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Title: Chapter 40 Facing the Truth

Ugh! Waiting for those updates, please do not neglect us, this has been one of the most inspiring stories I have read in a while, as far seeing myself in one character in particular. Your writing stlye reminds me another author that I came across. In any case I am enjoying this story very much.

Thanks!!



Author's Response:

thanks!  It's easy when you're just copying chapters over.  It takes a little more time to get that muse working!  LOL.  More will come very soon!

Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/08/11 10:32 pm

Title: Chapter 40 Facing the Truth

I am really enjoying this story.

I've loved the frequency of the update.  Now I'm not so sure that I can wait a week for updates.

You've spoilt us.



Author's Response:

Ah, poor baby.  I'll try to accomodate you the best I can.  I got to work though to keep the electricity on!

LOL.  More coming soon, I promise!

Reviewer: Janetbd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/08/11 08:09 pm

Title: Chapter 5 Past Hurts & Present Fire

Wow that was a sweet nice date he took her out on. The flowerrs the movies and the nice dinner and the talk they had. He able to be himself around her and he brings the best out of her too. Thank for the update.

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Date: 09/08/11 07:46 pm

Title: Chapter 4 Myths Everlasting

Wow  they haven't even go out on a date yet and both familes saying to them stay away.  It sad that her grandmother mother was rape no woman should go thu that. I hope they do see each other and get to know one another. thank for the update.

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Date: 09/08/11 07:37 pm

Title: Chapter 3 The Honest Truth

Wow well dad your son really likes Val and I think Val likes him too. I wonder what kind of date he going to take her out on. I think it be a fun one. thank for the update.

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Date: 09/08/11 07:26 pm

Title: Chapter 2 Devils Food & Almond Milk

Wow  talk about crazy. Her boss and matheson is right if she doesn't stop being suck a mean person she going to lose out on alot of things like her job friends and love. thank for the update.

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Date: 09/08/11 07:17 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Preconceived Notions

Wow you got to love these twos I thought she was about to kick his butt and knowing him he would enjoy it lol.  I wonder what going to happen next with these two? Thank for the update.

Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/08/11 07:04 pm

Title: Chapter 1 Preconceived Notions

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Matthew stopped her from drinking the beer that Tameka had bought her so that he could buy her another one and spike it.

Tameka bit off more than she could chew and now she's paying for it.  Matheson's father is going to get his for sure!

Oh, okay. I misunderstood. After I read the rest of the chapters I figured it out. I thought it was Tameka that was going to slip something in her drink. I didn't know Gramps had hired those two thugs to hurt VaLysia. The rape could have gone the other way. Thanks for your creative mind :).

Reviewer: 100%fan Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/08/11 06:42 pm

Title: Chapter 33 Hidden Agenda

Maybe Emily's mother sat there while he conducted business, but Matheson couldn't imagine Emitt Matheson having warm and cozy moments with his daughter while he was conducting business... It should say Langston.



Author's Response:

Thanks for catching that.  I've fixed it. 

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/11 05:24 pm

Title: Chapter 40 Facing the Truth

I am sure you will do a wonderful job and I can't wait til the next chapter.

Meka needs help not only from her doctor but from her cuz if only she could open up to Val but there has been so much dirt swept under the rug that it would take a bull dozer to really clear it all out.

I know Meka has just wanted to be love and she has many self-esteem issues as Val in fact I think she is far off worse then Val where as Val had her Grandma Mavis to fall back on and get all the love she needed Meka had no one.  I feel sorry for her.  I wish she could find the courage to tell Val and Mat what really happened and who is behind what happened at the club.  I don't know if Det. Grant is on the up and up yet.

Hannah was fired up when Emily confronted her about her date and Emilio came over to introduce himself he is definitely the one to keep Hannah in check. I wonder what daddy dearest would think of Emilio let me stop I already know what he would think he didn't even like Gloria and I am sure is was not because of her lack of receptionist skills.

I wish that Ms Emily even though I love her to death would beary the hatchet and I don't mean in Hannah's skull either but let by gones be by gones.

Wonderful update.

Thank you!

Happy writing!



Author's Response:

Thanks for your in depth review.  I love it.  I am sure that Emily and Hannah who both love Matheson will come together once Dad's little deed has been revealed.

I must confess that I haven't even started on Chapt. 41.  I've been too busy bringing my stuff over to the Chamber.  So I know I must get busy.  You all's input helps because it gives me ideas! 

Thanks again!

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/08/11 05:18 pm

Title: Chapter 32 Piecing Things Together

Grams' name is Ethel you mistakenly wrote Edith.

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/11 05:18 pm

Title: Chapter 40 Facing the Truth

Matheson will not be happy that his father know that his grandfather was responsible for the attach on Val and that ho Tameka.  But he will forgive him, but his grandfather is different story.  Brenda I just love this story, and I will be patient.  Great chapters!!!

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/11 05:10 pm

Title: Chapter 40 Facing the Truth

Was a coincidence tha Hannah beau's name is Emilio-male version of Emily?

When is a Tameka going to tell the truth or is she going to make Matheson discover it?

I am going to miss the multiple update :) but I do hope you update soon

Author's Response:

OMG!  I didn't even think about Emilio/Emily LOLOLOLOL!!!!  I just wanted a sexy Latino male for her!

Now you've got my juices flowing here and my minds working...

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/08/11 05:09 pm

Title: Chapter 39 Suspicion and Revelation

Alright Hannah, handle it!!!  This good, now the shoe is on the other foot Hannah, how  does it feel?

Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/11 04:59 pm

Title: Chapter 39 Suspicion and Revelation

I am glad that Hannah got a taste of her own medicine just in reverse.LOL

Tameka is a damn fool! She is sinking deeper and deeper. I am so happy Matheson has his thinking cap on but he should have told the detective about gramps.a

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/08/11 04:50 pm

Title: Chapter 38 Coverup and Conflict

What has Hannah gotten into LOL! She should be thanking Emily.

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/08/11 04:30 pm

Title: Chapter 37 Education and Compensation

Tameka had the opportunity to tell the truth and she didn't. I don't feel bad for her. I am glad Matheson knows how to add; he put two and two together and I can wait for when they go after gramps.


I am glad Hannah found somebody.

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/08/11 04:14 pm

Title: Chapter 36 Wisdom and Regret

Gramps is HORRIBLE! I can't believe he would stoop that low.

Didnt Matthew stop her from drinking the cocktail?

I am glad it wasn't Val that got raped that would've been too traumatizing. Rape is never okay, Tameka was playing with fire and she got burnt. If she wasnt dealing with the devil she wouldn't have been through that.

She was evil and she is paying for it. The punishment may or may not fit the crime, but the crime wouldn't have happened if she was not a willing participant.

Author's Response:

Matthew stopped her from drinking the beer that Tameka had bought her so that he could buy her another one and spike it.

Tameka bit off more than she could chew and now she's paying for it.  Matheson's father is going to get his for sure!

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/08/11 03:57 pm

Title: Chapter 39 Suspicion and Revelation

I wonder if Hannah sees the irony of meeting Emilio's family and his over opinionated Tia Elaina.

She does not approve or discriminates against Hannah b/c of her age where as Hannah was against Val because of her race.  Hmmmmm interesting.

Thank  you!

Happy writing!



Author's Response:

LOL  You are so on point.  Emilio's aunt is acting just like she did.  LOL  It doesn't feel that good, does it Hannah!  LOL.

Thanks for the review. 

Reviewer: Thundakat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/08/11 03:33 pm

Title: Chapter 35 Nightmares and Revelations

All relationships are perfect. I hope they'll work it out. His insecurities and her inexperience are getting in the way.

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/08/11 03:30 pm

Title: Chapter 30 Confronting the Past

Okay I'm a little confused. Why is Langston is referring to Emily as Mavis' mother??? Emily introduced Mavis to him as her mother. Not the other way around. He said : "I think you know what. Your mother told me that we have the same father". I think he meant your DAUGHTER told me that we have the same father? Or am I wrong??? Its a little confusing with him referring Emily as Mavis mother.



Author's Response:

This is a clear case of the mind and the fingers not cooperating!  (LOL)  Thanks for catching my error.  I've corrected it.  HOpefully I didn't confuse you too much....

Thanks again!

Reviewer: Msroos Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/11 03:16 pm

Title: Chapter 34 Matchmaker Matheson

Tameka is a piece of you know what.

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/08/11 03:08 pm

Title: Chapter 40 Facing the Truth

I really don't care if Matheson grandfather is an old man. I hope that he will pay for what he had done in the end. What he did was seriously wrong and dangerous. Tamika was RAPED and Val was almost rape to. This just can't go unpunished. I'm surprised that after William had revealed to Gregory about what he had done to separate Val and Matheson he still allows his father to go to Matheson wedding. A girl was RAPED!!! And I don't care that he is family. Just because he is family doesn't mean that Matheson has to tolerate his grandfathers selfishness. Its obvious that he wasn't thinking about family when he was planning to ruin his own grandchild relationship. And he is not at all affected or sorry for what he had done.

And as for Tamika, it may sound harsh but I don't feel sorry for her at all. If it wasn't because she got raped she wouldn't have care about ruining Val and Matheson relationship. Even now she still haven't told Val or Matheson the truth about what had happened. I hope that when Val finds out that she will stop talking to Tameka. I know that Tameka is still her cousin, but Val is not a saint. Therefore she doesn't have to forgive Tameka right away. It will take time. Yes Tamika is going trough a lot right now, but that's her own fault. She had brought this on herself. Karma is a bitch!! I'm not saying that her being rape is her fault, because it isn't. But if she for a second has consider her own cousin's feeling, she wouldn't have been in this kind of predicament.

I know that we have to learn to forgive, but lets face it. Some things just can't be forgiven. You can't apologize it away, you can't make it right. Maybe with time.  But definitely not when its still so fresh. And especially if someone had gotten badly hurt. Val's cousin will have to live with this scar for the rest of her life.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review.  Tameka is suffering because her bad decision.  She knows that it'll be all over once Val finds out what she did.  She was going to tell her and take her lumps until William Sr had her kidnapped so now she's worried that if he finds out that his little shot didn't work, he'll kill her, so she's keeping quiet (for now.)

Gregory is torn because it is his father, but he's also worried about his mother who is in poor heath.  William Sr. has put him in a lose lose situation so he hasn't made up his mind exactly how he's going to handle his father.

Thanks for the in depth review.  I really appreciate it.  I know I should get started on 41, but I have a busy day here at work.  (LOL)

Reviewer: Anon Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 09/08/11 03:05 pm

Title: Chapter 33 Hidden Agenda

I can't blame gramps for trying to protect his family, but I am glad Matheson handled him.

Reviewer: 100percentFAN Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09/08/11 02:56 pm

Title: Chapter 38 Coverup and Conflict

Go Hannah! Get your freak on chica! You got a man that can handle you.

Loving it!

Thank you!

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Date: 09/08/11 02:44 pm

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