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Title: Chapter 2 All That Glitters...

Wow looks like Regan found something to do beside school in NC.  I don't get Troy wife she need to stop acting crazy lol do you know how many women would kill to get a man to want to touch them.  I like how she slap her sister lol and the boy saying " now me and mom are not the only black sheep in the family lol". Good story so far and look foward to readng more thanks for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/05/11 07:36 pm

Title: Chapter 1 " It's a Family Affair"

Wow what I think that one crazy ass family lol. This sister she just uptight big time lol and the brother lol he to funny lol.  I wonder why she truly invited her half sister to stay with her and her husband?  Maybe she want to be nice but something tells me it something more. Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/05/11 07:08 pm

Title: Chapter 2 All That Glitters...

I really want Troy to divorce Allysia, please!!!  I am loving the chemistry between Regan and Ian. They are going to be hot together.  Please bring Troy some love and have him get full custody of TJ.

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/05/11 04:08 pm

Title: Chapter 1 " It's a Family Affair"

So far I only like TJ, the little is so cute.  What is Allycia problem?  Does she have a thing for her husbands brother Ian?  Who is going to be on the recieving end of some major loving?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/05/11 03:52 pm

Title: Chapter 2 All That Glitters...

hmmm can't say that i like allysia. she has a wonderful husband but is too busy lusting after his brother. it makes me wonder if they've done anything and if so is tj really troy's.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/05/11 03:27 pm

Title: Chapter 2 All That Glitters...

Wow!!  I've just discovered this story and i'm hooked!  I like the tension between Ian and Regan but I hope you build the anticipation . . . .  I look forward to the update.



Author's Response:

I've been working on the build between Regan and Ian. It's hard to keep them from just going after eachother. She is just a ball of sexual energy about to explode and he, well he is Ian, can't help himself. But if she gives in too soon, she'll hate herself and if he gets it too easy he won't appreciate it.  Tic-toc?

Reviewer: Proudly African Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/05/11 03:17 pm

Title: Chapter 2 All That Glitters...

Great story I love the way you are developing the characters and I hope to see a update soon!!!!

Reviewer: Tempestsunshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/05/11 03:03 pm

Title: Chapter 2 All That Glitters...

I'm loving this story can't wait to read more

Reviewer: mfoto22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26/05/11 11:05 am

Title: Chapter 1 " It's a Family Affair"

There's a lot to look forward to with your character background and actions. I cnt wait to read the next chapter!

Reviewer: ready4toast Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/05/11 10:23 am

Title: Chapter 2 All That Glitters...

Me likey!!! More please.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/05/11 08:52 am

Title: Chapter 2 All That Glitters...

“She hit me,” she whined.

“I bet that brought your ass back to earth,” Allysia said with a grin before going after Regan.

It's about time somebody knock the hell outta that druggie. This chapter had me rolling. Alice has gone through the looking glass. Now the question is, will they change her or will she change them. I think I would run as fast as I could from these insane asylum inhabitants.

I think TJ is simply hilarious.

I don't know if I trust Allysia. Does she have a thing for Ian? I would say there's something off about her, but I could say that about the whole damn family.  Wonder if they could get a group rate for therapy. :)

Ian is something else. But he may have met his match when it comes to Regan. His sexual appetite is astounding. Wonder if Regan can resist his full court press.

And what's with that about Rea not hanging on long enough to see Regan being Ian's fault. Was it truly an accident? I noticed Ian hesitated on that word.

This is a real interesting and well written story.



Author's Response:

Girl you don't miss a thing! (Big Smile)

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26/05/11 07:54 am

Title: Chapter 2 All That Glitters...

i love it so far and cant wait for more !!!!!

Reviewer: sasha Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 26/05/11 07:00 am

Title: Chapter 1 " It's a Family Affair"

Wow, please update soon.

Reviewer: Bain Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26/05/11 06:42 am

Title: Chapter 1 " It's a Family Affair"

I like it and can't wait to read the rest. I hope you post again soon.  Your characters are very interesting and rich...definately characters you want to learn more about, their history and their future.  Very nice first chapter.



Author's Response:

OMG! My first comment! Thank you! Thank you so much for just reading it! Hitting that submit button was a major challenge for me. I appreciate your encouragement.

                                                                                                     ~avgrblkgrl

Reviewer: Caribbean Fire Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26/05/11 06:34 am

Title: Chapter 1 " It's a Family Affair"

OMG!!! This family is fantastically dysfunctional!!!



Author's Response:

The are dysfunctional and it gets worse; but it is also what will be their saving grace.

I just want everyone to love/hate them as much as me.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 26/05/11 06:23 am

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