Loving this story so far especially the development of a relationship between Bea and Lucas. Nikko is a mess but he's ok.
Author's Response: I try to make it so the reader(you) are almost inside their head and your looking out instead of looking at it from above as a detached figure.
Date: 12/07/09 05:47 pm
Please put some spacing in here. It makes it so much easier to read.
Author's Response: I fixed that. I'm deeply sorry I was in such a hurry to post that I didn't preview it thank you for telling me.
Date: 12/07/09 07:30 am
I'm glad Bea is giving Lucas a chance. Her insecurities was starting to be a bit annoying. Love this story!
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 17/05/09 09:15 pm
I'm not liking Julia so much right now.
Author's Response: Trust me you'll hate her at first.
Date: 02/04/09 05:46 pm
It always amazing me how people can see each others problems, but not their own. Bea can see Nikko issues with George, but she's in denial about the fact that she's doing the same thing.
Author's Response: She's in for a wild ride.
[Report This]Date: 28/02/09 03:22 pm
My best critque huh?.....DAMN!!!!! How's that? So many questions.....MORE, MORE, MORE!!!!!!!! I Love Lucas, this man is sexy as HELL and the best part is, he doesn't know it and if he did, he damn sure don't show it...Love this story.
Author's Response: I should have it done by Wendsday.
[Report This]Date: 02/01/09 09:04 am
why is my girl so scared....i like that lucas is feeling bea hard in all sense of the word....lol...
my po Nikko...i hope he doesnt get his heart stomp on again....
great chapter...
Author's Response: He might not Reviewer: Cma Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 01/01/09 04:12 pm
i love me some nikko.....sorry it took me so long after i bedded for an earlier updated but Cmami's back...and in full effect baby....now onto the next chappy......
oh and thanks for making my Nikko cheerful and witty again....i thought i was going to have to curse and scream cuz you were hurting my babyboo....lol
great job :D
Author's Response:
Be ready for the big let down.
Reviewer: Cma Anonymous [Report This]Date: 01/01/09 10:52 am
This story is developing nicely. I especially loved the fact that he reads to her, I think that's so sexy.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I try to make sure I show Luc's character or he'll be upset with me.
Reviewer: Sweet Pea Signed [Report This]Date: 31/12/08 06:18 am
This is really good.
Bea has some serious self-esteem issues going on. She keeps waiting for the other show to drop with Lucas. And I understand because clearly she been hurt and mistreated by both men and women like that before, but its still kinda irritating she keeps doing it with Lucas. Only because Lucas really is going that extra mile to persuade her that he's serious about her.
He's wanting her to meet his family for pete's sake! If he wasn't serious he wouldn't be doing that. He wouldn't have to. He could just dump her before he ever had to let it get that far. Men dont do that with just anyone.
And I have to say that Lucas is being incredibly patient and understanding with her.
Bea really just needs to talk to him about it instead of just assuming and reacting to what she thinks he might do.
And whats the deal with her sister? What did she do to Bea to help Bea feel the way she does about herself?
Wonderful story you have here..really.
Author's Response: Thank you, read and find out. I promise it's going to surprise you. Reviewer: Flikchick Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 31/12/08 05:59 am
Oh boy - I just read the story up to here and I love it. I can't wait for more. I don't know who this red head it but for some reason I think she needs to get her butt whipped.
Author's Response: Thanks and yes she does.
Date: 30/12/08 10:22 pm
Great story, it is good that Nikko is going to help his sister out by giving her his bone marrow even after she has been so evil towards him. He should tell his boyfriend what is going on.
As for Bea and Luc I think that they make a great couple and it is understandable why she is so nervous about their relationship but she needs to go with the flow.
I take it that the woman that is going to get her man is coming looking for Luc and will encounter Bea and say some bullshit to her to make her leave.
And Bea's sister is running away from an abusive husband .
Looking forward to reading more. Thanks
Author's Response: You're close but not exactly on the nose persay but close enough.*grin* Reviewer: Divsionred Signed
[Report This]Date: 30/12/08 01:48 pm
I just read this and it is good. I do sometimes get a lil lost when you switch from one scene to another, but, recovery quickly.
I like.
Author's Response: I'll try to make my scene jumps easier to follow. I just get so intuned that I forget that readers are not in my head to follow my stream of thought. Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 21/12/08 05:52 pm
Wow!!! I am literally speechless and I don't get that way often. I like your way of writing. I love Bea, Nikko and Lucas. I can't wait for more. My only problem is that Bea is a little self conscious but it is understandable when you got this sexy man after you and you're thinking that he should be with someone more prettier. Girlfriend betta get the lead out and start accepting that she got a fine arse man and that fine arse man is totally into her. Hopefully, it won't take her too long to register in that fact!! BTW, I am dying to put faces to the names; I have my ideas and I am wondering if I am dead on. If you don't have any pics; no worries (they're in my head...esp. Lucas). And can I just say DAMN, SCORCHING to those sex scenes ;) Plus, I love that Lucas is cocky; he reminds me of a soapopera character from a couple of years ago. More! More! More!
Author's Response: No, I don't have pictures; I think your imagination is best. Thank you, I'll do my best.
[Report This]Date: 21/12/08 06:45 am
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...... my po Nikko poor poor poor Nikko....but dude there is only so much George can take......
Lucas slow down before Bea brings everything to a crashing hault....
hurry up and get your butt back in here Mid....i aint playin.... :P
oh and thanks for keeping yer word and updating this weekend for me....
**Hugs n Smooches**
Cma
Author's Response: I feel so love.*smile* Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 23/11/08 06:21 am
Liked them grocery shopping together. Bea needs to start speaking up when something or someone gets on her nerves. Keeping that all bottled up isn't doing her any good or those around her.
The same for Nikko. Both he and Bea need to be honest with their respective partners.
Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Thanks for beta-ing and reviewing Reviewer: lovemboth Signed
[Report This]Date: 23/11/08 01:51 am
Luc staking claim and nik a true friend. Its good to be Bea!
Author's Response: You say that know.
[Report This]Date: 02/11/08 08:13 pm
Yeah, nikko, he did.lol!
Author's Response: *blush*
[Report This]Date: 02/11/08 08:06 pm
Great story ...thanks
Author's Response:
...Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 02/11/08 07:54 pm
Interesting story so far, however, do try to slow it down some. Everything seems just a bit rushed.
Author's Response: I'll try but I won't make any promises.
Date: 02/11/08 12:27 pm
Oh my po Nikko.....seriously LMAO @ the liquid heat and poison Ivy......oh i could so it....lol....
Thanks ML that was funny....luved the update dont make me wait too long for the next update please please please.....
Author's Response: Sorry I did make you wait long but you know I'm working on ch 8 for this week k. Reviewer: CMA Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 02/11/08 02:49 am
I so luv NIKKO....HI-FIVE 2 Bea....
Author's Response:
Nikko loves himself too.
Reviewer: Cma Anonymous [Report This]Date: 23/10/08 10:46 pm
Well, Lucas certainly knows how to entertain his dinner guest! Surprised he allowed her to leave. LOL
I'm glad to see that Lucas got a commitment of monogamy from Bea before sleeping with her again.
Nikko is too much! LOL
Author's Response: Who said he let her go willingly? Reviewer: lovemboth Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 23/10/08 08:03 pm
Great update! Keep them coming, okay? :)
Author's Response: Can do.^-^
[Report This]Date: 22/10/08 08:12 pm
The sex was hot. But whats up with nikko?
Author's Response: You'll just have to wait to find out.
[Report This]Date: 19/10/08 02:32 pm