wow girl you should know a man that fine can cooked own his own bussiness and great in bed would had a nun screaming yes lol. I hope nikko be alright and glad he talking to George agian. love the story girl the charcters are funny.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed
[Report This]Date: 01/08/09 09:48 pm
My best critque huh?.....DAMN!!!!! How's that? So many questions.....MORE, MORE, MORE!!!!!!!! I Love Lucas, this man is sexy as HELL and the best part is, he doesn't know it and if he did, he damn sure don't show it...Love this story.
Author's Response: I should have it done by Wendsday.
[Report This]Date: 02/01/09 09:04 am
why is my girl so scared....i like that lucas is feeling bea hard in all sense of the word....lol...
my po Nikko...i hope he doesnt get his heart stomp on again....
great chapter...
Author's Response: He might not Reviewer: Cma Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 01/01/09 04:12 pm
This story is developing nicely. I especially loved the fact that he reads to her, I think that's so sexy.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I try to make sure I show Luc's character or he'll be upset with me.
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 31/12/08 06:18 am
This is really good.
Bea has some serious self-esteem issues going on. She keeps waiting for the other show to drop with Lucas. And I understand because clearly she been hurt and mistreated by both men and women like that before, but its still kinda irritating she keeps doing it with Lucas. Only because Lucas really is going that extra mile to persuade her that he's serious about her.
He's wanting her to meet his family for pete's sake! If he wasn't serious he wouldn't be doing that. He wouldn't have to. He could just dump her before he ever had to let it get that far. Men dont do that with just anyone.
And I have to say that Lucas is being incredibly patient and understanding with her.
Bea really just needs to talk to him about it instead of just assuming and reacting to what she thinks he might do.
And whats the deal with her sister? What did she do to Bea to help Bea feel the way she does about herself?
Wonderful story you have here..really.
Author's Response: Thank you, read and find out. I promise it's going to surprise you. Reviewer: Flikchick Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 31/12/08 05:59 am
Oh boy - I just read the story up to here and I love it. I can't wait for more. I don't know who this red head it but for some reason I think she needs to get her butt whipped.
Author's Response: Thanks and yes she does.
Date: 30/12/08 10:22 pm
Great story, it is good that Nikko is going to help his sister out by giving her his bone marrow even after she has been so evil towards him. He should tell his boyfriend what is going on.
As for Bea and Luc I think that they make a great couple and it is understandable why she is so nervous about their relationship but she needs to go with the flow.
I take it that the woman that is going to get her man is coming looking for Luc and will encounter Bea and say some bullshit to her to make her leave.
And Bea's sister is running away from an abusive husband .
Looking forward to reading more. Thanks
Author's Response: You're close but not exactly on the nose persay but close enough.*grin* Reviewer: Divsionred Signed
[Report This]Date: 30/12/08 01:48 pm