I'm not even half way through the chapter, but OMG he's being a little bitch! I get all the issues of the past but if he can't let them go, then he should let her go.Reviewer: LeosLove Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/08/16 04:36 am
Love it!Reviewer: LeosLove Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/08/16 08:28 pm
Great story! Great chapter!Reviewer: LeosLove Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24/08/16 06:50 pm
They say theirs some truth in fiction. Well written and very pignant.Reviewer: Felicia Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 14/06/14 05:42 pm
Honestly I don't know if I could bring a kid into that crazy family. That kid is gonna have issues if it is raised in that environment. Me n Matheson would have to have a long talk about who are kid will be exposed to during those formative years. Good lord.Reviewer: Troysmom0409 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/12/13 07:04 pm
Ok. I had to analyze my feelings about this man and his NEED to get married after knowing Val for only 2 months. It dawned on me that what bothered me is that it's not realistic but then I palm slapped myself DUH!!! This is a NOVEL. KUDOS to you. This is so realistic that I'm trying to put this in my reality bubble. I have to remember this is fantasy. I must say that I am enjoying the ride.
LOL. It was a little quick wasn't it? Matheson has found a girl that wasn't demanding sex and he just fell for her right off. Thanks for the review.Reviewer: Troysmom0409 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/12/13 04:54 pm
He had gramma a told!!! I HATE when black women say they have Native American or Asian blood in them apropos of nothing. What a cop out. I get asked frequently what I'm "mixed with". My dead pan answer is always I'm mixed with black and black. I mean really. I HEART this chapter!Reviewer: Troysmom0409 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/12/13 06:21 am
You tell her matheson! Someone needed to knock some sense into that girl and he did it! Yeah....fist pump. She deserves happines and she deserves to feel beautiful. I hope he is up for the job....get it? Nudge nudge. Up for the job (penile dysfunction foreshadowing. LolReviewer: Troysmom0409 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30/12/13 04:22 am
As a black chick from California I will say that this convo has been very disturbing. M'kay?Reviewer: Troysmom0409 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 30/12/13 03:44 am
So finally I have got some time to review your story, I pulled an all-night reading, unable to stop myself even though I had to wake up early and go to work. I loved this story, its so entertaining, I love the dialogue and I love Val and Matheson, and oh my gosh Emily is a little cookoo, but her cookooness makes her a very interesting character. Who falls in love with a 13 year old boy? How hot was this boy. I am so glad you didn't make that relationship all roses and what-not, that there were other problems, outside problems sure but problems. And i like that Val and Matheson had obstacles but still loved each other through it all.
That being said, I have to say that my favorite character is hannah. I don't know why, but she resonnated with me. And when Emilio came into the picture...I was like wow you go girl, I would have loved to learn more about there relationship but I understand that would be like a whole other book. So I will take and treasure what I can get.
This disturbing scene and somewhat the most fascinating is the one between matheson and his grandfather, with the knife. Oh the drama, it was unstoppable and it was intriguing. And the story in between the Millie's mother and millie's father was so amarzing. I stated hated him, and then gradually you made me love him and feel so sorry for him, for them, for their situation. Imagine how many people could have been in love and because of the social structure, and the racism could not be together. How many people had to hide their love in the shadows? its a haunting thought, so kudos for letting me and everyone see that love between two people, in two ends of the social structure, with things such as race and laws keeping them apart, could have existed.
I love stereotypically yours, but I love that story between Millie's parents most of all, because its something that trickled down generations and no matter how sad and tragic it is, it touched me. You are very talented, and I should know...I read a lot, I read the way some people breath. I think you could be a proffessional if you wished, but if you just wish to share you imagination with the world regardless of money, then thank you so much for that.
You are so kind. I read your review and to be honest, had to to stop and think because it's been a while since I wrote this story. Thanks for responding to my review of YOUR story. Your story really grabbed me which is why I wrote the long review. Secretly in the back of my mind though, I kinda wonder if your characters will somehow work things out even though it started out bad. I cant see how, but with your compelling writing, I won't be surprised if you throw me for a loop. LOL Thanks for the review!Reviewer: ZanPotter Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/10/13 08:33 pm
I know i have said this before but please write a story where you give tameka a happy ending every time i read this story and yes i have read it more than once i just want to cry for her and sometimes i do i would be so much more settled if she also got a happy ending i am begging you
Thanks so much for your review. I haven't thought of this story in a while and yes you know I'm a sucker for happy endings. If I can't get these others stories done, I will give your request as serious consideration! Thanks again.Reviewer: sweetrst1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14/06/13 07:44 am
I like the story. Of course you know there is a sequel or a series. They have so much more to experience. All of them. I can't wait to see if they have a boy or a girl, or both. So take your break and then get back to the story. I be checking the Chamber.
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Date: 16/03/13 04:02 pm