Wooo Weee Brenda girl this was really a great update I'm so happy that Matheson have gotten his point across to his grandfather and if that old man know whats good for him he will do as Matheson ask because I do believe that Matheson will keep that threat he made to him and that knife I've seen that kind before too and yes it very sharp and very scarey too lol anyway looking forward to see what happens next so please update again soon was nice to come and see another one take care have a great evening and a wonderful weekend!!
Reviewer: IndianPrincess Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 20/08/11 12:54 am
And that's what separates mice from men. Get it done Matty!
Excellent chapter. I was on the edge the whole way through
Reviewer: Vita Consuelo Signed [Report This]Date: 19/08/11 08:42 am
I absolutely loved it! It was great seeing that old bastard get exactly what was coming to him. Pity Matheson didn't push that knife into his throat. I love this story like a fat kid loves cake. Still think Ethel should get a colossal beatdown. I don't think she's really learned her lesson. So glad Val and Matheson will be together. Awesome update.
Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed [Report This]Date: 19/08/11 06:27 am
Loved Matheson's plan. Glad he gave grandpa a reality check while playing crazy. Thankfully Tameka is gonna be taken care of.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 19/08/11 06:22 am
Hot Damn!!! This chapter rocks! More pleaseeee.....
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]Date: 19/08/11 05:40 am
Damn...that knife is serious. I'm glad Matheson scared his grandfather straight because William was on some other stuff...
Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed [Report This]Date: 19/08/11 05:23 am
Didn't see that coming. Wow.
Reviewer: crocuslady Signed [Report This]Date: 19/08/11 03:11 am
I loved this update and the look of fear on Gramps face was priceless!!! I still think that he needs to go to jail but Matheson's way was way more entertaining!!! This story is so awesome!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 19/08/11 02:12 am
LOL! Matheson is crazy! Glad Ethel got told told, the old biddy! Glad Meka and Val made up.
Awesome chapter!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: 19/08/11 01:56 am
Great update.
I do think that Matt got the crazy gene after all. I'm surprise that Matt went that route.
I would have hurt Grampa in the pockets to get back at him.
Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
Yes, Mat has that crazy gene. You must remember that Emily's parents were distant cousins! LOL.
Gramps is going to pay. He has to find Tameka a condo, pay her medical bills and come off some cash. He's not a happy camper.
I have to go to NY next week, so it may be a week or so before I can update again unless I can work something in this weekend.
thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Janetbd Signed [Report This]Date: 19/08/11 01:24 am
alright go mat glad he got his grandfather and scared that crap out of his evil ass lol. Go mat thank for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 19/08/11 01:03 am
I've loved this story since Romance FanFiction! Loving the chapters going up so early! Man, didn't think Mattheson had it in him to talk dirty like that! Can't wait to read the next chapters! Oh and the pictures do him and Val justice! Although I thought of Michael Vartan as Matheson, but I like the look of the guy in the pic next to Val. Way to be crazy like your mama! :)
Author's Response:
I am going to update on FP, but I have a beta there and she hasn't read over my last two chapters. I didn't want to hurt her feelings by posting before she read them,I don't think she knows I'm posting here. I have to go to NY next week, so there may not be another update imediately. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: kooshasay Signed [Report This]Date: 19/08/11 12:45 am
What an awesome story! This was a very touching chapter. Ethel is a sick woman!
Thank u for continuing the story
[Report This]Date: 18/08/11 08:39 am
Wow! Awesome chapter.
Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed [Report This]Date: 18/08/11 08:25 am
Really enjoyed this update Brenda girl it was great happy I came on here because I would've missed this one looking forward to see what happens next so please update again soon thanks!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I've updated here but not on FP because it's still being beta'd.
Reviewer: IndianPrincess Anonymous
[Report This]Date: 17/08/11 06:01 pm
Can't wait to how they will deal with that evil old man!
Reviewer: Pris67 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/08/11 04:04 pm
that old man is just evil. Instead of running around spreading chaos everywhere, he needs to be getting right with his Maker.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: 17/08/11 11:47 am
That was an awesome update despite the sad parts. Brought tears to my eyes. Glad Val fought for Meka and has deecided to support her. Hope Meka becomes stronger with treatment.Nana Ethel is pure evil!!!
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 17/08/11 06:42 am
I really love this story. Val has a pretty big heart to have forgiven Tameka despite the way she tried to sabatoge Val's relationship. I still can't like Tameka for what she's done, but I do understand where she's coming from. Ethel just needs a good old fashion butt whoopin and I think Mavis should be the one to give it to her. That woman is a complete psycho. You are such a talented author. I love your stories.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much. Your review means a lot because you are also an awesome writer. I love your story Scar and can't wait for the update.
This whole situation has set Val free. She realized that Ethel really as a problem and that it was never about her other than to punish her for being a product of her father's love for her mother.
Val had always been a little jealous of Tameka because of her looks, but Tameka was always a little jealous of Val because of her smarts and the support she had from Mavis which is why she acted out in the first place. Plus she had never forgiven Val for leaving her (even though Val was a child too and couldn't do anything about her situation) and for looking down on her.
Both characters are going to grow from this situation.
Again, I'm eagerly anticipating your update...
Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed [Report This]Date: 17/08/11 06:34 am
You really should have this book published, and perhaps turn it into a screenplay. Very well written!!!!
Reviewer: Nakia Anonymous [Report This]Date: 17/08/11 02:10 am
Great update.
Very touching. Their grandmother is one sick puppy.
I hope that Tameka gets better soon.
Reviewer: Janetbd Signed [Report This]Date: 16/08/11 11:11 pm
Wonderful, wonderful story! That old hag is just plain crazy how on earth could a grandmother treat her like that is beyond anything I could come up with. But karma is a mf and she will certainly get hers. Please write a story for Tameka, she deserves one. Update soon.
Reviewer: Kaye_kaye77 Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/08/11 10:33 pm
Goodness this is good. I love this story. Could you also make a story for Val's cousin, Tameka?
Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]Date: 16/08/11 10:20 pm
I am one of your biggest fan....keep up the good work
Reviewer: Bredreaway Signed [Report This]Date: 16/08/11 10:00 pm
Aww glad they going to be there for each other and that val told off that bitch of a grandmother off. Thank for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 16/08/11 09:49 pm