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Title: Chapter 26

I read thos story today and I loved it!  If it hadn't already been recommended, I was going too. This was so well -written, it cluld be puished as-is (with minor editing). I kept hoping you had already posted the sequel but it appears not yet. Please post it soon!!!

Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 07/06/13 04:58 am

Title: Chapter 5

Yolie is extremely naive. Some lof this stuff is Law & Order 101!

Reviewer: AP Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/06/13 04:05 pm

Title: Chapter 26

come back please!!!!!!

Reviewer: grumpirah Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/10/12 11:29 pm

Title: Cast

You picked some good ones!

Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20/11/11 12:14 am

Title: Chapter 26

wow that was an amazing story and you say there is going to be more cant wait for it hurry up you got a fan here ..... You remind me of my Favorite Author Latriva Nelson you are really good two words for you... Get Published!.... I need to have this on my librairy shelf... :) Thank you for a wonderful story...

Reviewer: meme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29/07/11 12:01 am

Title: Chapter 24

whoa go Fever, go John, go Brit got Lau get your smack down on! 

Reviewer: meme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/07/11 10:39 pm

Title: Chapter 21

damn that was explosive!

Reviewer: meme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/07/11 10:08 am

Title: Chapter 20

Oh no he didnt what the Hell Is Antoinio up too?

Reviewer: meme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/07/11 03:19 am

Title: Chapter 20

OMG They killed Flemmer.... giirrrl I just about died when they ran that suv into lucy OMG this is sooo good!

Reviewer: meme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/07/11 02:32 am

Title: Chapter 17

OMG!!! was that that Fool David Beckem creeping in her house???

Reviewer: meme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/07/11 09:04 pm

Title: Chapter 13

Wow I mean like wow how the heck did he hold her up like that in shower Try that with my husband not even close...lol

Reviewer: meme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/07/11 09:01 am

Title: Chapter 12

Seems like Fever needs to be a detective rather than Sydney..lol 

Reviewer: meme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27/07/11 02:30 am

Title: Chapter 10

I love this chapter the closeness between Brit and Fever was sooo sweet

Reviewer: meme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/07/11 11:51 am

Title: Chapter 9

Oh wow Javier is into deep

Reviewer: meme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/07/11 10:39 am

Title: Chapter 8

ooo can't wait to find out what these men are up too

Reviewer: meme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/07/11 09:53 am

Title: Chapter 7

UUHH did anybody else get all hotan bothered with this chapter I'm seating here fanning my self drinking a cold glass of water... wooohoo that was hot....

Reviewer: meme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/07/11 06:48 am

Title: Chapter 6

Awesomeness you blew me away with this chapter you do journalism on the side because you rock at writing like one I love the queistiong you give Fever to ask... Loving som Brit too... 

Reviewer: meme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/07/11 05:53 am

Title: Chapter 5

oooo that Valiant is a bold chica....lol 

Reviewer: meme Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24/07/11 06:17 am

Title: Chapter 4

Damn girrl got me all hot a bothered with that love scence... amazing you have a way with words. need to add you to my my fav.

Reviewer: meme Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23/07/11 09:11 am

Title: Chapter 3

Omg!  you had me cracking up with the willy wonka part too funny! I LMAO!!!

Reviewer: meme Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23/07/11 03:46 am

Title: Chapter 2

Great chapter I love Garners he's a crack up!

Reviewer: meme Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23/07/11 02:31 am

Title: Chapter 1

I love your story its very intertaing from the start. :)

Reviewer: meme Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23/07/11 01:25 am

Title: Chapter 26

Absolutely Loved This STORY!!!!!!  Can't wait for the sequel.. 

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/07/11 05:58 am

Title: Chapter 26

Aww this was great. I'm glad everyone got the ending they deserved and I look forward to reading more of your stories.

Reviewer: helloWORLD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/07/11 09:17 am

Title: Chapter 26

what? thats it, please tell me there is more

Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/07/11 06:37 am

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