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Title: Chapter 28 Don't Mess With Emily

AH!  That's one of the reasons I like Emily, she truly Loves Mavis as her mother and not as a mammy and she respects her deeply and fights for Mavis happiness above all else.

At this moment of Mavis coming unexpectantly into meeting her half brother who unfortunately looks just like their rapist father, Mavis is thrown into great misery and shock but I bet Emily who knows not of the rape of Mavis mother will get to the bottom of this and resolve in Mavis favor.

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/01/12 02:35 am

Title: Chapter 28 Don't Mess With Emily

Omg that grandfather is cruel man I bet he had something to do that man coming seeing Mavis and all. thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/08/11 04:44 am

Title: Chapter 28 Don't Mess With Emily

This story has gotten even better. I love it!

Reviewer: 100%fan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/08/11 07:47 pm

Title: Chapter 28 Don't Mess With Emily

William's little plot to cause problems for Mavis and Val has just been usurped by Hurricane Emily.  Emily you shouldn't have pushed Mavis like that, her momma was raped it was no affair.   Langston repeatedly raped her mother, so why would she want to get to know his child.  You meant well Emily but that was still bogus.  Great chapter!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/11 05:27 pm

Title: Chapter 28 Don't Mess With Emily

Hmmmm. Interesting. Was it a chance meeting or did William Sr have something to do with that nah I don't think so.

I hope Langton does some background checking in his family history.  Yep dude you have a black sister from another mother ;).

Great update as always. 

Thank you

Happy writing.

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08/08/11 05:25 pm

Title: Chapter 28 Don't Mess With Emily

wow what an small world!!!!!

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Date: 08/08/11 04:40 pm

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