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Title: Chapter 6 Facing the Truth

With family like that who needs....a therapist? Geez

Reviewer: Troysmom0409 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30/12/13 04:35 am

Title: Chapter 6 Facing the Truth

There are some mean ones on both sides of the family. Too many obstacles coming at them too early in this almost relationship.

Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/09/11 05:59 pm

Title: Chapter 6 Facing the Truth

One reviewer made a comment about these people claiming to love one another, I think she was referring to Matheson's parents. But after reading this chapter I feel that the same is true for Mavis. I think that a better word to describe her feelings for Matheson and his parents is FONDNESS. From her comment to Val about Matheson it is obvious that she doesn't love him as a child that she helped to raise. While it's true that she may not know how he would react in a certain situation LOVE expects the best.

Marvis didn't apologize for hurting Matheson she only made excuses. I was saddened by that. It is possible for Mavis to love Val and Matheson too, differently of course, but I don't get the feeling that she cares about how Matheson feels given the situation, and for me that's alittle sad.



Author's Response:

One of the reasons Mavis reacted like she did is because of what she perceived white men wanting from a black woman.  She couldn't imagine at that time that he could love her granddaughter like that.  She comes from a different era and different time and this is new for her.  It reminds me of when my son told the family that he was going off the college.  My mom had only gone to grammar school and she encouraged us to finish high school  College was not in her vocabulary.  She just didn't know.  I went to a local college and she was so proud telling everyone of her friends that I was going to college, and to her it was a big deal!  When my son told her he was going away to a University in another state, she was not enthusiastic and my son's feeling were hurt.  No one in our family had ever gone away to school.  It was a foreign concept to her.  However when I took her down there on parent's weekend and she saw the school and saw his dorm, it became real to her and she became his biggest fan.  

Mavis had to open her mind to something that she couldn't conceive happening. A white man loving and respecting her daughter as a woman worthy of being his beau.  After she realized that he was serious, she became their biggest supporter.  

 

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Ketaj1316 Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 20/08/11 06:23 pm

Title: Chapter 6 Facing the Truth

wow Tameka is a real bitch how she talks to her cousin and that grandma who called her the mailman baby that just wrong on so many levels. I glad that Mat had a talk with Val grandmother and they understand each other. Thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/08/11 04:05 am

Title: Chapter 6 Facing the Truth

Love this story so far.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/08/11 08:24 am

Title: Chapter 6 Facing the Truth

Oh my goodness, Cuz Tameka is a hawt mess to follow her cousin and then to take down the man she was with plate number and have someone run it. Unbelievable.  I am glad that Mavis had that talk with Matheson.  Her analogies about the men on the ship praying to God was very powerful.  Thanks

Reviewer: Divsionred Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07/08/11 04:33 pm

Title: Chapter 6 Facing the Truth

I don't like that ho Tameka!!!  I think that Val should have whopped her @$$!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/11 06:20 am

Title: Chapter 6 Facing the Truth

Color struck folk get on my ever loving nerves.

I am with Val I would not go see the woman either all she is interested in is that Val is/maybe dating a white man that has money.

Ugggh!

Thank you!

Happy writing!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/08/11 03:30 am

Title: Chapter 6 Facing the Truth

pitiful people in both val and matheson family i see!!!!

Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/08/11 03:12 am

Title: Chapter 6 Facing the Truth

I really, really like this story. I hope you post more of the chapters you have written, this is going to get really interesting. Opposites attract so the saying goes.

Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06/08/11 01:28 am

Title: Chapter 6 Facing the Truth

Her relatives are a trip! Grandma wants a piece of somebody else's money. SMH She dogged that girl her entire life and now because she thinks her beau has money, she wants to be nice-she should be ashamed.

This chapter truck a nerve with me. Old folks don't understand that what they say to a young child could scar them for life.

It's funny how someone's words can have an effect on another person's life.

Reviewer: 100%fan Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/08/11 12:31 am

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