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Title: Chapter 3 The Honest Truth

love this story so far!!

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Date: 27/11/11 11:40 pm

Title: Chapter 45 To Love and To Cherish

Amazing! Really enjoyed reading this story!

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Date: 15/11/11 09:26 am

Title: Chapter 45 To Love and To Cherish

Loved this story, what an evil old man Mathesons' grandfather was, and as for Val's crazy grandmother, she is the type of person who gives black people a bad name.  Fancy hating your grandchildren for something so stupid.  At least their was more good than bad in both their lives, which enabled them to overcome all the crap that was thrown at them. 

Reviewer: Jules Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/11/11 09:35 pm

Title: Chapter 45 To Love and To Cherish

I don't see nothin' wrong with a lil' bump and grind! No truer words have ever been sung! The Matheson-Hendricks family are a bunch of freaks! But there is nothing wrong with that! Yeah for Hannah and Emilio, Yeah for Emily and Gregory, Yeah for Felicia and Bill, Yeah for Grandma Mavis finding her brother Langston and Double Yeah for Valysia and Matheson for finding true love n the face of all the racial and hatefulness in the U.S. and finally Thank You for helping Val forgive Meka! I really enjoyed this story! Oh Yeah,  Where can I get one of those pleasure books! 

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Date: 15/10/11 01:22 am

Title: Chapter 44 Dinner and Destiny

I have heard of "swapping spit," but "swapping cum?" that is a first for me. I may have to get me one of those pleasure books!

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Date: 15/10/11 12:36 am

Title: Chapter 42 The Eye of the Beholder

Old Black People....and I am a black woman who has lived thru some ugly mess myself...but older black people especially women have always had this thing about who was better than whom and it has got to stop until we stop HATING OURSELVES we will never be LOVED by anyone else! Thank you for giving Val a backbone to stand up to that Hateful, Evil, Unhappy woman!

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Date: 14/10/11 11:40 pm

Title: Chapter 39 Suspicion and Revelation

I bet now she understands how Valysia felt when she was giving her the 33rd degree and making assumptions that were unfounded! Now that the shoe is on the other foot she is not too happy about it.! 

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Date: 14/10/11 05:26 am

Title: Chapter 38 Coverup and Conflict

DAYAM!!!!! MS HANNAH HAS GOTTEN HER KITTY STROKED REALLY GOOD AND SHE IS PPPPPPPPPPPUUUUUUURRRRRRRRRRRRRRRING JUST LIKE EMILIO SAID SHE WOULD....OH WHAT A DIFFERENCE A DAY MAKES! 24 LITTLE HOURS! I AM GIVING YOU A 10 JUST FOR THE FACT THAT EMILIO LIKES TO KISS THE KITTY AND MAKE HER PUURRR.  THAT CHAPTER WAS PPPPUUUUURRRFFFFEEECCCCTTTT!

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Date: 14/10/11 04:34 am

Title: Chapter 37 Education and Compensation

Could this be new story? How about a movie? Hannah and the Vauto! Part 1.     Yeah for Hannah! she has finally got herself a man and she will finally GET HER GROOVE ON!

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Date: 14/10/11 03:58 am

Title: Chapter 36 Wisdom and Regret

I kind of feel sorry for that Sorry Ass Tameka! And I never wish rape on anyone even if they are more than deserving of bad things happening to them. I am glad Matheson decided to come clean with his dad about what happened that night to Valysia, and he had the good sense to make his stuborn ass son see the light. That was a surprise of the highest! Anyway Yeah! for the Love birds......now lets get them married without Grandpa!

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Date: 14/10/11 03:33 am

Title: Chapter 25 Back To Reality

R U SURE this story is takes place in the north? (Baltimore, MD?) bcuz everyone sound like they are straight out of Jasper, AL (klu,klux,klan headquarters)! Damn I thought the north was for black people and diversity, hell I can not tell! But I will give all of Matheson's immediate family stood up for Ms. Mavis and Val, and I will give you points for that!

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Date: 12/10/11 11:13 pm

Title: Chapter 24 Rest and Relaxation

GREAT!

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Date: 12/10/11 10:21 pm

Title: Chapter 23 A Day of Bonding

Yes Dr. Frankenstein, the transformation is complete!  Yeah for the old biddy, she is now a new diddy! Thank you Matheson and Valysia for seeing what no one else could! You have a gift with your writing I felt sorry for Hannah, now I am happy for her!

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Date: 12/10/11 10:00 pm

Title: Chapter 22 Moving Forward

That was very sweet and they both needed that confession, so they can move on from there. You did good with this lesson. (Sensai)

 

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Date: 12/10/11 12:14 pm

Title: Chapter 21 Common Ground

In the words of Sophia from the color purple....they is a GOD! Will wonders never cease? That old biddy can be nice and can have a decent conversation without offending anyone....except when she made the comment about "You people can cook!"  

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Date: 12/10/11 05:54 am

Title: Chapter 20 Calm Before the Storm

Can we say Klan Member everyone? What the freak is the deal with all these undercover Klan members? Damn! I am glad Matheson told off old man Barnham, and now he has to put up with that old biddy Hannah! What more couple a live through? Give the poor kid's a break! On a happier note....Matheson is Emily's son! He is a FREAK! and he is going to turn poor Valysia out once he finish breaking her in.....and I do mean breaking her IN!

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Date: 12/10/11 05:30 am

Title: Chapter 19 Frankly Speaking

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Date: 12/10/11 05:01 am

Title: Chapter 18 Family Faceoff

Mrs. Emily strikes again!  Yeah for Mrs. Emily! I was laughing so hard on this chapter I had tears in my eyes! OMG she called her sister in law and gave her directions on how to give her husband a blow job! !  TTTTTOOOOOO MUCH!  very funny chapter, keep it up! Emily/Valysia 10 and Hannah/William 0, but i'll give william a 0.5 for being willing to eat some pussy! 

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Date: 12/10/11 04:46 am

Title: Chapter 17 A Much Needed Vacation

Dayam! if that Emily didn't just make that old biddy shut up with her recollection of the sex she had the night before....I almost spit on my computer screen when I read i! It was hilarious! I give you a ten just for the remembered sex, and the fact that Hannah got her ass told off, by not only her sister in law, but her nephew too!When Emily asked her brother in law if his wife gave good head, I almost pissed my pants! Matheson/Emily 10 Hannah/William 0.

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Date: 12/10/11 04:28 am

Title: Chapter 16 Confrontation and Conflict

How do you say mean old bitch in choctaw? However you say, I like it better in english. Mean Old Bitch! Matteson hit the nail on the head by stating she was jealous of Valysia. And that skank of all skank Tameka, what can you say? I love the love between Matt and Val, keep them together please. Help them fight the family bigotry together. Make them strong and well loved!

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Date: 12/10/11 03:57 am

Title: Chapter 13 Unexpected Vacation

what is the word for nasty, stanky, filthy, no good, low down dirty dogs namde Tameka?  I believe the word I am looking for is SLUT!!!! Yeah that's the one! She's a HO!!! I am glad Matteson could resist her nasty girl charms! She is not the Vanity six type of nasty girl, she is a scum licking dog type of nasty girl! 

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Date: 11/10/11 11:09 pm

Title: Chapter 12 Passion Night.

Fainted? What the Hell? Please don't tell me the man has a heart condition that he knew nothing about? OH MY GOODNESS! I heard good sex would do that to you!

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Date: 07/10/11 07:21 am

Title: Chapter 9 Curiosity and Compromise

Ahhh, ain't that sweet? Mutual Masterbation! Nothing like having a man watch you while you rub one out! Wow that is sooooo sexy! And how sexy was that for her to give him head for the first time! Practice makes perfect!

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Date: 07/10/11 06:18 am

Title: Chapter 8 Feelings and Fears

That's right Ms. Emily! You stand tall and tell that man to hold his tongue, and he better apologize to their future daughter in law, Mavis and Herself for being so disrespectful to them. She meant it when she said, Mavis is the only Mother she has ever known and will not stand for her family to be disparaged! You Go Ms. Emily!

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Date: 07/10/11 05:56 am

Title: Chapter 7 Facing the Flack

There is always one that makes a mess of everything! I guess he just had to voice his opinion in the restaurant! And for the waiter to take the other guys side was ridiculous! Enough of the trash, lets talk about the Mr. Matheson Hendrix who just went down on his new girl friend and made her toes curl! Wow! Now he has to confront his parents with their bigotry. Eventhough they swear, they are not prejudice! I give you a 9 for Matheson standing up to the guy in the restuarant and 10 for the "Down South" Action! Lot's of guys don't want to do that if there is a jungle in the valley! 

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Date: 07/10/11 05:27 am

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