Be the Man Matheson! Stand up to your parents and tell them you want to be with no just a "woman of color".....But you want to be with A Dark Skinned, Kinky Haired, Full Lipped Black Woman! I bet they will not know what to do! Be the MAN! and Val, don't let anyone change your mind about this man, if he is who want to be with then BE WITH HIM!!!!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed
[Report This]Date: 06/10/11 09:21 pm
Well, Well, Well! The truth finally comes out! Oh yeah it's alright for the blacks to raise our children and keep our homes looking beautiful, but you better not think about dating and God forbid marrying one of them, then the real white folks come out! You can rape them but you can't love them! Damn! Poor Mattheson and VaLysia!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 06/10/11 08:47 pm
Who is Matheson trying to convince? He can keep telling himself that until he is blue in the face but we all know he likes him some of that black girl if nothing else!
Reviewer: KittyOh48 Signed [Report This]Date: 06/10/11 08:31 pm
I loved this story! I started reading this on fictionpress and followed it over here. It was actually your story that introduced me to this website. I love the characters and I would hope that there's a sequel in the future. I don't think this is the ending for Val and Matheson
Reviewer: tahti-bunny Signed [Report This]Date: 02/10/11 04:14 am
That was awesome!! Matheson and Val both surprised me...lol! That was a switch.
I'm glad Mavis and Langston have each other in their golden years. It kind of fits, and now Mavis wont be alone since Val is just married.
Emily is Emily!
Well done!!
Reviewer: flikchick Signed [Report This]Date: 29/09/11 09:37 pm
What a beautiful story. Thank you so much for sharing your gift with us. I thorougly enjoyed it!!!
Reviewer: Happy2bNappy Signed [Report This]Date: 28/09/11 07:17 am
well, I'll say! Val and Matheson are freaks. And Mom ain't too bad herself. I really enjoyed this story. well done, Chica.
Reviewer: BellaChica Signed [Report This]Date: 27/09/11 11:43 am
I absolutely loved this story. TY for sharing. Hope to read more stories from you in the future.
Reviewer: baha_malo Signed [Report This]Date: 27/09/11 05:52 am
A great, beautiful story from beginning to end. Thank you so much for sharing it with us!! Now about this chapter...TOO HAWT! I loved it!
Reviewer: Elizablu Signed [Report This]Date: 27/09/11 03:24 am
Awesome!!! I vote for their to be a sequel!!!
Reviewer: pmgayles Signed [Report This]Date: 27/09/11 03:07 am
Thanks for a great update.
Reviewer: Divsionred Signed [Report This]Date: 27/09/11 02:28 am
Wonderful. .This family was funny.
Reviewer: Moni Anonymous [Report This]Date: 27/09/11 02:18 am
This was steamy!!!! Very erotic and taboo, I never would have expected this from you Ms. Brenda! Great job and maybe the next sequel will be more focused on Val's cousin or Matheson's Aunt and her new beau!!!
Author's Response:
OK I admit that I do have a nasty side. LOL Hey I've been married 30 years today. I've heard it all.
I'm going to give it a break for now. I've never taken over a year writing a story and I may come back to it later. Right now my muse is cooking something new up and I'm working on that as well as "Good Things"
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: BossLady Signed [Report This]Date: 27/09/11 01:50 am
FANBLOODYTASTIC writing! absolutely love these characters and look forward to a sequel!
Reviewer: Mary P Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/09/11 11:43 pm
Ahhhh! That was wonderful. Emily got her family she so desperate desired. Hopefully now the baby that she wants will be on it's way at least that is what Mat said.
Matheson finally got his woman as his wife and vice versa for Val. May the have many blessngs and much happiness in their years to come and I feel sorry for any who try to break that up. After all Matheson is his mother's son. *grin*
Mavis finally knows about her mother and father's relationship has a new brother, niece and grand-nephews their parents would have wanted their closness too bad it could not be achived when they were young.
Great story thank you so much for sharing it.
Congrats again on the upcoming wedding have fun. I hope the weather holds out as well but as you said there is a backup in place.
Author's Response:
Thanks Thundakat! I'm glad everyone enjoyed it, but I need to get a break. My muse has been struggling with SY because I'd been writing it for so long.
thanks for always giving such lovely reviews!
Reviewer: Thundakat Signed [Report This]Date: 26/09/11 11:03 pm
Brenda thanks for this awesome story!!!! I'm sorry to see it all end. I hope you give us a sequel or just another awesome story someday very soon....
Reviewer: LadyeT Signed [Report This]Date: 26/09/11 10:43 pm
I am so said it's over, but happy there could be a sequel or series. This was another wonderful story.
Thanks for writing it.
Reviewer: jovanfan4evr Signed [Report This]Date: 26/09/11 10:27 pm
I loved this story. It is absolutely amazing, and I am craving for a sequel or an epilogue of some sort.
Date: 26/09/11 09:45 pm
I loved this story. It is absolutely amazing, and I am craving for a sequel or an epilogue of some sort.
Reviewer: Adi Milano Signed [Report This]Date: 26/09/11 09:45 pm
Wow I hope to see a sequel to this story it a very good story and so glad those two got married. Emily is a trip for sure lol I wonder what going to happen next babies? I hope so nice end to this story and thank for the update.
Reviewer: wwefanforlife Signed [Report This]Date: 26/09/11 08:35 pm
Damn the wedding night was absolutly blissfull with a full inferno of heat to go along with val and matheson whoo that was sooo much heat felt like i ate some peepers drenched in louisianna hot sauce whoo just an absolutly beatiful story loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: hershey_kisses Signed [Report This]Date: 26/09/11 06:12 pm
wow Mat created a monster but that was so hot & sex him wanmting to posses all of her body. fingers crossed 4 a sequel nowing them he probly got her pregnant their honeymoon well unti then 2da
Reviewer: kvgurl Anonymous [Report This]Date: 26/09/11 05:58 pm
Excellent update!!! Can't wait to see what happens next!!!
Reviewer: BossLady Signed [Report This]Date: 14/09/11 10:12 pm
Thanks for the update.. that dinner party had me LMAO... Emily is a RIOT and I love how she doesn't hold her tounge for anyone... and whhen Gregory said "Son if the talk too much, stick something in their mouth" that was just PRICLESS, it had me ROTFLMAO.
Again, great update, and can't wait for the wedding.
Reviewer: lady liberty Anonymous [Report This]Date: 13/09/11 10:25 pm
trouble is brewing for them. I can see them getting a lot of negative feedback.
Reviewer: bayoumomma Signed [Report This]Date: 13/09/11 08:47 pm