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Title: Chapter 44 Dinner and Destiny

GAWD!  This chapter was pure comic genius.  I laughed greatly and throughout; the dinner was really hilarious and I had a great time!

 Gramps is in trouble he just couldn't stop the  hate from spewing out his mouth, now he'll be committed and now I'm starting to wonder that  maybe carrying so much racist hatred over so many years finally imbalanced his mind a little.

Hatred is a poison!

 Reviewer: 5Danielle Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28/01/12 05:55 pm
Title: Chapter 44 Dinner and Destiny

I have heard of "swapping spit," but "swapping cum?" that is a first for me. I may have to get me one of those pleasure books!

 Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15/10/11 12:36 am
Title: Chapter 44 Dinner and Destiny

Excellent update!!! Can't wait to see what happens next!!!

 Reviewer: BossLady Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14/09/11 10:12 pm
Title: Chapter 44 Dinner and Destiny

Thanks for the update.. that dinner party had me LMAO... Emily is a RIOT and I love how she doesn't hold her tounge for anyone... and whhen Gregory said "Son if the talk too much, stick something in their mouth" that was just PRICLESS, it had me ROTFLMAO.

Again, great update, and can't wait for the wedding.

 Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13/09/11 10:25 pm
Title: Chapter 44 Dinner and Destiny

So good! I really missed this family and their antics.

 Reviewer: LadyeT Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/09/11 05:41 pm
Title: Chapter 44 Dinner and Destiny

Loved the update. Yes!! The tables have turned on gramps!! He better watch his step!!

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Date: 13/09/11 07:32 am
Title: Chapter 44 Dinner and Destiny

oh my I'm so gald I read today update need the laugh today. I see emily is still her wild self and ms. hannah is getting it in all the right places lol. I like this chapter you get to see the family bond and emily still be emily love the story and thank for the update.

 Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13/09/11 01:55 am
Title: Chapter 44 Dinner and Destiny

Thanks for udating. I have been looking forward to this update for a while. It was hilarious, poor Gramps gonna get some mental help. LOL!!, and Matheston stroking the butter knife. 



Author's Response:

Gramps needs to be put away somewhere so he can stay out of trouble.  Thanks for the review!

 Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/11 11:57 pm
Title: Chapter 44 Dinner and Destiny

Absolutly loved it a wonderful worth the wait update!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

 Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/09/11 11:48 pm
Title: Chapter 44 Dinner and Destiny

Well Ms Brenda I have to admit bashfully so that I have gotten so wrapped up in "Good thing in a Small Package" that I had totally forgetten about this story not that it is any less the Jules and Amaris story just that I had gotten so wrapped into them and was one track cause I was getting a fix on them almost daily I had forgetten but sista girl now that you have refreshed me with an update of Mat and Val's story I have no clue  what I could have been thinking about.

I love it no one believed William about Mat trying to kill him but he did it to himself with all his actions that has been leading to this point. Even Ms Jessica don't believe him especially his shading action as of late.

Girl I know the wedding night is going to be off the chain especially if Val has already taken a peek of the pleasure book.

Thank you for sharing....

Happy writing and more please on both "Good things in a small Package" and "Stereotypically Yours"



Author's Response:

Thanks Thundakat:  SY has been my baby for a long time and I am ready to put it to rest for a minute.  The wedding will be the end of this saga (unless of course I do a sequel).  

 

I'm going to have to think of some really nasty things for the wedding night...LOL.  If I get too graphic, put your hand over one eye.  LOL

 

I'm going to work on my update on "Good Things" tonite.  Hopefully it'll be out by tomorrow!

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 Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/09/11 11:30 pm
Title: Chapter 44 Dinner and Destiny

I am so glad that no one believed William when they said that Matheson tried to kiss him.  I am so glad that is going away to get a little rest, he deserves worse for what he did.  But I will accept that treament.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/09/11 08:38 pm
Title: Chapter 44 Dinner and Destiny

another great update as always. That damn Williams is getting his payback in spades...Luv it!

 Reviewer: Elizablu Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12/09/11 07:32 pm
Title: Chapter 44 Dinner and Destiny

love it

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Date: 12/09/11 07:04 pm
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