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Title: Chapter 1

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  • YAYY!!!!!  SHE'S WRITING AGAIN!  WHOO HOO!!! 

    i'm so happy for you!  Luv ya gurl!

    Reviewer: JV4ME Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
    Date: 21/06/11 03:39 am

    Title: Chapter 2

    I must disagree with your Ricky; supernatural serial-slashers Freddie Kruger and Jason Vorhees I found only mildly frightening - when I bothered to be frightened at all. Whereas demons, faceless, nameless entities that work their way inside you and change you entirely - sometimes without your knowledge - render me scared of my own skewed shadow at night.

    How disgusting it is, what they must have been doing beneath that cover. If it were mine, it would be one I'd forever relinquish to Denise and Ricky, for keeps. However Bordello of Blood is an interesting title, I shall look into it. Hah, Bordello is yet another name for a Brothel, I love that.

    Brock treats Dee-Dee like a dumb-dumb which is why (I hope) she dump-dumped his childish ass. But a handy under the blankets in a room full of people, really? That is just nasty as all get out. That was an entertaining fight between former lovers? This lot are easily entertained, lol.

    PEACE.

    Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed [Report This]
    Date: 20/06/11 04:46 am

    Title: Chapter 1

    I don't know... this chapter has confused me a bit. Is this how the regular narration will appear throughout? I also have a few theories on horror of my own I would like to throw out.


    In movies, I think most horror films take place in small towns due to the lack of police or the lack of decent police. I've noticed in all my years, the police are never about shit in these movies. Yet in movies, mostly action flicks, with police the black-and-whites are everywhere, even when the force "can't spare anymore bodies." Plus some group of young people always "just so happen" to be going to or going through said creepy-ass town, or spending the night in some place rumored to be haunted (a prison, a hotel or an asylum), giving the killer/big bad the opportunity for ultra-violence. Also, making a tiny town unsafe sets the general public on edge if it's done correctly, the message: No place is safe enough.


    Everyone knows the City is full of crazies, aged fourteen to forty, but those small towns are supposed to be where you go to escape the insanity of the city. Yet if the country/small town is just as frightening as the big city, why bother to leave the safety of your space at all? It's nice to think on, but "scary" movies hardly scare me anymore, still I am fascinated and I do enjoy them. Hope I haven't said too much, though I tend to on occasion. ^_^


    PEACE.


     

    Reviewer: TRaberah EH Signed [Report This]
    Date: 19/06/11 05:16 pm

    Title: Chapter 1

    I don't really get it. Sorry I'm a little slow...

    Reviewer: ChristinaElizabeth Signed [Report This]
    Date: 18/06/11 08:18 pm

    Title: Chapter 2

    Who is dating who? Who is the narrator of this dark tale?  Thanks

    Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
    Date: 12/06/11 03:16 pm

    Title: Chapter 1

    I am looking forward to reading more.  Great start.  I was LOL at the beginning and the narrators opinion on horror and small towns.

    Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
    Date: 12/06/11 03:11 pm

    Title: Chapter 1

    I've loving this! It's good and kept me laughing!

    Can't wait for the next chapter!

    Chel

    Reviewer: miquerida Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
    Date: 12/06/11 02:28 am

    Title: Chapter 2

    Interesting start. Can't wait to see where this story goes. More please.

    Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
    Date: 11/06/11 06:18 am

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