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Title: Chapter 7

Loved the update. Wow, Eric is too sneaky.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/07/11 07:45 am

Title: Chapter 7

Tara needs to curb the anger.  So, Sam's bad because he has been working for the Feds.  Okay, but don't your feelings for him matter?  What about how he feels for her?  She's normally a hot head, but not stupid.  So far, it appears that Alcide, Eric and company want to use her to breed.  Shouldn't they be the enemy?  At least with Sam, she loves him.  Lafayette's out of control.  I'm surprised he was willing to kill Jesus just to get information out of him.  Torture is one thing, killing is another.  This is all new to Lafayette and Tara, so I would think killing would be difficult.  On the other hand, Lafayette may be desensitized since he's been training by hurting vampires.  Tara should realize that Sam wasn't going to kill her.  He was trying to work a new deal, that Jesus probably didn't know about.  Sam said he wants to marry Tara and protect her from all this mess.  Is Jesus a witch as well in this?  How would he know that Tara can create life from the dead?  Which obviously means that Tara and Eric can conceive a child.  Eric thinks he's now entitled to breeding rights.  What the hell is wrong with these supernaturals.  Slavery days are over.  Why should any of them be able to breed with her and expect her to comply.  They act like they have a right to her body and that she should willingly bear their offspring.  We all knew Mason and Jules weren't going to last and I'm not sorry to see them go.  Tara did go to Alcide like her Aunt requested, but she didn't want to listen at first.  I don't think Alcide is the answer either.  I never heard anything about having sex in front of two werewolves if you cannot consummate in water.  It was water, metal and wood, right?  Debbie and Coot watching is more than a little creepy.  Stop being lazy and find a body of water or just use the damn tub.  Why is Tara allowing herself to be treated like a piece of property?  It's like her legs fall open whenever a guy looks at her.  I guess it will be that way when it's Eric's turn.  Then there will be three men who could have fathered her child, should she find herself pregnant.  It's like Eric is projecting dreams to Tara or it may be a side affect of his blood in her system.  I'm curious to see what's going to happen next.  You wrote Lost a Bamon story and planned to write a sequel.  Are you still thinking of writing Lost the Other Side Of The Island?  I hope so, the first story was awesome. 

Reviewer: Elizabeth Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 13/07/11 01:59 am

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