Great so far. I love reading worldwind romances that take me for a spin. Please keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
I try.
Reviewer: Kelleyli Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 19/10/08 02:29 pm
Great story...thanks
Author's Response: Welcome.
[Report This]Date: 19/10/08 07:15 am
Wow can home boy be over protective or what....I mean dayum down boy can he let the lady breath.....i guess not tho not with those luscious lips of his....again i luv NIKKO...i hope he gets a some story time too....
i cant wait for another update...please make it soon...i dont know how long i can wait over here.....
great job...
Author's Response: Thank ya kindly. Reviewer: Cma Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 08/10/08 06:27 pm
hahahaha is was hicked up...nice she left her mark on him....Nikko is a trip....i just simply adore him...thats right Bea get yer butt in gear cuz you going on a date with a hunk....
more i need more...please
Author's Response: K I'll have it to you by Saturday. Reviewer: Cma Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 08/10/08 06:23 pm
Their relationship is building up quite nicely, MidnightLone. I love Nikko, he's a riot!
I sent you an email. Let me know what you think.
Author's Response: Read it and is taken care of. Reviewer: lovemboth Signed
[Report This]Date: 30/09/08 01:44 am
I like where this story is going. I hope we can start getting some more detail on both of their lives. Great update!
Author's Response: That going to take time but keep and I out you never know.
[Report This]Date: 29/09/08 07:18 pm
You're doing a wonderful job with this story. Bea's a great character, and she and Lucas are very, very hot, excellent work!
Author's Response: Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 29/09/08 06:55 am
I have enjoy reading the first two (2) chapters of your story. It was a joy to read about a plus sized women finding romance or sex with a nice looking guy, that do not want to hide her away. Keep up the good work and please update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 26/09/08 10:34 pm
Great story...lookign forwad to reading more. Thanks
Author's Response: Keep a lookout never know.
Date: 15/09/08 01:59 pm
Nikko is funny. I liked the insight into Lucas's desire for Bea, but I would have like to have seen of Bea's desire.
Author's Response: I'm working on that one right now.
[Report This]Date: 15/09/08 05:02 am
I like Nikko! He's the kind of friend that will get things moving.
Looking forward to the next update!
Author's Response:
He's is isn't he dispite the fact he's alittle bossy.
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed [Report This]Date: 15/09/08 12:01 am
That was so hot! It'll be interesting to see how these two end up.
Author's Response: Read and find out.
Date: 08/09/08 04:40 am
Good start. What does a Beta reader do exactly?
Author's Response:
A BETA READER: is someone who reads your work before you let the masses see to ensure the grammar is correct. It's very hear to catch all of the YOUR own mistakes when you’re the writer. A beta reader basically helps you with the errors you missed.
Reviewer: lovemboth Signed [Report This]Date: 07/09/08 03:14 am
derrière........lmao...i just luv that word....great start i cant wait to read more.....i need more....glad he kept his promise and stayed....
Bravo....
Author's Response:
Thank you my characters are their own individuals with likes and dislikes I just write what they give me.
Reviewer: Cmami Anonymous [Report This]Date: 07/09/08 12:17 am
Damn Bea and Lucas are HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT!
I really like your writing style. It felt kind of voyeur. Keep it going Chica....let me pop my popcorn!!! *munch*
Author's Response:
Darling, I am a voyeur.
Reviewer: Minx Anonymous [Report This]Date: 06/09/08 10:48 pm
Great Start
Author's Response: Thank you.
Date: 06/09/08 10:37 pm