I like the storyline and even the characters, but I simply do not understand why more "authors" don't attempt to proofread before sharing their works. A truly well-written story is like a fine wine, and the other stories that ignore spell check and grammar...well, it's like the cheap stuff.  The story doesn't flow easily because of the grammar snags. That said, if those issues detract from your enjoyment of a story then you'll want to pass on this one.  Otherwise, it's a short read with alot of potential.

what the heck she's thinnking 2 resign no she can't do that

SEB/Em team is who I'm routing for in the story. Nick can be all that and more but he overlooked Em all these years. It would be a good twist to have Em fall for Sebastian during the 96 hours. They make a really good couple. Nick would have to be Superman, Batman, and Spiderman rolled into one to even compete with Sebastian for Emery's love. Nick already has three strikes in my book. Sebastian is a really good catch. Women sometimes want the unattainable while missing the boat on the one right in front of them. I believe Em is used to the friendship but what if someone else was interested in Sebastian so that Em' true feelings could emerge overshadowing her "crush" on Nick. Just a thought! I'm really enjoying this story.

hi, how about an update. Your story is so interesting it is actually a sin not to update and to keep us dangling on a string. Lol. Please update.

Great start...I love your style of writing...nice flow...you're really, really good...

So Em has a thing for Nick...what's the deal between her and Bas...he sounds like a great catch himself...so why can't he get out of the 'friend zone'...but I suppose the heart wants what the heart wants..looking forward to more and how Em handles seeing Nick again with his latest squeeze...

So why doesn't she like Bas?  He seems like a good catch.  Great start to the story.  Thanks

Likey, likey, more please. I hope Bas is for here, he is very thoughtful. If it works out that way, if reminds me of the movie "Sabrina".

This looks like it is a keeper. Can't wait to see where this is going

I wanna know whatbhappens next! Great start!

Me likey. More please.

This looks interesting.  Em seems to be working so hard that I don't think she recognizes that Sebastian may be carrying a "torch" for her.  And Nicholas....hmmm. I am interested in reading more.  How come he cannot see that Em was interested in him? 

Nyeesha

I am loved what I read so far, and I hope that Nick falls hard for Em.   I can't wait to read more.