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Title: Chapter 43 A Taste of Insanity and Obsession

GO!  Matheson!  And I am so proud of him!

Matheson really put the fear of God in that rebel racist gramps-William Sr, now I greatly hope William leaves Valysia and Matheson alone to have their happiness.  And leave Tam alone too; although she brought a lot of the evil on herself and was Gramps accomplice; my concern is that any continued harm to her from Gramps would make problems in the Matheson and Hendricks family also caused stress for Valysia and Matheson relationship.

 

Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/01/12 04:34 pm

Title: Chapter 43 A Taste of Insanity and Obsession

Hello, Brenda, I finally had the chance to catch back up, been busy back at work and in meetings all week..so don't have much time to read let alone review...

Anywho...Val's grandmother, Ethel, is C-R-A-Z-Y and E-V-I-L...so glad that Val confronted that old harpy and let her know that her plan to separate the cousins didn't work at all...she's a miserable old wench who wants everyone else to be as miserable as she is...I find it hard that ANY man would have found anything beyond her "looks" likeable enough to marry her...petty, mean-spirited, and plain old vindictive is what she is...and then having the nerve to haul off and smack Val for telling her the truth about herself...Val should have slapped the taste out of her twisted mouth...but I suppose I'll have to be content with the verbal smackdown she gave the old biddy...how evil do you have to be to treat your own grandchildren the way she treated both Val and Tameka...she reminds me of Mister in The Color Purple who deliberately tried to keep Celie and Nettie apart because he knew they were the only ones who loved each other...I hope she lives the rest of her pathetic existence alone with a houseful of cats...

Glad Val has finally found the strength through Matheson's love to wash her hand of the sick woman and now is forging a new relationship with her cousin...for a long time I was angry at Tameka too...but she's just a scared little girl who's felt unloved her whole life who was also mentally abused by ther grandmother...shame on the grownups in her life...at least Val had Mavis...Meka had no one...my heart breaks for her despite what she did to her cousin...and she paid heavily for it...

Now the latest update with Matheson's confrontation with Gramps...way to go, Matheson, way to go...the old wrinkled fart had it coming to him in spades...loved how Matheson proved to him that he's not only a Hendriks...but he has Matheson blood running through his veins...didn't know Matheson is as 'touched' as his dear mama Emily...bet the old coot nearly wet his Depends as Matheson pressed that knife to his throat...but you don't mess with a man's heart the way Gramps has been messing with Matheson's love, Val, loved how Matheson already thinks and refers to Val as being his wife...she is his as much as he is hers...and nothing and no one can come between a love like that...let's see if Gramps is really quick on the uptake or if he still has some dirty trick up his sleeve...but beware...Matheson don't play that!!! LOL!!!

Love this story...more, more, more!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the wonderful review.  Yes, I'm still trying to figure out what's going to happen to Ethel, that old hag.  Matheson is not as crazy as his mother, his grandfather kinda drove him to that point.  Sometimes people can be pushed only so much!  I've enjoyed writing this story for more than a year.  I can't believe I've let it drag on this long.  It will be ending soon after the wedding, but I won't stop writing.  I'll have to give Mat and Val a break.  Most likely I will pick it up again later.  

Reviewer: attheritz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/08/11 03:04 pm

Title: Chapter 43 A Taste of Insanity and Obsession

OMG! Loved it Mat had that ole man shaking in his boots.

4 a min there I thought Mat truly had flew over the coo-coo's nest but again he is also his mother's child I will be surprised if Emily herself doesn't get a lil piece of the action herself since this is dealing with the family she has always wanted with Mavis and that was being tampered with by the old man.

great update as always can't wait 4 more.

Thank u

Happy writing

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/08/11 02:31 pm

Title: Chapter 43 A Taste of Insanity and Obsession

Wooo Weee Brenda girl this was really a great update I'm so happy that Matheson have gotten his point across to his grandfather and if that old man know whats good for him he will do as Matheson ask because I do believe that Matheson will keep that threat he made to him and that knife I've seen that kind before too and yes it very sharp and very scarey too lol anyway looking forward to see what happens next so please update again soon was nice to come and see another one take care have a great evening and a wonderful weekend!!

Reviewer: IndianPrincess Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20/08/11 12:54 am

Title: Chapter 43 A Taste of Insanity and Obsession

And that's what separates mice from men. Get it done Matty!

Excellent chapter. I was on the edge the whole way through

Reviewer: Vita Consuelo Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/08/11 08:42 am

Title: Chapter 43 A Taste of Insanity and Obsession

I absolutely loved it! It was great seeing that old bastard get exactly what was coming to him. Pity Matheson didn't push that knife into his throat. I love this story like a fat kid loves cake. Still think Ethel should get a colossal beatdown. I don't think she's really learned her lesson. So glad Val and Matheson will be together. Awesome update.

Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/08/11 06:27 am

Title: Chapter 43 A Taste of Insanity and Obsession

Loved Matheson's plan. Glad he gave grandpa a reality check while playing crazy. Thankfully Tameka is gonna be taken care of.

Reviewer: baha_malo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/08/11 06:22 am

Title: Chapter 43 A Taste of Insanity and Obsession

Hot Damn!!! This chapter rocks! More pleaseeee.....

Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/08/11 05:40 am

Title: Chapter 43 A Taste of Insanity and Obsession

Damn...that knife is serious.  I'm glad Matheson scared his grandfather straight because William was on some other stuff... 

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/08/11 05:23 am

Title: Chapter 43 A Taste of Insanity and Obsession

Didn't see that coming.  Wow.

Reviewer: crocuslady Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/08/11 03:11 am

Title: Chapter 43 A Taste of Insanity and Obsession

I loved this update and the look of fear on Gramps face was priceless!!!  I still think that he needs to go to jail but Matheson's way was way more entertaining!!!  This story is so awesome!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/08/11 02:12 am

Title: Chapter 43 A Taste of Insanity and Obsession

LOL! Matheson is crazy! Glad Ethel got told told, the old biddy! Glad Meka and Val made up.

Awesome chapter!

Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/08/11 01:56 am

Title: Chapter 43 A Taste of Insanity and Obsession

Great update.

I do think that Matt got the crazy gene after all. I'm surprise that Matt went that route.

I would have hurt Grampa in the pockets to get back at him.

Can't wait for the next update.

 



Author's Response:

Yes, Mat has that crazy gene.  You must remember that Emily's parents were distant cousins!  LOL.

Gramps is going to pay.  He has to find Tameka a condo, pay her medical bills and come off some cash.  He's not a happy camper.

I have to go to NY next week, so it may be a week or so before I can update again unless I can work something in this weekend.

 

thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Janetbd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/08/11 01:24 am

Title: Chapter 43 A Taste of Insanity and Obsession

alright go mat glad he got his grandfather and scared that crap out of his evil ass lol. Go mat thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19/08/11 01:03 am

Title: Chapter 43 A Taste of Insanity and Obsession

I've loved this story since Romance FanFiction! Loving the chapters going up so early! Man, didn't think Mattheson had it in him to talk dirty like that! Can't wait to read the next chapters! Oh and the pictures do him and Val justice! Although I thought of Michael Vartan as Matheson, but I like the look of the guy in the pic next to Val.  Way to be crazy like your mama! :)

 



Author's Response:

I am going to update on FP, but I have a beta there and she hasn't read over my last two chapters.  I didn't want to hurt her feelings by posting before she read them,I don't think she knows I'm posting here.  I have to go to NY next week, so there may not be another update imediately. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: kooshasay Signed [Report This]
Date: 19/08/11 12:45 am

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