I like the story. Of course you know there is a sequel or a series. They have so much more to experience. All of them. I can't wait to see if they have a boy or a girl, or both. So take your break and then get back to the story. I be checking the Chamber.
Reviewer: VeMo Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 16/03/13 04:02 pm
hey brenda!! just revisiting matheson and val. looove these two!! i hope one day youll write a baby fic for them. thanks again for a lovely story!! ima have to figure out how to get this on my reader! i should send you a check for real lol!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yes, I may revisit them if I can ever get my other stories finished. LOL Just give me some time.
Reviewer: brownskingurl Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 26/03/12 09:44 pm
WOW! I like the explosive jump off of this story, seems to promise excitement!
Valysia in her first meeting with Matheson came rough and insulting, I like that he took control and bested her! I also felt a little sorry for her when in reaction he called her "ugly' although she is not and he did not mean it but she was just so irritating.
I think Val feel's inferior to the standard usually applied to women, which is White, so I understand her defensiveness, but her attitude is so strong it kind of betrays that she is in protective mode. I also think Val is actually very attracted to this White boys extreme good looks and is fighting it in herself, feeling she is betraying "race pride" by her feelings.
Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed [Report This]Date: 26/01/12 10:33 am
I love it. Two hot headed people, they will be full of passion.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 13/09/11 05:25 am
Loved the update - can't wait to read about the wedding!
Reviewer: katie Signed [Report This]Date: 13/09/11 01:29 am
Brenda I'm going through withdrawl! Your stories have been so great! Keep writing you are awesome!
Reviewer: npatrick Signed [Report This]Date: 10/08/11 04:05 am
Wow you got to love these twos I thought she was about to kick his butt and knowing him he would enjoy it lol. I wonder what going to happen next with these two? Thank for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 09/08/11 07:04 pm
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Author's Response:
Matthew stopped her from drinking the beer that Tameka had bought her so that he could buy her another one and spike it.
Tameka bit off more than she could chew and now she's paying for it. Matheson's father is going to get his for sure!
Oh, okay. I misunderstood. After I read the rest of the chapters I figured it out. I thought it was Tameka that was going to slip something in her drink. I didn't know Gramps had hired those two thugs to hurt VaLysia. The rape could have gone the other way. Thanks for your creative mind :).
Reviewer: 100%fan Anonymous [Report This]Date: 09/08/11 06:42 pm
Yes I know she said MAVIS was her mother so shouldn't he say your daughter? I went back and read it. I am under the impression that he is talking Mavis not Val.
Thanks for responding
Author's Response:
Ill have to go back and reread and make any necessary corrections. Thanks
Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed [Report This]Date: 08/08/11 11:20 pm
OMO OMO, what can i say: that i love it, i already did it; that u are good, done, so interesting so far, & val is really pregnant & twins? i mean when they ... lol; anyways im still waiting, i hope some ep beforE i go to the bed lol
Reviewer: mdpierrette Signed [Report This]Date: 08/08/11 08:52 pm
the racism in this story is starting to feel extreme and unrealistic. otherwise, i love it!
Author's Response:
LOL where do you live? I'm in VA. Believe me, most of what I'm saying in this story I have heard with my own ears!
Reviewer: lucy Anonymous [Report This]Date: 08/08/11 04:06 pm
i love your story & you are so fast that i become avare, i come here every 5minutes just to see if u updaete lol. your are so good, i read all your story, & i love emily, she's crazy hahaha, continue fighting
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I have written about 40 chapters which I'm trying to put on the chamber. It's not finished yet and I do have to get back to writing real soon. LOL
Reviewer: mdpierrette Signed [Report This]Date: 08/08/11 02:41 pm
Great start to the story. I was ROFLMAO at Val and Matheson. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 07/08/11 03:08 pm
Great start to the story. I was ROFLMAO at Val and Matheson. Thanks
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 07/08/11 03:08 pm
I am loving it already but I have become quit fond of your stories.
Mat and Val are hott for each other already from jump...I wonder how Mat is going to handle that especially after inadvertly call babygirl ugly...then kissing her.
Great start....
Thank you for sharing...
Happy writing!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 05/08/11 08:48 pm
I love this story i remember reading it on FP and I love the story line...update soon
Reviewer: musicalywritten Signed [Report This]Date: 05/08/11 07:08 pm
Lol...loving what I read so far.
That exchange in the music room was hilarious!
[Report This]Date: 05/08/11 02:30 pm
oh my gosh another wonderful new story whoo i am already hooked!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 05/08/11 02:18 pm
What a great start...let the sparks begin!!!!
So looking forward to the next update...hope it's soon.
Reviewer: attheritz Signed [Report This]Date: 05/08/11 02:10 pm