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Title: Chapter 1 " It's a Family Affair"

Just found our stoy.  Its great please starrt writing again done leave  us(me) with no end

 Reviewer: tracy21 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23/11/14 12:19 pm
Title: Chapter 1 " It's a Family Affair"

This story is ammazing.... the chemisrty between the chapter is sizzling. cant wait to figure this out... was shock that just as i get comfy to discover there is no more. Amazing story don;t let it go to waste. :)

 Reviewer: soulfulldreamer Signed [Report This]
Date: 18/02/13 11:10 am
Title: Chapter 1 " It's a Family Affair"

Very erotic. Really enjoying it.

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Date: 30/05/11 10:40 pm
Title: Chapter 1 " It's a Family Affair"

Im hooked, I will defitnitely add this to my favorites, Great start off to read chapter two.

 Reviewer: pokerdiva01 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27/05/11 04:05 am
Title: Chapter 1 " It's a Family Affair"

Wow what I think that one crazy ass family lol. This sister she just uptight big time lol and the brother lol he to funny lol.  I wonder why she truly invited her half sister to stay with her and her husband?  Maybe she want to be nice but something tells me it something more. Thanks for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/05/11 07:08 pm
Title: Chapter 1 " It's a Family Affair"

So far I only like TJ, the little is so cute.  What is Allycia problem?  Does she have a thing for her husbands brother Ian?  Who is going to be on the recieving end of some major loving?

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/05/11 03:52 pm
Title: Chapter 1 " It's a Family Affair"

There's a lot to look forward to with your character background and actions. I cnt wait to read the next chapter!

 Reviewer: ready4toast Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/05/11 10:23 am
Title: Chapter 1 " It's a Family Affair"

Wow, please update soon.

 Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/05/11 06:42 am
Title: Chapter 1 " It's a Family Affair"

I like it and can't wait to read the rest. I hope you post again soon.  Your characters are very interesting and rich...definately characters you want to learn more about, their history and their future.  Very nice first chapter.



Author's Response:

OMG! My first comment! Thank you! Thank you so much for just reading it! Hitting that submit button was a major challenge for me. I appreciate your encouragement.

                                                                                                     ~avgrblkgrl

 Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26/05/11 06:34 am
Title: Chapter 1 " It's a Family Affair"

OMG!!! This family is fantastically dysfunctional!!!



Author's Response:

The are dysfunctional and it gets worse; but it is also what will be their saving grace.

I just want everyone to love/hate them as much as me.

 Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26/05/11 06:23 am
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