This is a beautiful little short!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Artamiss Caine Signed
[Report This]Date: 25/01/14 08:25 pm
awww that was a cute lil story
Author's Response:
Thank you. It was very interesting to write. I wrote it so long ago that I completely forgot about it until I found one day wayyyyy in the back of my computer, lol.
Reviewer: Vonniiiboo Signed [Report This]Date: 18/10/13 07:04 pm
This was a great story...
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
Reviewer: nightseer Signed
[Report This]Date: 22/12/12 05:12 pm
A well written short story.
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/12/11 02:48 pm
This was a really good story for a one shot. I liked that Lucas was caring enough to come looking for his woman in the rain.
Author's Response:
Lucas is definitely a man who wants what he thinks is his. To him, Sadie is his and if he has to go out in the rain to drag her back inside then that is what he has to do, lol! Thank you. :)
Reviewer: AJ Taylor Anonymous [Report This]Date: 05/08/11 01:16 am
I really enjoyed the story. I hope you'll write an actual full length for Lucas and Sadie. I wonder if race was an issue. I know that Sadie was actually in love with Lucas, was she afraid of what her parents or his parents would think? What was the real drama about? Was she just really afraid of their relationship becoming serious? Did she think that Lucas would end up hurting her in the end? So many questions.
Author's Response:
Those are really good questions. I was orginially going to write a full length for Lucas and Sadie, but it ended up being an one-shot. I've definitely been considering it lately just to tie any lose ends! I think Sadie left because she was afraid of their relationship coming very serious and him hurting her in the end. They were orginially rivals growing up, so when the attraction between them sparked then Sadie started to doubt herself and wonder where exactly is their relationship going. It started out as young fun, but it turned into something more serious that scared Sadie.
Reviewer: Harrie Holiday Anonymous [Report This]Date: 24/06/11 05:54 am
thanks for the one-shot! glad Sadie stopped running from Lucas otherwise i would've stepped in! the guy waited seven years with only a video to keep him company - now that's dedication :)
Author's Response:
LOL, that is dedication. Lucas fell hard for Sadie and never stopped loving her. She needed something tragic and sad to happen to realize that she shouldn't have left town, him, and her family. Thank you, Cassius! :)
Reviewer: Cassius.Noir Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/06/11 01:27 pm
I actually like this story because the characters character were in reverse, I mean usually the guy gets up and leaves. But in this case we have Sadie who ran because she feared feelings that she so thought she wasn't supposed to have. Lucas waited even though he had other women, he waited for the one who held his heart. Sadie didn't realize this until the end but she left her hesart and soul with Lucas, she just needed a reminder. Loved the different characters and how Lucas got his girl.
Author's Response:
LOL, I like the reverse roles too. :) Lucas knew what he wanted in life and Sadie wasn't ready for it nor did she know if she wanted it herself, but years later, she finally realized that she made a mistake in leaving town and not keeping in contact with her family. Thank you so much!
Reviewer: JovanBleu26 Signed [Report This]Date: 22/06/11 12:15 am
Really beautiful story and really wonderfully written, the setting/scenery of this story is beautiful. I hate to say this though but the situation kind of annoyed me. She left home for seven years because she couldn't face the seriousness of her relationship with Lucas? And then she comes back after her grandmother dies and ends up with him anyway?
Im sorry but Sadie needs to grow the hell up. How could she do such a horrible thing, if not to Lucas, then to her family?? Her grandmother is dead!! How can she live with herself? She missed out on the last seven years of her grandmother's life over some guy...she leaves her grandma without a conscience and then cries once she is dead, I wanted to slap the hell out of her. I'm sorry but it's what you do with your family that's alive that counts, she can cry her tears but it does nothing for her grandma, who she hurt by by her actions by staying away for so long.
I know I am sounding way way harsh but she just comes across like a bratty drama queen child who thinks of no one but herself. I wouldn't trust someone who was as flighty as her, who can take off at a momen't notice without any regard for anyone else.
Please don't take this as a negative review hun, just my take on the situation, I hope I get to read more about these two because they sound like a really good couple despite what happened and I enjoy reading about flawed human beings, its realistic than your super sweet perfect character. And I hope Sadie somehow gets to redeem herself.
Wonderful short story!
Author's Response:
I don't think that this is a harsh review. Everyone has their opinion and view on stories, so I like to see everyone's points of view. I'll agree with you that Sadie was selfish in what she did. She ran away from town over a guy and left everyone in the dust. Her grandmother was very sad over her leaving and when she died, Sadie then regretted the decisions she made in her life that lead her up to that point. That's why as the funeral grew closer, she was the one that was taking the beating the most because she realized the mistake she made. Her grandmother warned her that she would regret it, but she didn't listen and now she was paying the consquences. Thank you for your review. :)
Reviewer: dissociative_identity Signed [Report This]Date: 21/06/11 08:33 pm
I loved reading this shrot. Happy that they're on their way to finding HEA.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm definitely considering to write another one-short or two about Sadie and Lucas. So keep an eye out! :)
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 21/06/11 08:05 am
this was great luved it he waited 7yrs with only a video of them 2 keep him
Author's Response:
I never thought about it from that angle, but you're right, LOL. He only had a video and memories of them to keep him from going insane. He waited for her. :) Thank you.
Reviewer: kvgurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/06/11 04:26 am
I really like this and I am glad they found there way back to each other!!!
Author's Response:
I am happy that you liked it! :)
Reviewer: Alixermixer Signed [Report This]Date: 21/06/11 04:18 am
Sweet .
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Reviewer: kisser Signed [Report This]Date: 21/06/11 03:53 am
Love it, but it did leave me wondering. But then again, that's what good stories do.
Author's Response:
I am glad that you enjoyed it! :) If you have any questions, feel free to ask. I'll most likely write another one-shot of Sadie and Lucas.
Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed [Report This]Date: 21/06/11 02:44 am
Very good story Missus James,.. I wonder what happens with Sadie and Lucus though?
Author's Response:
I'm considering to write a few more one-shots of them! :) Thank you.
Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous [Report This]Date: 21/06/11 01:37 am
That was great I enjoyed it.
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Reviewer: Cherry Signed [Report This]Date: 21/06/11 01:15 am
I really like this! I want to read more. He still loves her after 7 years. Why did she leave? Why didn't he try and find her? I need some answers!!!
Author's Response:
Those are very good questions. Basically, Sadie left because she was scared of their relationship turning serious. Lucas wanted to make her his and she wasn't ready for it, so she ran. In a small town where just about everyone knows everyone, she couldn't hide from him forever, so her best bet would be to hop on a Greyhound and leave town. As for your second question, I think Lucas was waiting for her to return, but his life still went on. His feelings for her were strong, but I think his anger from her leaving so abruptly intensified his feelings and he waited for her to return so they could finish what they started. Thanks!
Reviewer: jjazz59 Signed [Report This]Date: 20/06/11 11:21 pm
short but sweet but so very well done and so satisfing thank you for sharing will you be showing more of these two in the future?
Author's Response:
Thank you! :) I've definitely considered the thought of writing a few one-shots of Sadie and Lucas, but it's been so long since I've actually written them. I just found this old story and tweaked it a bit before posting, LOL. But I am definitely considering it!
Reviewer: leahacar Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/06/11 10:57 pm
Excellent, I need a update.
Author's Response:
I'm happy that you enjoyed it! :) This is a one-shot (one chapter) story, a very old one at that so I never got around to making another chapter. It's been tucked far back in my computer since then. I apologize! :<
Reviewer: Bain Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/06/11 09:20 pm
I enjoyed that story, but why did she run away in the first place. Being a punk is not an attractive quality!! Me likey Lucas!!
Author's Response:
Sadie basically ran away because she was young and scared of the seriousness in which Lucas applying to the relationship. It started out as a fun thing between two people who didn't have anything to lose because they didn't like each other, but then it transformed into something more serious. Lucas wanted Sadie as his woman, but she wasn't ready for it so she ran. LOL, being a punk is definitely like an attractive quality, but Lucas set her straight. :) Thank you!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 20/06/11 08:37 pm
Great! I really enjoyed this.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I am so glad that you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: Gloria Anonymous [Report This]Date: 20/06/11 06:48 pm