one and two); it is smooth and actions, thoughts, reactions are quick like life, but still filled with meaning important to the character.
Dialogue is also good, and natural.
Date: 02/02/12 01:43 pm
Great start. Hanna an Aster are still way creepy to me, but gosh I love Boon.Reviewer: Peach Martini Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 29/04/11 01:45 am